╔═══*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══╗ General Christina Vormelker ══════════════✠══════════════ ┍-----------»«----══════║⇹║══════----»«-----------┑ ╔════════════════════ - ‹⋅ ✠ ⋅› - ════════════════════╗ ╚════════════════════ - ‹⋅ ✠ ⋅› - ════════════════════╝ ┖-----------»«----══════║⇹║══════----»«-----------┙ "An army without a leader is a mob, a battle without a plan is a massacre" Spoiler: Theme Character Information Full Name: Christina Vormelker Race: Stateland Ailor Age: 27 Sex: Female Sexuality: Prussian Preferred Weapon: Officer Sword Eye Color: Blue ══════════════✠══════════════ Core Concept Unionism 7/10: This is their primary religion via birth right alone, she is a believer in Unionism, and holds its values, to heart, but she does not put religion in front of everything else, she is willing to not let religion completely constrain her when pursuing her ambitions, but she will never say that outloud. A energetic young general, recently being promoted to the rank general, her skill helped greatly in her promotion, yet she does posses great potential in leadership. She is direct in her responses, and extremely militaristic. ══════════════✠══════════════ Proficiency Information Point Buy (14/14) |Charisma-Point-Buy: 8| (State General) (State Commander Pack) (Mount Husbandry) -Gôdive Horse- (Empire Linguistics Pack) |Strength-Point-Buy: 5| (Thin Blades Pack) (Unarmed Pack) (Short Blades Pack) |Dexterity-Point-Buy:1| (Pistol Pack) Spoiler: Abilities Thin Blades Pack Crippling Strike allows the user to land an extremely pinpoint strike that provides a Crippled debuff to the Target. This Debuff prevents them from using any Channel based Abilities or Channel based Mundane Techniques for 10 minutes. This Mundane Technique has a 30 minute cooldown. Unarmed Pack Unarmed Dodge allows the user to have 1 guaranteed Dodge Counter. A Dodge Counter can be consumed to avoid a Melee attack (Not a Melee Mundane Technique!) or Mundane Technique from the Ranged Weapon Point Buy Category. The 1 Dodge Counter refreshes at Server restart, but cannot refresh mid Combat Roleplay. Pistol Pack Pinning Shot Mundane Technique Emote Range Grants the user This Mundane Technique counts as a Channeled Ability, meaning no other Abilities can be used while it is being maintained. So long as the Target is not behind cover, they become unable to move. They can still use Abilities and be aware of their surroundings, they just cannot move. This Mundane Technique does no Damage, but can be upheld indefinitely. The user can move at walking speed while Channeling, but the Channel is interrupted if the user is Attacked or Displaced. The user cannot switch Targets and this Mundane Technique has a 1 minute cooldown after the Channel was Canceled. Short Blade Pack Pinning Throw allows the user to throw a Short Blade (it does not have to be their main hand weapon, it can also be a pocket knife) to pin a person against a wall or floor surface for long enough to allow the user to chain up another Mundane Technique or attack Emote. Note, this does not Stun the Target, they are still able to fight back, just not dodge or escape. This Mundane Technique has a 30 minute cooldown. If the user doesn't attack or intend to attack, the target is freed after a minute. ══════════════✠══════════════ RACIAL ABILITIES Ailor Familiar Dark Empathy Seizing Destiny Practiced Speech ══════════════✠══════════════ Languages Common Calam High-Anglian Ithaniahn Dressolini Empire Linguistics Pack ══════════════✠══════════════ Appearance Information A women of average height, 5'6, she still manages to stand tall, wearing a green military uniform, with a row of metals on it. Her eyes sparkle blue, and her hair is light brownish, she keeps herself well kept, not out of any desire to look pretty, but out of a desire to look proper. ══════════════✠══════════════ Life Story Born to a family of three, in the year 283, the family make up was her Father, Mother, and Brother, Friedrich Vormelker. She was born within the busy city of Calemburg. Her household was extremely strict, and ridged, just like any other Writem household, to a point where Friedrich Vormelker, had decided to run away from home, due to a extremely specific punishment. Although, she was never told exactly why he left, the disappearance of her brother devastated her, creating future attachment issues. Despite her strict household, she still respected her Father greatly, from a young age she enjoyed reading war stories, highly influenced by her Wirtem Father, she wanted to one day become a soldier, but, she was discouraged to do so, by her Father, due to her, being a female. Her mother was much more lenient on her militaristic ambitions, and therefore using some connections she had, signed her up to a military academy, the academy of the Griffer order. She began her pursuit into becoming a light Calvary officer. While, her Father had objected to this, but did not care enough to do anything about it. She was quite successful in the academy, achieving top of her class, she graduated from the academy at the age of 20. When she gradated from the academy, she was no longer the women she entered as, she was more cold, and calculating, yet she still had a soft spot, and was still overall a good person. She fought in multiple wars for Regalia under the Beger house banner, where she slowly rose through the ranks in each one eventually becoming a general, the most notable conflict she fought in was, the Dread War. The Dread War was when the young Commander shined, leading may valent Calvary charges causing troops to route in multiple battles, using new more modern techniques, such as equipping Calvary with pistols, where they shoot at the enemy right before a charge, breaking the opposing unit further. The young Light Calvary Commander would play a key role in scouting, spotting enemy Calvary traps in Lurlavan. Although, in this specific Calvary mission she would be spotted and captured by Dread forces (Only one of her men able to get away and delivery the information on the traps), being imprisoned within the city on the days before the actual battle. She would escape during the Altalar revolts within the city. After the end of the war came, she decided to go live in Regalia, in order to get closer to the greatest military minds within the city, and improve her commanding skills. Going onto become a military adviser for House Von Schwarzkrau.
You have nine points worth of Linguistics listed here, yet you've only spent six points. Either sacrifice one language or spend three more points. You'd be forced into a level two Warrior talent. You can however have the third point in General. So, Warrior 2 General 1.
Changes Made!!! Also I made her a full on general instead of officer, but they are a new general @Acosmism
