Eko Baktayah Dominasi

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    [-- Character Information --]
    • Full Name: Eko Baktayah Dominasi
      • Nicknames: N/A
    • Race: Ksat Allar
      • Age: 22
      • Nameday: July 27th
    • Sex: Male
      • Gender: Male
      • Pronouns: He/Him
    • Sexuality: Bisexual
    • Eye Color: Amber Topaz

    [-- Core Concept --]

    • Born into a tribe and cult of Void Worshippers on the outer rim of Sendras and barely in the holds of Hadar, it should be no surprise that Eko honors the Void Gods with his worship. Hosting multiple of the gods as his patrons, each depicts a select part of him that he cannot do without, always seeking greater growth of such most of all. Carraq, the Hunter, Xor, the Untamed and finally Armas, the Desired are all part of his circle of worship, each of their beliefs and strengths being held over all others, supported by his natural role of warrior and hunter alike while giving into the excess pleasures of life itself.
    • The last of his kind and a ruthless warrior and hunter that seeks perfection of the body, mind and soul through any means necessary. They are forever seeking greater hunts of worthy challenges, whether that be beasts or man itself. No end is too far in the search of bettering oneself and survival after all.

    [-- Proficiency Information --]

    • Strength: 7
      • Hunter, Warrior, Demolisher, Frenzy, Fisticuffs, Climber, Breaker
    • Constitution: 4
      • Counterplay, Recovery, Resilience, Bruteforce
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Dexterity: 1
      • Parkour
    • Magic: 0
    • Charisma: 2
      • Stupid Luck, Mount Husbandry
    [-- Ability Information --]
    • Pureblood Ksat Allar Racials: 6 Abilities | 3 Specials
    • Blooded Vampire
      • Blooded: 11 Specials
      • Commutable Points: Predator, Infection, Betrayer, Feral
      • Accursed Senses, Lair Illusion, Lair Knowledge, Accursed Heartbeat, Chain Break, Prison Break, Dueling Brand, Wallwalking, Accursed Fall, Cursewalking, Berserk Curse, Altered Voice
    • Mount: Two-Claw Raptor
    [-- Languages --]
    • Pidato
    • Common

    [-- Appearance Information --]

    • A monstrous Ksat Allar standing at a full height of 7' through partial genetic alteration and an excess of void energy pumped into his body with well defined musculature and accompanying fat levels to accommodate their size and constant action, he is seemingly on the broader side for his race. With scales a deep red over their backside while their front is a raven black, they hold bright purple plumage that travels down their head in the style of a mohawk with accentuating feathers down the arms and tail, they stick out in most environments with their brightness. Regarding clothing, it is on the practical side of things to allow full freedom of movement yet having any flaunting possible with golden accessories that are set across his body and highlight the fine fabrics. Finally his eyes are a brilliant yellow with dark sclera set in the hard features of a tyrannotitan-reminiscent head.
      • Undertaking various void based rituals, their body has changed as a result. Their scales are gifted with a variety of ritualistic markings that could be considered tattoos, each holding a soft glowing red look to them that are able to stand out clearly from their normal crimson scales.
    • Giving in to his most primal and base urges, it is when he is corrupted by his vampiric form is he barely even sentient. Growing in height to 8’ and far wider in width as his scales near burst with the growth of inhuman musculature, the ritualistic markings that adorn him glow far brighter and pulse in rhythmic fashion, leaking darkened blood over every inch of him. Unable to speak and only growl in place, the sharpened fangs in his maw extend out and over, unable to fully close his jaw. Growths of bone jut out through his brow bone, and down his nose acting in the part of spikes which similarly come down the side of his arms and tail through the feather plumes that all vibrate as if a bush infested with a predator ready to strike. His claws and talons on both hands and feet extend out, losing the ability to hold any weapon other than what is natural to him, standing hunched over which hides the growth in height.

