Basic Information (Required) Eden Matthias Eisen Age: 29 Gender: Firm Race: Beguiled Kathar Sexuality: Homosexual Eyes: Gold with Red Limbal Rings(Body Arkenborn) Core Concept Eden is a follower of Armas, believing the world only needs beautiful children and the best bloodline to exist. Eden is a Kathar entertainer, they make use of their skills as a recent graduate of the Door-Inner Huis College to create appeal to get what he wants. Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 12/14 Strength: 6 Steady Body Pinning Throw Diving Tackle Weapon Throw Technique Parry Knockback Sweep Constitution: Wisdom:6(Doyentech) Tech Armory Tech Defense Tech Stim Tech Lasso Tech Barrier Hookshot Charisma: Magic: Dexterity:2 Sharp Reflexes Escape Artist Languages Common Katharic Special Traits/Spells/Mutations [Kathar Racials] [Body Silven Abilities} Visual Information Eden is 6 foot and 6 inches with a sculpted body type from years of dance and body care. Their skin is a smoky grey, Eden commonly wears a tight-fitting shirt that shows off his chest and abdomen with a pair of brown pants and boots. Eden has a body of Doyentech, but covertly covered by the innate power his sire granted him. Every each of his body has been changed with doyentech, from his eyes to his feet. Only his hair is the only natural thing on him.
@NoctisUmbra I apologize for the delay, it ended up being multiple sets of twenty four hours. Regardless, Everything seems to be in order, approved.
@NoctisUmbra After reviewing your application, there are a few things that require modification Please mark down the three points invested in Clockwork Technik Pack I did not notice this on the first review, so this is my fault but in order to use the +5 racial boost on a Hobby Proficiency, you must spend 10 in that hobby first, not five. You have hobby points that you can use to do this, or move it somewhere else. My apologies for the confusion. Tag me once you have made the changes and I'll review it once more.
@NoctisUmbra Ah I see what I misread now, Everything seems to be in order once you edit on the Clockwork Technik Pack Point Buy, Approved.
@Follower I did way with my remaining points and moved some points to add a spell, changes in red Originally had 4 points in fist, now 8 17 physical now 21
@NoctisUmbra Sorry, was feeling under the weather and must have missed it. Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
Moved [Abyssal Body 2] up with basic information to make it more seen and use it as an environment emote when he's in it.
@Follower Update for engineering and language update, also move some points around. All changes are marked in red for an easier time for you.
@NoctisUmbra After reviewing your application, a few things require correction: You seem to have listed Altalar as a language, but haven't invested points in Linguistics. Please correct this. Once you have made the appropriate changes, tag me and I will review it once more.
@Follower Dropped a lot of the combat proficiencies to go in more on an entertainer concept by adding Circus Arts for the added flexibility with Light Ranged being only the most basic ability of light shot to defend himself if needed.
@Lizmun Pssst, Lizmun. Updated to the new system with core Identity and made him a Body Silven for the alter stuff if it it goes with Crimson Witch
@NoctisUmbra due to crimson witch being a permanent affliction, you cannot be both crimson witch and silven.
NGL, kind of forgot about that. Edited it without CW, I feel like bod Silven is more in tune with their original concept of being an entertainer than a rogue/sage feel of Odella
