Jared

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  1. JaxxBoi271

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    Name - Jared Williams Smith
    Race - Kathar
    Age - 17
    Gender - Male
    Eye color- blue

    Jared Williams smith works on becoming an actor for people to help bring light on dark days. Although he wants to be an actor he also is a kathar who believes in both the void and Hephaestus the greek god of fire. Jared is also the type of person who believes everyone is good and a friend until they turn there backs on him, then he is only heartbroken.

    Level - 3
    strength- 12
    Blade pack

    Dexterity- 16
    Disguise pack

    Constitution - 14
    Light shielding pack

    Intelligence- 15
    Wisdom - 14
    Charisma - 15
    Magic- 2
    Wind magic pack
     
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    Hey thanks for the advice I changed my thing take a look and tell me what you think please and also good luck to you too my friend
     
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    FireFan96 Ever present, Ever seeing Staff Member Lore2

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    It's getting there, but we'll want a 1:1 format to the template found here: https://forums.massivecraft.com/threads/character-applications-template.54735/

    So essentially, Languages, Appearance Information, and Life Story are still missing. Having the headings for all the sections will help reviewers as well.
     

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