    [-- Life Story --]
    • Born in the Mozz-Zzraazh Archipelago of Hadar, specifically the Hadar and Regalian Loyal, North Mozz. Eko's biological parents would give his egg and that of four other siblings to another in the city, unable to take care of an entire cluster. With two fathers, his primary carer and that of two other siblings would be Bakti while his partner would care for the remaining two eggs in the family unit. His tribe, the Voloshi, was heavily influenced by the nearby Sendrassian clans that frequently raided the area and imparted their influence, and as such, it was a den of corruption and violence, thriving in the worship of the Void, much to the dismay and disgust of the neighboring tribes and cities.
    • As any Ksat child would be, he was rowdy with a love of sports and exploration of the jungles outside their home, whether it be with his siblings or all alone to get away from the noises and scents of the city that would always overpower his senses on a daily basis. Competition was a natural part of life between the siblings themselves and the other hatchlings throughout the city, occasionally getting bloody though without associated risk due to their biological adaptations. Academic learning was typical, only being taught the very necessities that were needed to succeed in life and Hadarian society though clear interest was put towards physical education most of all. Learning to wield and utilize certain weaponry, tracking and learning of the beasts that stalk their jungles and the training of his physicality, all of which become favored subjects. Failure was never an option, nor was weakness without fear of being left behind. Forced to adapt, the strength of a people would be maintained and the outcasts left to be treated as meat to the slaughter.
    • Coming of age, his love for the thrill of the hunt and fondness for bloodsports had grown ten-fold, wanting nothing more than to become one of the famed gladiators to honor Carraq, to fight for the entertainment of others and himself while impressing the upper caste and their gods. His duties however, would take him elsewhere, deigned to act as one of the hunters due to his knowledge of the jungles after all his exploring as a child. Whenever all his tasks had been completed for the day and there was nothing left to do, he would travel to the gambling dens at night and fight in their rings, to indulge in his base needs that could not be denied without greater consequence, earning coin for himself and that of the betters while being able to engage in something he would always crave. Bonds and rivalries alike were earned with the other fighters, all becoming close no matter the circumstance of who won and lost. The excess of blood was a way to gorge himself on, drowning in it near nightly whether it was his own, his opponents, or a mix of both which was most frequent of all.
    • All his duties and fun in his closed off life would come to an abrupt end however with the initial invasion of the Sendrassians, the Mozz-Zzraazh Archipelago acting as one of their many landing points, razing the very land they crossed and butchering all in their path to leave nothing in their wake. Joining alongside the rest of the military under the command of the local Diwa-Digmaan to fight, it was of no real use, the amassed forces of their demonic cousins that influenced them so being too many and too rabid to properly fend off. They were forced to retreat north to the remaining islands in the region, no other of his legion surviving the battle as his home was left as nothing more than a smoking pile of infested rubble. Integration with the upper cities and clans was strenuous given his clear signs of void worship over his body, yet still sentient enough to register as Hadarian. The late arrival of the Regalian military has been a sore point for the Ksat, having lost so much though still despite it all, he joined alongside them wherever the Digmaans and Diwa-Digmaans that remained in the north sought to locate him with the rest of their troops, witnessing both success and blunder on the part of the Regalians. Reports being passed from force to force did not bode well, mistake after mistake, slaughter after slaughter; his respect diminishing from their ruling elite that often doubled as their military commanders, very few actually capable in his mind and causing a conflict in his views.
    • With the resurgence of the Allorn Empire and the subsequent retreating of the Sendrassians, his sights were set on Regalia after everything that had happened. A place of both strength and weakness, the pinnacle of centralized civilization where the majority of world changing and cataclysmic events have originated from. He had no further purpose to remain in Hadar for the time, his home in ruins and uncertainty whether any of his family or friends had survived the initial conflict with the Sendrassians, all spread out amongst different regions if they were to still live. Closing up what final ties he had with others and ensuring all his current endeavors were complete, he would set sail for the capital of the empire itself, the holy city of Regalia. This is where he would grow himself, where he would create his legacy, whether that'd be with the individuals he can have an impact on or the pages of history didn't matter. All that did was this new chapter in his story and the tests that were laid out in front of him.
     
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    Quick change of removing Wall Climb 3 for Healing Alchemy instead, completing all Alchemy packs. I also added a small part in on the first dotpoint of the Life Story, basically saying they're from the Volosh Islands which was said to be the Mozz-Zzraazh Archipelago in a ticket but I just wanted it to be known from the Allar lore page standpoint of what he is. Also changed mutations around with the red scales being a natural birth colour with the mutations now just being the golden eyes and glowing tattoos which are shown in the art. Shouldn't need re-review since it was just 3 points but tagging anyway!

    Change Log for ease of reading:
    • Removed Wall Climb 3
    • Added Healing Alchemy
    • Updated mutations
    • Added onto place of origin to specify they are Voloshi, the Void-Cult based Allar that are loyal to Hadar and Regalia
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    Now that I've gotten more of a feel for the lizard and where I want to take them, I've made some changes in red. They'll be listed below and require a re-review, please and thank you!

