Zazzull Zallraek

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  1. Lastsuperseth

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    Character Information

    Full Name: Zazzull Zalraek
    Race: Maz-Allar
    Age: 32
    Sex: Male
    Eye Color: Yellow

    Core Concept

    Zazzull has heard very little on Religion, never taking time to learn. If asked, it’s more likely he’d say something about The Great Alchzech without actually knowing anything about it.

    A laborer craftsman that works in a small pact of compatants, devoting himself entirely to his group in whatever way he can.

    Proficiency Information
    ➼ Fist Combat: 15 (+5 Maz-Allar)
    ➼ Spear Combat: 10
    ➼ Shield Combat: 4
    ➼ Hunting Art: 2
    ➼ Construction: 10 (10 Hobby Points)

    ➼ Metallurgy: 18

    ➼ Rougery: 6

    Physical Stat: 25
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    Ability Information

    Maz-Allar Racials

    Vampire Kit | Infected by @MrBlwe

    Metallurgy:

    ➼Utility
    ➼Weapon
    ➼Finecraft
    ➼Armor
    ➼Iron Family
    ➼Farad Family

    Rougery:

    ➼Rouge Gift 4
    ➼Wall Climb 3

    Languages

    ➼Common (Free)
    ➼Zasta (Native Language)


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    Appearance Information

    Standing at 5’7, he holds a lean and almost skinny-looking figure. Vibrant feathers line the back of his head.

    Life Story

    Zazzull was born in a poorer section of Hadar where demanding physical labor was required to make an income.
    Building small houses, making small trinkets and searching out for cooler looking gems and stones to make more money.
    Trinkets became much larger, building became more second-nature, with the majority of his time wholly devoted to Work.
    Picked up by a friendly Cro, offering Coin and a less work heavy environment if he traveled with him.
    The Cro and its group trained Zazzull, putting him in place as an extra spear to use in battle. He uses his Metallurgy skills to fund his new band with equipment and supplies.
     
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  2. Arhbi

    Arhbi Peacemaker Supremium

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    Claimed for review. Expect a reply shortly.
     
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    Arhbi Peacemaker Supremium

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    I think that you can add a lot more information to your character's life story. I don't think that you can feasibly narrow the life of a sixty-year-old into two paragraphs, so I'd love to see you expand upon your life-story and explore other aspects of their background. Record the changes in red and tag me when you're finished.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Any progress? @Lastsuperseth Make sure to tag your reviewer, in this case Arhbi when you're done.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Rejected due to inactivity. Feel free to repost whenever you are back.
     
  6. Lastsuperseth

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    @Caelamus Decided to re-make the character, felt like picking him back up. I'm guessing I ping you to re-approve, just tell me if I ping someone else or not
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus Been a while, hope you're well
    Changed it to the new template, moved my points away from Alchemy to make it more consistent. Also removed Five from Construction Art
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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