Keavy

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  1. gnomery

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    BASICS
    Full Name: Sive Gobel Aldane
    Prefers the pseudonym ‘Keavy’
    Race: Ailor
    Age: 20
    Gender: Female

    She/her
    Eye Color: Red, blue in glamour


    CONCEPT

    Keavy lives for the thrill and accompanying popularity. Her moralistic nature gained after time in Regalia has begun to slip upon a return to her home city, Hallonq- rife with crime and conflict. Now, she has returned, reinvigorated with a desire to make herself known in the city once again. In recent times, her faith has been guided into Unionism, though has abandoned any religiosity with recent vampiric infection.


    STATS

    [4 STR]
    Duelist
    Pursuer
    Frenzy
    Climber

    [1 CON]
    Counterplay
    [1 WIS]
    Automaton - Servotech
    A cheap toy gifted by an old friend. [Character sheet here.]
    Specials: Berserk Patent, Foam-Mix Patent
    [6 DEX]
    Pickpocket
    Parkour
    Embargo
    Cortes Fame
    Blunt-Tip
    Escape

    [1 MAG - Void]
    School of Casting

    Specials

    Chain Break
    Fire Element
    Flesh Element
    Vampirism Commutable Points
    Afflicted Predator
    Afflicted Heartbeat
    Afflicted Evasion
    School of Mimicry [Prison Break, Altered Voice, Decay Element]
    [1 CHA]
    State Saboteur
    Abilities
    Blooded Vampire
    Vampire Form: Keavy is recognizable, appearing largely the same, though instead sports vile yellow-green skin and blood-rot colored eyes. A furred, gerbil-like tail sprouts from her lower back as well.
    Languages
    Common [Free]
    Droque [Native]


    VISUALS

    Keavy has a purposeful scar left vertically across her face with the intention being a tough visage. She appears to have mutations in the form of horns and sharp teeth, as well as rat-like hands, covered in fur and clawed to boot. A number of faded tattoos are etched alongside the scars on her skin.

    Keavy is stunted in height and does not even reach five feet, but has a wiry, toned build. Her skin is tan and scar-torn, and her hair is an auburn-tinged brown, typically kept short in length. She wears a mean mug as a resting face, but is very outwardly expressive.


    HISTORY

    Keavy was born to a young, average Hallonq slummer mother and Blackmark mercenary father, a Gallovian man. Her mother was ousted from the house by her father due to her infidelity, leaving Keavy and her older brother to be raised by their father and the many temporary girlfriends he brought home throughout her life.

    Her adolescence was transient and followed her father’s mercenary work, though found regular stationing in Hallonq. This is where Keavy adopted her nickname, originating in a gang she keeps contact with to this day.

    Keavy moved to Regalia to follow her brother’s invitation after he was kicked out from their gang, and saw it all - her partner was executed, she survived a vampire occupation, and she sold her soul.

    Erasing sections and lengths of her memory with an Ailor's dark empathy, Keavy spent some time in Hallonq to spark a new lust for life before returning to Regalia with ambition of fame and glory.
     
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    @Bellarmina
    need re-review for race change to half kathar/half cielothar, addition of crimson witch affliction, and removal of the power swap spell I forget what its called ngl.
     
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    @Bellarmina need a rereview for new racial abilities w/ the half race update
     
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    also did some proficiency updating
     
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    @Bellarmina updated sheet to be wilder slizzar instead of half kathar, surprisingly minor changes
     
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    @Bellarmina need a rereview for vampirism :) also a little bit of linguistics as a treat
     
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    Taking this app for Re-Review, expect a reply shortly! @Cunoesse
     
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    Since the Wyrden bloodline's Base Kit has the ability Blood Eyes 3, your character would consistently have red eyes, regardless of any mutations, shifts, or other appearance-altering abilities (unless they specifically state being able to hide Blood Eyes 3).

    Other than that, you're totally set! Tag me once done. :) @Cunoesse
     
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    forgot about her birth form existing sorry lol, edits made
     
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    @microwavemmm went ahead and updated to new format, but i made proficiency updates in bloo. basically what changed:
    • removed rogue gift 4
    • removed darkness 1
    • removed katharic
    • removed shielding
    • some other point finagling, most notably put 12 more points in utility ranged
    • added writing art for ic developments in interest
    • added olvomism genetics to be a bonafied manlet
    • most of these edits are due to in character loss in skill and interest put elsewhere
    everything else remains consistent with old format, backstory hasnt changed, etc. if you spot anything tho lemme know
     
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    Just a couple quick things! @Cunoesse

    • When reproducing with a Non-Slizzar, the Slizzar has twins: one full Slizzar, and one full race child of the other parent's Race. Half Slizzar do not exist.
    • You haven't put in the points to invest in this pack!
    Tag me once the appropriate edits have been made. :]
     
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    it is listed that her race is Wilder Slizzar, this is just phrased as 'half slizzar' because her father is slizzar, and her mother is cielothar. gonna clarify anyway, but don't see this as entirely needed clarification.

    secondly, i did put points in to invest the pack-
    @microwavemmm
     
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    • Whoops, I was only looking at the Roguery Abilities & somehow missed the separate Pack investment, my mistake. No more 5 am reviews for me.
    Approved. @Cunoesse
     
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    wait a minute i know that person
     
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    @microwavemmm hey man i am bringing keavy back for occasional cameos. just updating writing in backstory overall, same basic story, and slizzar update. thanks boss
    also replaced elemental control 4 with an analogue to previous slizzar abilities
     
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    @microwavemmm hey. prof update. no big changes other than that
     
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    Complete rewrite pls review!
     
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    Reviewed and approved.
     
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    @Jouster made her a human + stat changes
     
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    Reapproved! Try to maintain consistency where possible. Besides that, the application is perfect.
     
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    profs redone, minor details tweaked, review needed :D
     
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    adding mecha keavy with update (removed protectorate pack and replaced with automaton) @ChapterDeath
     
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    @ChapterDeath rereview for vampirism + added an athletics point :- D
     
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