Spoiler: Theme Song Basic Information Name: Agda Jönsson Age: 28 Gender: Female Race: Northland Ailor Culture: Velheim Preferred Weapon: Longneck Rifled Muskete Basic Information A Northern Crack shot sniper, who never misses a shot, you don't want to be on the other end of her scope, and you definably don't want to be considered her enemy. Although if you consider someone else your enemy, she is willing to take care of that for a price. Skill Information (Skill Points 14/14) Dexterity: 7 -Longneck Pack -Burglary Pack -Stealth Pack -Parkour Pack -Trip Wire Pack -Trailing Pack -Pistol Pack Strength: 7 -Axe Pack -Improvised Weapon Pack -Short Blade Pack -Blades Pack Spoiler: Abilties Firearms Longneck Pack Paralyzing Shot Mundane Technique Emote Range Grants the user The user must kneel and take aim to pinpoint either the left arm or right arm of a Target. After aiming, the shot is fired, and that specific limb on that person is Paralyzed for 5 minutes and receives a bleeding wound. This Mundane Technique has a 1 Hour Cooldown. Pistol Pack Pinning Shot Mundane Technique Emote Range Grants the user This Mundane Technique counts as a Channeled Ability, meaning no other Abilities can be used while it is being maintained. So long as the Target is not behind cover, they become unable to move. They can still use Abilities and be aware of their surroundings, they just cannot move. This Mundane Technique does no Damage, but can be upheld indefinitely. The user can move at walking speed while Channeling, but the Channel is interrupted if the user is Attacked or Displaced. The user cannot switch Targets and this Mundane Technique has a 1 minute cooldown after the Channel was Canceled. Bow Tripwire Pack Tripwire Mundane Technique Emote Range Grants the user The user shoots a series of Tripwire Shots around themselves that net/wire/web an area in Emote Distance around them. This applies the Approach Debuff on anyone who attempts to move in their direction. It does not impede movement of foes or allies in any other direction except when running straight at the user. Instead of running, others must walk at normal walking speed, also nullifying Asha Speed. The Approach Debuff is active for 3 minutes, and moves with the user if they move, always applying in Emote Distance. This Ability has a 10 minute Cooldown. Trailing Pack Trailing Shot Mundane Technique Emote Range Grants the user The user hits the Target with a Trailing Shot, which causes them to leak a trail fluid that only the user can see. The Target knows they are being tracked also. This Tracking lasts for 30 minutes after the Target was hit, after which it automatically fades. Anyone the Target interacts with physically is also covered in the trailing fluid, but does not create a trail of their own. This Mundane Technique has a 1 hour Cooldown. Melee Weapons Unarmed Pack Unarmed Dodge Mundane Technique Emote Range means that it can target anyone who is within Emote Range (thus who can see your emotes when you use them). Emote Range Grants the user Unarmed Dodge allows the user to have 1 guaranteed Dodge Counter. A Dodge Counter can be consumed to avoid a Melee attack (Not a Melee Mundane Technique!) or Mundane Technique from the Ranged Weapon Point Buy Category. The 1 Dodge Counter refreshes at Server restart, but cannot refresh mid Combat Roleplay. Blades Pack Technique Parry allows the user to Counter an incoming Mundane Technique used on them from the Melee or Ranged Weapon Point Buy Categories. This Mundane Technique has a 60 minute cooldown. Short Blade Pack Pinning Throw Mundane Technique Emote Range means that it can target anyone who is within Emote Range (thus who can see your emotes when you use them). Emote Range Grants the user Pinning Throw allows the user to throw a Short Blade (it does not have to be their main hand weapon, it can also be a pocket knife) to pin a person against a wall or floor surface for long enough to allow the user to chain up another Mundane Technique or attack Emote. Note, this does not Stun the Target, they are still able to fight back, just not dodge or escape. This Mundane Technique has a 30 minute cooldown. If the user doesn't attack or intend to attack, the target is freed after a minute. Axe Pack Battle Hunger Mundane Technique Self Range means that it applies to the user themselves, or something they can directly touch after casting it. Self Grants the user While in Combat, the user can activate Battle Hunger. Battle Hunger gives the user +1 Strength (that cannot break the limit) and loses -2 Constitution (that can go into negative if the user has 0 Constitution, neither cause gain or loss of Packs). This effect cannot be removed until the Combat Roleplay is done, but it can be activated during the next without Cooldown. Additionally, while Battle Hunger is active, any Abilities or Mundane Techniques used on the user that cause the user to move slower or be unable to run, have these effects instead ignored. Improvised Weapon Pack Chuck and Run Mundane Technique Emote Range means that it can target anyone who is within Emote Range (thus who can see your emotes when you use them). Emote Range Grants the user Chuck and Run allows the user to instantly toss their improvised weapon as a distraction or obstacle against opponents, and then make a run for it. This Mundane Technique only works if the user is up against 2 opponents, if any more opponents are present, the user is unable to guaranteed run away. If however no more than 2 are present in a fight against the user, and this Mundane Technique is used, they escape guaranteed. When using this Mundane Technique, the user must run away and cannot turn back into conflict. This Mundane Technique has a 24 hour Cooldown. Languages Weakish Common Nytalsk (Learned at birth) Visual Information Eyes Color: Multi Colored Hair Color: White Hair Style: Messy, Disorganized Skin Color: Fair Clothing: Multi Cultured, she does not care about her appearance to much Height: 5'1 Personality Character Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Personality type: Commander Religion: Unionism 2/10 Life Story 1-10: Agda Häyhä was born in the lands of Nordstag, She was born to a family of 2 in a small cabin in the wilderness. From a young age, she was taught how to hunt by her father. Hunting was what put food on the family's table. During this time she began to master the art of the Crossbow. He lived a peaceful life till she turned 11. 13-18: At 13, her parents let him go on a hunt by himself, she spent 2 days and nights at the hunt, althoug apond returning she found her parents dead and the home burned. She does not know what exactly happens, but she found everything in she house gone, so she believes that it was raiders. After that Agda was all alone, she had to use the wilderness to survive, she went many nights without food, almost starving. But despite this she was able to survive in the wilderness of the Northern Belt, she used a bow to hunt, reusing every arrow she had. 18-25: Agda Häyhä had joined a nomad band at 18, staying with them, hunting with them, living with them. She found many good friends during this time, she was ready to spend the rest of her life within this band. It was during this time she found the Longneck rifled muskete on the dead corpse of what looked to be Regalian sailors blown off course. They had suprisingly made it quite inland before dying of the cold. She found the weapon extremely useful in hunts, and found a large supply of ammo for it when she found the ship reck at shore. 25-28: It all went wrong in a hike through a mountain with her band, it all happened so suddenly, a sudden avalanche hit the group, and in seconds everyone was dead. She only barely made it out, everyone else on the other hand, did not. The band was practically completely destroyed in mere seconds, this being the second tragedy of her life, she retreated into a major settlement, unwilling to go out with another nomad band. She became a hitman for hire, using her hunting skills to hunt men instead of game, although she never killed. During one of these jobs, the target retreated on a ship departing. Agda made it on the ship, although not before it departed. On the bright side, she was going to a place where she surely will get more business. Spoiler: Ooo, whats this
@ThePear Claiming for review! > Stealth Rouge: 11 You have invested 51 points, whereas you only have 50 available to you. Please drop 1 point from one of the proficiencies or age the character up a year. > Please add another one to two paragraphs to the lifestory. Make these adjustments and tag me when you're done!
Looks good! Just a heads up, you have a minor typo at the top: "Age: 2". It's super funny but you'll probably wanna change it. Otherwise no issues! APPROVED
