For future reference, continue to tag Nesstro for any future re-reviews. As a general rule of thumb we don't allow players to frequently change their sorcery spells or points. This is one of my first points of contention I would like to raise, Zikiel do not have a light blue eye color, it is a very bright icy blue color. Google searching the color Icy Blue provides some good example and references for it. Zikiel eyes do stand out. Tag me and highlight edits when you are done.
I understand apologies on the tagging I have made the changes with the eyes and changed everything back before the tag is that alright? @Caelamus
More along the lines of, since the character is a Zikiel, you can swap points into sorcery freely but make sure which sorcery you invest in is what you want or will feel satisfied with for awhile. Once you are sure of your decision, tag me.
Okay so I thought really hard! I double checked everything I have finally come to the conclusion on what sorcery spells would make me the happiest to play, I am now very happy with my choices I will not be needing to change anything for a very long time. I hope it all looks okay to you and thanks again. @Caelamus
@Caelamus Okay so i've updated my app for the new zikiel update, I've provided art for my zikiel form as i'm horrible with words, as for the mentality I've written in red (backstory) trying to justify and explain my reasoning for being in the Solifuge. As I've been in the Solifuge for a very long time I would hate to leave so I hope my reasoning is alright
@Caelamus Updated my sorcery, added 1 spell and took away the points needed away from theater arts, went from 10 down to four to compensate for the sorcery.
@Caelamus Apologies for needing another re-review I've had to completely rework my backstory to fit with my mage spark and I also have a age perm now capping at 219.
I'm not quite sure where or how these things are being gleamed, they're usually included in vampire kits and not really bought except for Vile Vine which is bought in a pack. Please clarify.
You cannot just simply buy abilities off the ability page. There's set packs outlined in the proficiency page like genetics, sorcery and so forth with an outline of what they provide. The abilities you listed are abilities associated with modern vampire kits, they cannot be 'bought' unless there is for example a sorcery spell that lists it.
@Caelamus okay so i've fixed my application, I only have the vile vine pack, sorcery , diplomacy schooling and i've out most of my points into linguistics
@Caelamus Updated my app for the Ezikiel update sorry it took so long, realised I needed to move some points around.
Okay @Caelamus I've updated my app AGAIN for the new update I dont know if my progression traits are right could you have a look thank you