╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 Portait of Tuija Vikström by Same-van-Rijn 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ “Be a craftsman in speech that thou mayest be strong, for the strength of one is the tongue, and speech is mightier than all fighting.” ― Ptahhotep ╚═══━━━──────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 Response by Richard S. Johnson ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ BASIC INFORMATION ◈ NAME | Tuija Ardigesdottir Viduggla Vikström TITLES | Countess of Risøyhamm | Matriarch of House Vikström | Imperial Hostess◈ RACE | Velheim Ailor with Imperial Influence ◈ AGE | 23 BIRTHDATE | September 30th SIGN | Libra◈ SEX | Female SEXUALITY | Heterosexual◈ VISUAL GLANCE EYE COLOR | Emerald Green HAIR COLOR | Brown with Auburn Undertones HEIGHT | 5'9 PHYSIQUE | Physically Fit╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 In the Poppy Garden by Paul Milner ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ CORE CONCEPT ◈ RELIGION | Unionist 7/10 Tuija’s devotion was lost during a time of struggle with her people and the acceptance of the Empire's citizens. However, Tuija sought out guidance and realized that her faith had changed and turned to another way, leaving her past and embracing a new way of life to both better the lives of her people and show loyalty to the Empire she calls home. ◈ IDENTITY | The Fascinated Diplomat Tuija has already found the excitement of the unknown, she studies anything she can get her hands on and is sure to leave a lasting impression on anyone of interest. She wishes to expand the knowledge of both herself and others through her talents. She knows little about combat but is a handy medic to those in need. ╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 Three Women Near Pool Feeding Swans by Hans Zatzka ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ PROFICIENCIES ◈ Strength [-] ◈ Constitution [-] ◈ Wisdom [7] Focus Command Attack Command Defend Command Resist Command | Ailor Buff II Medical Revive Medical Bolster Medical Barrier Medical Resist◈ Dexterity [-] ◈ Magic [-] ◈ Faith [7] Sacred Healing Pack Sacred Buff Pack Sacred Martyr Pack Sacred Gear Pack Sacred Feather Pack Sacred Revive Pack Exorcism╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 On the Seashore by George Elgar Hicks ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ ABILITIES ◈ Command Packs Focus Command Attack Command Defend Command Resist Command◈ Cleric Packs Sacred Healing Sacred Buff Sacred Martyr Sacred Gear Sacred Feather Sacred Revive Exorcism◈ Ailor Specials Destined Familiar | Eurasian Eagle-Owl | Audun Ailor Buff I Ailor Buff II ╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 The Study by Stephen Shortridge 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ LANGUAGES Skodje | Native | Parental Calem | Tutored | 9/10 Anglian | Self-Taught | 5/10 Breizh | Tutored | 3/10 Barrudh | Self-Taught | 7/10 Common | Taught | Fluent ╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 At the Easel by James N. Lee ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ APPEARANCE INFORMATION ◈ ABNORMALITIES Carries little to no physical abnormities aside from a few scars on her arms and hands from her medical and alchemic work. ◈ PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION Tuija has some muscle definition in her arms and a slender frame. Her height is around 5’5 without heels and her hair is a muted auburn tone. She is usually seen wearing more Imperial style clothing that carries the colors red and gold on most occasions. ╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 Queen of Pentacles by @FlossyBerryRene ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╗ LIFE STORY ◈ Early Childhood Tuija was born in Høyhønsehus, Norrland on the 30th of September to her father Ardige and bondwife, Marikka av Medelpad. Tuija was brought into the world along with her twin brother Aksel who made the duo the fourth and fifth born. She grew up surrounded by a lively family and many brothers. ◈ Teenage Years Tuija was introduced to the idea of the unknown at a very young age. This was due to Aksel and her sneaking into their father’s study while he was away to look over the many maps, books, and objects the family had collected over the years. Her admiration for the unknown and the people within it caused her to study many years in linguistics, diplomatic skills, and exploration. During this time she sought out individuals who could help further her intrigue with the hidden world. ◈ Early Adulthood Around this time Tuija would have gained many of her skills already but she paused her journeys due to the Burning of the North. Once she was drained of her work in the field, Tuija desired to get away from home, going on many journeys with her brother by ship. Though she didn’t find anything noteworthy, she did learn to draw maps to some extent in order to better help her family and brother. ◈ Present Day After some time at sea, Tuija desired to rejoin her family but instead of going back home, she sailed to Regalia to assist her family with their efforts in the city. Over time, Tuija began to make a name for herself, slowly gaining a reputation from her events, and her very striking difference from the patriarch at the time, Garth. The efforts proved worthwhile once she gained a title for herself and at one point even ran House Viduggla with the assistance of her father. However, once her cousin returned, strife formed in the house, causing a split. Now, Tuija is the leader of House Nordhjem which aspires to expand the knowledge and will of the Empire through exploration. ╚═══━━━───────────── • ─────────────━━━═══╝ ╔═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╗ 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 〘════════ 》 〘 •☼• 〙《═════════〙 The Backwaters by Charles William Wyllie ╚═══━━━──────────────────────── • ─────────────────────────━━━═══╝ Spoiler: Relationships Family Relations ◈ Leugel Viduggla - Grandfather - I remember the kindness you taught me and the laughter you use to spread, I will always miss you. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦ ◈ Ardige Viduggla - Father - Thank you for the times you have been a guiding hand in my life and I hope to make you proud. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦ ◈ Yngvarr Viduggla - Uncle - It is unsettling how much you know through just a glance. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ ◈ Erobrsønn Viduggla - Older Brother - I wish we spoke more, hopefully, that will change soon. ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Frejnir Viduggla - Older Brother - You lost your way when you followed that fool to his demise, good luck collecting all the pieces. ✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Garth Viduggla - Cousin - Winning is not always worth the pressure and bloodshed, learn to guide through more than revenge. ✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Godrun Nordhjem - Ex-Family - You have lost my respect and trust but I wish you the best in your journey to forgiveness. ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Rhea Vikström - Cousin - I am always pushing you yet I never see you take advantage, learn from my mistakes, and be better than I was. ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Ellisif Vikström - Cousin - You have grown quite a bit since we last spoke, I don't know what to think of it yet. ✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Heinrich Benac - Half-Brother - I never knew I had a sibling on my mother's side... but now I can see how scarily similar we look. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ Other Relations ◈ Allestane Vikström - Husband - To think we got here just from you holding an umbrella for me. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦ ◈ Aldair Delmotte - Friend - I wish you the best in life but I will not be there to guide you. ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Rodderick Howlester - Friend - I will find a way to repay you and your family’s kindness. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ ◈ Genevieve Howlester - Friend - It is tough being a diamond in a world full of rhinestones. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ ◈ Ewan Howlester - Friend - The spotlight always seems to find its way to you even if you pray to be looked over. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧ ◈ Fabienne du Ponciare - Friend - You could put on a one-man show and have the same energy of an entire cast. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧ ◈ Lorriane du Ponciare - Friend - You pour your heart out into every action you make, it is as beautiful as your paintings. ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Florian du Ponciare - Friend - Though we have grown apart I still can look to you with a smile and receive one back. ✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Morgana de Azcoissia - Friend - You have come so far since I first met you and I hope to see this success and happiness grow. ✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Howland von Schwarzkrau - Friend - You have offered persisting guidance in times I felt lost. I hope I can repay the favor someday. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ ◈ Tarlok - Friend - You have come so far since I first met you. ✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Zolo (Baker) Vovznak - Friend - Your words are as sweet as your pastries and I am glad to see how you have grown. ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Gabrielle von Caldrin - Friend - You have made a name for yourself and I couldn't be happier for you. Never change for others. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧ ◈ Auriane Belrose - Friend - I needed something more vibrant in my life and the Gods blessed me with you. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ ◈ Catherine Vaedra - Friend - I will always be by your side, you are not alone in your desires so know there are others you can rely on. ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ ◈ Riftan Vaedra - Friend(?) - You do not scare me but your resolution drives me to work harder. ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Kreiger von Karlise - Acquaintance - I wish to grow closer to you as I can tell your intentions are purer than most. ✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Lancel Piergarten - Acquaintance - Your confidence radiates and I can see you represent your family well. ✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ ◈ Avox Petrou - Acquaintance - We have not spoken much but I can tell we would get along, hopefully. ✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ If I forgot to add you just DM me!
Approved @Annie_Short However, I suggest putting the Drahl subrace in brackets under the race thing in basic info. Makes it easier for reviewers when we know what it is straight away.
She's really pretty!! Seems like someone that Skyler would like. (if that was Metagaming im sorry, staff ;-;)
Looks good for the most part! However, there's a minor prof issue that needs fixing: You have your racial boost factored in a 5 Point investment. However, you need to invest at least 10 Points in order to receive your racial boost in Hobby Group proficiencies. Please correct this. Go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary edits, thank you!
i think u forgot to remove the strength training ability Great Force 1 when you removed the strength training
@Annie_Short Hey love the aesthetics of this application. I just need you to fix a few things and you'll be set. @tag me when the edits listed bellow are made. There isn't a pack in the Constitution category called "Fiber Pack" so remove this from your Constitution packs bought. You have 8 Packs purchased in Wisdom with only 7 Investment in that category. As an Ailor however you are allowed to invest up to 8 in a single category, so moving one point investment in Constitution that you have for "Fiber Pack" into Wisdom should fix this. Practiced Speech isn't a special for Ailor anymore, so you would not get the Empire Linguistics pack for free. You only are allowed to purchase one of the Linguist category Packs from the Languages Point Buy, so you would need to choose between North Linguist and Empire Linguist.
Completely just forgot to change the 7 to 8! but I am fixing things now they will be purple (I just forgot to change the total points at the top and didn't see they changed the name to thread pack) let me know if there is anything else! @ChapterDeath
@Annie_Short Dignitary is now called Diplomat Pack so just adjust to the modern pack term and you're set.