    Change Log:

    • Updated Proficiencies:
      • Removed Sword Combat and Husbandry Art
      • Added more into Fist Combat
      • Added Dagger Combat
      • Added Bola Combat
      • Shifted all Hobby Points to Hunting Art
      • Lowered Alchemy to only two packs (Healing, Conning)
      • Returned Wall Climb to Roguery
      • Added Steamtech Engineering (Biotics, Hooking)
      • Added Void Sorcery (Flux Shift 7 i wanna have hot girl romance moments)
    • Lowered Physical Stat
    • Updated Faith to Dark Ancients and Abbagellon. Mentioned in Core Concept and Life Story
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    Finally pushed him to be inline aesthetically with the most recent art he's obtained of his new look, so that means Brood time!! All changes are made in the now very fitting red.

    Change Log:

    • Affliction added, von Kerle Brood. Full infection status has not been achieved so he is just a Brood.
    • Changed eye colour to red.
    • Added a Vampiric Shift as Broods gain one.
    • Edited his base looks a small amount just to have him be red and black scaled instead of just red.

    While not major, it is an affliction, so I'll be requiring a re-review please and thank you!
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    Keep in mind hot girl summer will be disabled if infected with Vampirism, so imbibe the blood at risk of No Bitches.

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    It was time to update Core Concept with both religion and the character concept itself, which while incredibly similar has been made to fit certain views that have shifted.

    Change Log:

    • Changed Religion from the Dark Ancients to Void Worship with the rename and the switching of gods. His patrons are now Qarrakh, Korroth and Armas while the rest are either only acknowledged or completely forgotten.
    • While not exactly a canon term anymore (I think) with the little geography update done to Hadar a while back, I like the way it sounds so I am still using the term 'Voloshi' to describe his own personal culture that was assumedly destroyed with the razing of North Mozz. This is reflected in the Character Concept section of being the self-proclaimed last surviving member of the culture and what that means for him.
    • Did a minor update to Life Story in regards to the Void Cult he was born into either tried to join the Sendrassians with ambiguous results or died fighting while he fled the area to safety alone.
    No points changed and given what was changed was only minor additions, it shouldn't need a re-review but tagging just in case. @Yurs
     
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    Looks good!

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    Dingdingding. Infection time.

    Change Log:

    • Added Blooded Vampire abilities and specials.
    • Added Bonded Vampire specials. Romance :3
    • Removed Alchemy, Sorcery and Engineering since I would be getting rid of those in the next Proficiency Update anyway.
    • Added Bodycare Training and Strength Training.

    Needs re-review for approval. @Yurs
     
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    womance wowepway :3

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    Allar update has dropped and I am living large!

    Change Log:

    • Changed name to fit with new naming customs. Zzen is no more and he is now Eko Baktayah.
    • Maz-Allar has shifted to Pureblooded Ksat Allar.
    • Removed Brood, instead being only a Blooded Vampire.
    • Eye change to Yellow. Glamor :3
    • Changed wording regarding religion with the whole new Keyakinan. His Kelompok, the gods he chooses to worship, are still the exact same with a touch on the fact he is going against the stigma to worship three Void Gods.
    • Zasta has now become Pidato.
    • Mention of what his headtype is, is now described in the physical appearance.
    • Made his backstory to be less tribal/barbaric and less void worship-y. The same progression goes through it so while some wording has changed, it's the same general vibe of just being a hunter that got forced to leave home due to war.
    Requiring a re-review. @Yurs
     
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    Looks good to me!

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    new prof update :3 also added the commutable points into ability information under vampirism since it relies on that and not investment into attributes @Yurs aesthetics and extras will come later
     
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    updated profs, religion and lifestory and p much everything else. going feral again. void cult allar. aesthetics later. need reviewer
     
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    Oh who this.
    The only thing I’ll note is that this is notably above and beyond a normal Ksat’s height, and by a fair, fair bit. Ksat are “average“, if a only little taller than the Kyat, who are generally on the short or average side. It is the Kuat who are the tallest, and then the Rama and Sang. That said, as you stated, Eko is full of Void juice. I think this could be chalked up to that if you worded it to be some sort of enhancement/mutation in that manner (unless that’s what you already meant?). You might also consider being Ksat-Rama instead of pure Ksat, since with Fisticuffs can pretty easily be flavored with claws, even if you don’t have the racial. Knowing Eko, it might just fit, and fit well. Regardless though, it’s nothing I’ll actively ask you to change since it’s mostly flavor!

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