When writing a Character Application, always prioritize readability for Lore Staff. You may use gifs, images, decorations, dividers, theme music, etc, but make sure that the text is easily readable and copy-paste-able. A Lore Staff may refuse to review your Application until it is cleaned up. Character Information Full Name: Mainfridus Hawkhelm Race: Ailor+Breizh Age: 25 Sex: Male Gender: Male Sexuality: Bi Eye Color: Blue Core Concept Mainfridus believes in the Breizh religion very strongly and he mostly worships Macabanath, Architect of Mountains due to Mainfridus’s fascination with building highly advanced clockwork machinery. Mainfridus is an Ailor Metallurgist and Clockwork Engineer with the goal of building the most advanced Clockwork Machinery to help those in need. Proficiency Information Use the guide on Proficiency to complete this section. +9 Engineering Investment +9 Metallurgy Investment +3 Lingustics Investment Hobbies +5 Fineweave Art +5 Culinary Art Physical Stat 5 Ability Information Write every Ability Kit and individual Point-Buy Abilities here as bullet points. Write only names and where they came from, not what they do, and ignore Racial Abilities unless a specific choice is needed. If you have a kit without the option of choice, just list its name and the number of Abilities it has. Examples: Engineering Familiar +3 Biotics +3 Golem +3 Hacking +3 Weapons +3 Hooking +3 Mending +3 Metallurgy Utility +3 Finework +3 Bronze Family +3 Cratos Affliction Death Attunement +1 Utility Ranged Combat +16 When he is in his Tech Form, he takes on the form of a robotic knight with glowing green eyes. Total Ability Points 37 out of 50 Languages Use the guide on Linguistics to pick languages spoken. Example: Common (Free) Tarkkin (Secondary) Breizh (Cultural) Appearance Information Mainfridus is a Male Ailor who has blue eyes and he wears a gold and blue Clockwork suit to help him with his daily tasks. He is 6 feet 2 inches and he is slightly muscular despite spending most of his time working on his Clockwork builds. Life Story Mainfridus was born at an orphanage within the city of Arvost. Mainfridus spent his adolescent years studying Clockwork mechanisms. He spent his young adulthood improving his craft with Clockwork mechanisms while also learning how to build Clockwork Golems. Mainfridus came to Regalia to assist those in need while also finding others who have similar interests in Clockwork mechanisms. @BiBiBirdie
As a start, welcome to Massivecraft! This is a wonderful application so far. Please make the following changes, and tag @BiBiBirdie when complete! You've only used a total of 21 points out of 50 Proficiency Points and 10 free Hobby Points! You don't need to spend all your points, but I thought I'd let you know! You are missing your physical stat at the end of your proficiency section! Please include it there. For you, it would be a total of 5. You would get ' Breizh ' as a free cultural language, as that is your character's culture! Please include this here.
When writing a Character Application, always prioritize readability for Lore Staff. You may use gifs, images, decorations, dividers, theme music, etc, but make sure that the text is easily readable and copy-paste-able. A Lore Staff may refuse to review your Application until it is cleaned up. Character Information Full Name: Mainfridus Hawkhelm Race: Ailor+Breizh Age: 25 Sex: Male Gender: Male Sexuality: Bi Eye Color: Blue Core Concept Mainfridus believes in the Breizh religion very strongly and he mostly worships Macabanath, Architect of Mountains due to Mainfridus’s fascination with building highly advanced clockwork machinery. Mainfridus is an Ailor Metallurgist and Clockwork Engineer with the goal of building the most advanced Clockwork Machinery to help those in need. Proficiency Information Use the guide on Proficiency to complete this section. +9 Engineering Investment +9 Metallurgy Investment +3 Lingustics Investment Hobbies +5 Fineweave Art +5 Culinary Art Physical Stat 5 Ability Information Write every Ability Kit and individual Point-Buy Abilities here as bullet points. Write only names and where they came from, not what they do, and ignore Racial Abilities unless a specific choice is needed. If you have a kit without the option of choice, just list its name and the number of Abilities it has. Examples: Engineering Familiar Biotics Golem Metallurgy Utility Finework Bronze Family Languages Use the guide on Linguistics to pick languages spoken. Example: Common (Free) Tarkkin (Secondary) Breizh (Cultural) Appearance Information Mainfridus is a Male Ailor who has blue eyes and he wears a gold and blue Clockwork suit to help him with his daily tasks. He is 6 feet 2 inches and he is slightly muscular despite spending most of his time working on his Clockwork builds. Life Story Mainfridus was born at an orphanage within the city of Arvost. Mainfridus spent his adolescent years studying Clockwork mechanisms. He spent his young adulthood improving his craft with Clockwork mechanisms while also learning how to build Clockwork Golems. Mainfridus came to Regalia to assist those in need while also finding others who have similar interests in Clockwork mechanisms. @BiBiBirdie
@Zomaga5 Hi! The changes made are wonderful, but they should be on your original post. You'll see a button that looks like this at the bottom of your original application! Make the changes there, and you're all good to be approved.
