The Basics Full Name: Cadryl Rardrat Race: Kathar (Excess Cult) Age: 42 Sex: Female Gender: Female Sexuality: Bisexual Eye Color: Green Religion: She is in the Cult of Excess, and heavily believes in it, mostly because she wants to make the best of her own life by enjoying herself. Who they are: She is a person who is basically in love with chaos and filled to the brim with jealousy of the smallest thing, she will drop rats onto people from above, and just be a prick to everyone she genuinely doesn't respect. She isn't afraid to show off some skin as she likes to be free and moving and twisting around at her will. Proficiencies: Dagger Combat: 20 points (15 Proficiency points + 5 racial boost) Theater arts: 15 points (10 hobby points + 5 Proficiency points) Strength Training: 5 Proficiency points Medical Training: 5 Proficiency points Sorcery: 6 Proficiency Points Roguery: 3 Proficiency points Linguistics: 3 Proficiency points Point buy: 12 Unused Points: 5 Languages: Common Kathar language (Taught to her while growing up, free language) Skodje Ability list: Ageless Arcane Mastery Elder Satisfaction Vice sense Bone song Dread Rebirth Den of illusion Void Manifest Magical Storage Bodyclaws Eyes of hunt Hack Familiar Magic dagger Essence corruption Wall climb 3 (Point buy. Roguery) Darkness 2 (Point buy. Sorcery) True path 1 (Point buy. Sorcery) Flux shift 6 (point buy. Sorcery) Appearance info: She is a pale kathar that likes to show off, with a few scars all around, with one noticeable one going over her nose, although there isn't a single spec of a tattoo on her body. She is a 6'5" woman who is lean in muscularity, but she has long dark brown/black hair which she takes really good care of. Life story Childhood When she was born she was abandoned like most kathars, but she was taken in by a Sweet-Matron that really took good care of her, but being a jealous brat that she is, she tried to hog all the attention from the Matron to herself, even if it was by scolding. Adolescene She spent most of her adolescent years pulling prank at the other kids she lived with, it was a simple life of pull a prank and then get scolded by the Matron. Which she didnt mind since she liked the attention. Early Adulthood She can barely remember her early years of adulthood, she was almost constantly high, drunk or both. And after a near death experience that happened while high, she promised herself to stay away from all drugs, and being stricter with alcohol. Advanced years After traveling a bunch she has finaly ended up in Regalia! Ready for a new adventure, and by a quick glance at the city she was determined that she was going to stay for a while at least. Spoiler: Full life story 0-18 When she was born it was the usual with kathars of her being abandoned by her parents, which she never met again. However, she was quickly taken in by a Sweet-Matron, the Matron took really good care of the many kids that was there, but the one who got scolded the most was always [Name], she always pulled prank on the other kids in a way to hoard all the attention from the Matron herself, even if was from being scolded. 19-29 A little later she was trying to pull a prank on the other kids by trying to pretend that she had disappeared, while she was really just out on town to steal some sweets that she could snack on while she was getting scolded. And it all seemed perfect, until it went horribly. She was kidnapped by a gang and brought to a foreign place that she had never seen as it was clear that it was outside of the Dread Empire. After managing to sneak away from the kidnappers, and without a clue of where her old home was, she had to go out on her own. Little is known of what she did after, as she has mostly forgotten it, mostly because she was on all kinds of drugs and alcohol, and after a near death experience she knew that she actually had to get a grip as she determined to stay clean from drugs, and being very controlling when it comes to her drinking. 30- 42 After getting somewhat a hang of her life, she started to travel around, and particularly getting friendly with some Skodje people; they had nothing in common, but that didn't matter to either of them. And now they have arrived in Regalia, looking to make some chaos and be a pain in the ass to everyone.
Hi, here's my review. Just a few things to tweak & then we're good to go. You can follow the Kathar name guideline on the Language section of the Kathar page, which I'll link here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Kathar#Language While the above isn't totally necessary, it's encouraged & it may help you with making a full name (first & last), which is necessary on a character application. If you have any questions or if you'd like a staff member to just help write a name for you, make a ticket through the Discord Ticket Bot. State your character's chosen Cult here. What proficiency/proficiencies are these abilities from? Also, make sure you're listing any Point-Buy abilities in the Ability section, & only the investments in the Proficiency section. Same(ish) as above, list out the Linguistic investment in the proficiency section. You're all good to put an expanded version of your Life Story below in a spoiler, but above that, please follow the Character Template in a short, 1-2 sentence bullet point list per stage of life (childhood, adolescence, early adulthood, & advanced years if applicable). Make the appropriate edits in purple & tag me once done, thanks. @Totemo_kawaii
@microwavemmm I think i did it? I might have read wrong on the proficiency stuff, but i tried my best!
@Totemo_kawaii You just have to add "Sorcery: 6 Proficiency points", "Roguery: 3 Proficiency points", & "Linguistics: 3 Proficiency points" to this list of investments. Point-Buy investments should be formatted & listed out the same as other investments.