Kudzie Janfakɛla min ɲɛda ye ba kelen ye Basic Information Name: Kuzdie Niatama Aliases: Mutendi, Thabo, Onias, Vusa Race: Songaskian Age: 62 (appears as a 40 year old Songaskian) Gender: Male Eye Colour: Amber | Red (Vampiric) Core Concept Kudzie has turned his back to the sun since becoming a vampire. Once a follower of Mussaktu, he is now a follower of the void and a practitioner of the Cult of the Ageless Kudzie has turned his back on his people, rejecting their faith and state. But in the end he is devout to the way of life and in some cases an extremist. He is a devotee to the anti-undead philosophy found in the Masaya and wishes to continue that. Proficiencies Strength: 7 Coward Pack Pursuer Pack Brutalist Pack Skirmisher Pack Duelist Pack Hunter Pack Heavy Pack Constitution: 3 Block Pack Counterplay Pack Resilience Pack Wisdom: 0 Dexterity: 3 Escape Pack Slight of Hand Pack Parkour Pack Magic: 0 Charisma: 1 Stupid Luck Pack Commutable Points: Afflicted Predator Pack Afflicted Evasion Pack Afflicted Cursemaster Pack Artificer Barricade Pack Abilities Blooded Vampire Specials - Active Songaskian Specails Songaskian Abilities: Altered Power Subjugation Immune Armour Summon Flame Immune Strength Technique Parry Disarming Strike Crocodile Tears Leaping Charge Pinning Throw Concussive Strike Knockback Sweep Constitution Shield Block Range Counter Dexterity Backup Shot Commutable Instant Leap Quick Cover Misdirection Power Curse Languages Common (Free) Sofaal (Native) Dragon Speach (Songaskian Special) Appearance Information Kudzie - Normal Kudzie is a realitively lanky Songakian with thick dreadlocks and two horns that extend from above his forehead, over the top of his head before thinning down to a point. Kudzie often wears a mask to publicly show his status as a traitor to the Masaya and Mussaktu. He likes to keep his eyes red. Mutendi - Vampiric Form Mutendi is Kudzie's vampiric from. It is not too different from his normal self. The notable features are a red smoke that will seep from his mask, scorpion tails that will slip in and out of his deadlocks and tawhroon-like markings that will move around his skin and appear a glowing voidly red. Life Story Childhood Kudzie was born into lower class family within the pearly city of Diernali and lived a relatively standard childhood for someone in his position. Adolescence Kudzie's family worked around the gold mines where hordes of undead would work the mine. Here he began to develop opinions on what to do with them. Early Adulthood After his compulsory military service he became a vampire and began to lurk around Diernali around the mines, picking off small groups of undead. Current After being chased out of the pearly cities, Kudzie looked elsewhere and found Regalia, a city full of strife and chaos, maybe a place he could continue. - Sisi bɛ kuma ne fɛ ani ne ka miiriliw bɛ maanaw fɔ ne ye
This is quite the pious approach to religion. Please expand upon this devotion with a sentence or two of justification. This life story is a wee bit short for a character of this age. Please expanding upon it some more. There's also a couple of spelling errors that you might want to have a quick fix at. Make these edits in Purple and tag me when complete @Naz_Cook!
Sorry! Missed this. Next time, be sure to tag me when you want a re-review: I won't see it otherwise. But! Approved!
Approved! But in keep in mind, your use of sorcery is gonna be restricted so long as you're afflicted.
@Mollymock Changed proficiencies and changed abilities section for the vampire, racial, and abilities updates