Trilo Quist

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  1. MrYoYo2990

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Trilo Quist
    • Race: Warmland Ailor
    • Age: 19
    • Sex: Male
    • Gender: Male
    • Eye Color: Blue
    Core Concept
    He is a thief named Trilo Quist who aspires to make himself known throughout the world by becoming the mo
    st infamous thief of all.

    He believes in the teachings of the old gods religion but doesn't really practice any of it.

    Proficiency Information

    50/50
    +27 roguery
    +5 perception
    +8 light ranged combat
    +15 dagger combat {+5 racial boosts}
    +10 theatre art {hobby points}
    25 physical
    Ability Information

    Roguery
    rogue gift 1,3,4, and 5
    Sleight of hand pack
    Guard forgery pack
    Government forgery pack
    Burglary pack
    wall climb 3

    Light ranged combat

    light shot
    evading dash

    Racial
    Omniaware 1
    Honed skill 2
    Rogue skill 2

    Languages

    • Common (Free)
    • Bragacao (Parent)
    Appearance Information
    • He has blue eyes and naturally brown hair but changes his hair to black and wears a mask during a heist.
    Life Story

    -Trilo was born to a Braggan merchant named Jose Quist.
    -At the age of 14 he found much success in acting, but being raised in the Bragacao society, he wanted more.
    -He eventually deduced that the fastest way to glory was to go against the law, rather than to operate inside it.
    -After completing the traditional Braggan coming of age ceremony known as Vinda-de-Idade, he left for Regalia
    -He began his journey as a thief, waiting for that big opportunity to have his name shake the world.
     
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    Welcome to Massivecraft! This application has been claimed! Expect a review shortly.
     
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    Please make the following edits and tag me @BiBiBirdie when completed!
    Please update this to say Bragacao, which is the language spoken by Bragacao in line with the linguistics update.
    Please separate this section into where you get these abilities from. For example:
    • Rougery
      • Rogue gift 1-5
      • Wall climb 3
      • Etc.
    Please separate this sentence into a separate paragraph for ease of review.
    Please include your physical stat at the end of this section. With your profs, it would be a total of 25, as Warmland Ailor are capped at 25 Physical Stat!
    Please update this to follow the new 5 bullet point style of life story! I've listed the format required below.
    • 1 bullet point for childhood. Where was your Character born? To whom?
    • 1 bullet point for adolescence. What did they spend their early-mid teenage years doing?
    • 1 bullet point for early adulthood. What path did they embark on?
    • 1 bullet point for advanced years if applicable. Older characters have more accomplishments.
    • 1 bullet point to explain why they came to Regalia.
     
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    BiBiBirdie The Bird Monarch

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    Please make the following edits and tag me when completed!
    You need to include your physical stat at the end of this section. With your profs, it would be a total of 25, as Warmland Ailor are capped at 25 Physical Stat! Please note there at the end of your Proficiency Information section.
    You are missing one choice for your racial abilities here, as Ailor are able to choose three racial abilities from the list.
    You seem to have points invested in sorcery without any abilities listed in your ability section! Please add the spell you bought there.
    Please separate this sentence into a separate paragraph for ease of review.

    In future make sure to tag your reviewer once you make edits (@BiBiBirdie)! I only get notified if you tag me or reply to the thread.
     
  5. MrYoYo2990

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    done
    done
     
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    post to bring trilo back up
     
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    back to the top
     
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    another one
     
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    another one
     
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    and another
     
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    Hello there! Please be patient with reviews. Lore staff are volunteers.

    Otherwise, Approved.
     

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