Characther App 2: Electric Boogaloo

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  1. Peachici

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    The Basics

    Full Name: Cadryl Rardrat

    Race: Kathar (Excess Cult)

    Age: 42

    Sex: Female

    Gender: Female

    Sexuality: Bisexual

    Eye Color: Green



    Religion: She is in the Cult of Excess, and heavily believes in it, mostly because she wants to make the best of her own life by enjoying herself.



    Who they are: She is a person who is basically in love with chaos and filled to the brim with jealousy of the smallest thing, she will drop rats onto people from above, and just be a prick to everyone she genuinely doesn't respect. She isn't afraid to show off some skin as she likes to be free and moving and twisting around at her will.



    Proficiencies:

    Dagger Combat: 20 points (15 Proficiency points + 5 racial boost)

    Theater arts: 15 points (10 hobby points + 5 Proficiency points)

    Strength Training: 5 Proficiency points

    Medical Training: 5 Proficiency points

    Sorcery: 6 Proficiency Points

    Roguery: 3 Proficiency points

    Linguistics: 3 Proficiency points

    Point buy: 12

    Unused Points: 5


    Languages:

    Common

    Kathar language (Taught to her while growing up, free language)

    Skodje


    Ability list:
    Ageless
    Arcane Mastery
    Elder Satisfaction
    Vice sense
    Bone song
    Dread Rebirth
    Den of illusion
    Void Manifest

    Magical Storage
    Bodyclaws
    Eyes of hunt
    Hack Familiar
    Magic dagger
    Essence corruption

    Wall climb 3 (Point buy. Roguery)
    Darkness 2 (Point buy. Sorcery)
    True path 1 (Point buy. Sorcery)
    Flux shift 6 (point buy. Sorcery)

    Appearance info:

    She is a pale kathar that likes to show off, with a few scars all around, with one noticeable one going over her nose, although there isn't a single spec of a tattoo on her body.

    She is a 6'5" woman who is lean in muscularity, but she has long dark brown/black hair which she takes really good care of.


    Life story

    Childhood

    When she was born she was abandoned like most kathars, but she was taken in by a Sweet-Matron that really took good care of her, but being a jealous brat that she is, she tried to hog all the attention from the Matron to herself, even if it was by scolding.

    Adolescene
    She spent most of her adolescent years pulling prank at the other kids she lived with, it was a simple life of pull a prank and then get scolded by the Matron. Which she didnt mind since she liked the attention.

    Early Adulthood

    She can barely remember her early years of adulthood, she was almost constantly high, drunk or both. And after a near death experience that happened while high, she promised herself to stay away from all drugs, and being stricter with alcohol.

    Advanced years
    After traveling a bunch she has finaly ended up in Regalia! Ready for a new adventure, and by a quick glance at the city she was determined that she was going to stay for a while at least.

    0-18

    When she was born it was the usual with kathars of her being abandoned by her parents, which she never met again. However, she was quickly taken in by a Sweet-Matron, the Matron took really good care of the many kids that was there, but the one who got scolded the most was always [Name], she always pulled prank on the other kids in a way to hoard all the attention from the Matron herself, even if was from being scolded.



    19-29

    A little later she was trying to pull a prank on the other kids by trying to pretend that she had disappeared, while she was really just out on town to steal some sweets that she could snack on while she was getting scolded.

    And it all seemed perfect, until it went horribly. She was kidnapped by a gang and brought to a foreign place that she had never seen as it was clear that it was outside of the Dread Empire. After managing to sneak away from the kidnappers, and without a clue of where her old home was, she had to go out on her own.


    Little is known of what she did after, as she has mostly forgotten it, mostly because she was on all kinds of drugs and alcohol, and after a near death experience she knew that she actually had to get a grip as she determined to stay clean from drugs, and being very controlling when it comes to her drinking.


    30- 42

    After getting somewhat a hang of her life, she started to travel around, and particularly getting friendly with some Skodje people; they had nothing in common, but that didn't matter to either of them. And now they have arrived in Regalia, looking to make some chaos and be a pain in the ass to everyone.
     
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    Claiming for review.​
     
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    Hi, here's my review. Just a few things to tweak & then we're good to go.

    • You can follow the Kathar name guideline on the Language section of the Kathar page, which I'll link here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Kathar#Language
    • While the above isn't totally necessary, it's encouraged & it may help you with making a full name (first & last), which is necessary on a character application. If you have any questions or if you'd like a staff member to just help write a name for you, make a ticket through the Discord Ticket Bot.
    • State your character's chosen Cult here.
    • What proficiency/proficiencies are these abilities from? Also, make sure you're listing any Point-Buy abilities in the Ability section, & only the investments in the Proficiency section.
    • Same(ish) as above, list out the Linguistic investment in the proficiency section.
    • You're all good to put an expanded version of your Life Story below in a spoiler, but above that, please follow the Character Template in a short, 1-2 sentence bullet point list per stage of life (childhood, adolescence, early adulthood, & advanced years if applicable).
    Make the appropriate edits in purple & tag me once done, thanks. @Totemo_kawaii
     
  4. Peachici

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    @microwavemmm I think i did it? I might have read wrong on the proficiency stuff, but i tried my best!
     
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    @Totemo_kawaii

    • You just have to add "Sorcery: 6 Proficiency points", "Roguery: 3 Proficiency points", & "Linguistics: 3 Proficiency points" to this list of investments. Point-Buy investments should be formatted & listed out the same as other investments.
     
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