Spoiler: Relationships Kin || family Allynna Marais ✤ Worry Daughter ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇 Bond Larsen Marais ✤ Baby Son ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤ Bond Dear Companions|| Close friendsAeda Kee'lyth ✤ Great-Mother ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Bond Si'Zralli ✤ Medic in Crime ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤ Trust Narla ✤ My Hope ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust Allies|| friends and acquaintancesFaran Hasylas ✤ Welcomer ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust Kayhdin Kee'lyth ✤ Jokester ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Haszlal ✤ Orca ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust Theo Kee'lyth ✤ Open Hands ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Tullion Kearney ✤ Aeda's Husband ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust Cazna Gahan ✤ Wise Words ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust Dathil ✤ Bundle Joy ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Hera Von Hal ✤ Guidance ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust Henrich Von Schwarzkrau✤ Employer ⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Eletha Darrath ✤ Snake Fright ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Fiorella Peirgarten ✤ The Starter of Dreams ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Hy'riss✤ Strong Arm ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Tim Burros ✤ Blondie Unionist ⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Saren ✤ Smiling Canine ⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Sivrid Sorenvik ✤ True Direction ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇 Trust Aailyah Hithaerben ✤ Qadir Medic ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Valenia Aetris ✤ Child's Voice ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust Harlow Ketch✤ Bossy Man ⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Revna✤ Tough Url ⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust Argo ✤ Elder ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust
App looks great! Your aesthetics are MAD cute and honestly making me want to redo my own apps. APPROVED
VERY GOOD There's just two things I need clarified before I can approve this: You currently have 50 points listed as spent, but have only invested 47 points. Would you like the unspent 3 to remain uninvested for IC learning, or would you like to put them into something? Please add a blurb in the sorcery section specifying which plane Sage's magic comes from (Void/Exist) That's all! Go ahead and tag me once you've done that and I can approve it ASAP :D
@WildSages my review: Increase the font size. It's hard to read on my 17.3-inch display, and the PC is superior to mobile in all aspects. I'd just set the age at 29. There is not a notable difference in appearance between 25 and 29. I would update the Languages to fit some minor shadow edits on the wiki, such as Saan and d'Ithanie. Remove the Progression Information section. It doesn't exist. tag me when you've made these changes
This section should be placed under the proficiency/ability/language information. A bit pedantic but it's a bit confusing when I scroll down there to look but it isn't there. Just copy and paste it down there.
Hello there. Plains Elven, Burdi, and Allorn are all languages that don't actually exist anymore, and you don't have a Linguist Pack where you attain these. I'd fix this so it just says Saan+Common instead, or invest in the West Linguist Pack. Just so you're aware, you do get another seven Specials to choose from. 14/21. You also get the Pet Husbandry Pack for free, which I would list down here with (Homehappy Special) in parentheses. It doesn't confer a free Charisma point alongside it, to note, however. Aside from that, Izel sheet look good. Mark changes in blue and @Tag me when all set.
Oh hyello. You have 21, not 20 here. Which is fine though, obviously. You've also got 7/8 here, so I would just fix that little flavor number. Both of those are just little minor things though. Also, I think you might have a lot of the application in bullet points, which might be why it's doing weird formatting things? If you're not already editing stuff using "More Options..." in the bottom right of your replies, you definitely should be. But, yeah, I'm not sure, XenForo is a mysterious entity beyond the understanding of most mortals. Re-approved!
