Character Information Full Name: Zazzull Zalraek Race: Maz-Allar Age: 32 Sex: Male Eye Color: Yellow Core Concept Zazzull has heard very little on Religion, never taking time to learn. If asked, it’s more likely he’d say something about The Great Alchzech without actually knowing anything about it. A laborer craftsman that works in a small pact of compatants, devoting himself entirely to his group in whatever way he can. Proficiency Information ➼ Fist Combat: 15 (+5 Maz-Allar) ➼ Spear Combat: 10 ➼ Shield Combat: 4 ➼ Hunting Art: 2 ➼ Construction: 10 (10 Hobby Points) ➼ Metallurgy: 18 ➼ Rougery: 6 Physical Stat: 25 Ability Information Maz-Allar Racials Vampire Kit | Infected by @MrBlwe Metallurgy: ➼Utility ➼Weapon ➼Finecraft ➼Armor ➼Iron Family ➼Farad Family Rougery: ➼Rouge Gift 4 ➼Wall Climb 3 Languages ➼Common (Free) ➼Zasta (Native Language) Appearance Information Standing at 5’7, he holds a lean and almost skinny-looking figure. Vibrant feathers line the back of his head. Life Story Zazzull was born in a poorer section of Hadar where demanding physical labor was required to make an income. Building small houses, making small trinkets and searching out for cooler looking gems and stones to make more money. Trinkets became much larger, building became more second-nature, with the majority of his time wholly devoted to Work. Picked up by a friendly Cro, offering Coin and a less work heavy environment if he traveled with him. The Cro and its group trained Zazzull, putting him in place as an extra spear to use in battle. He uses his Metallurgy skills to fund his new band with equipment and supplies.
I think that you can add a lot more information to your character's life story. I don't think that you can feasibly narrow the life of a sixty-year-old into two paragraphs, so I'd love to see you expand upon your life-story and explore other aspects of their background. Record the changes in red and tag me when you're finished.
@Caelamus Decided to re-make the character, felt like picking him back up. I'm guessing I ping you to re-approve, just tell me if I ping someone else or not
@Caelamus Been a while, hope you're well Changed it to the new template, moved my points away from Alchemy to make it more consistent. Also removed Five from Construction Art