Played Character Iris

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    • ઇଓ || CHARACTER INFORMATION || to note one's identity. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • « NAME » | Sekar Lintangayah.
        • By Choice | Iris.
      • « RACE » | Pureblooded Kyat Allar.
        • Other | Soulcursed.
      • « AGE » | Twenty-two cycles.
        • Birthday | January 21st, 289 A.C.
        • Astrology | Aquarius.
      • « GENDER » | Fluid.
        • Pronouns | Any pronouns; predominantly she & her.
      • « EYE COLOR » | Butterscotch yellow.
    • ઇଓ || CORE CONCEPT || to note one's personality. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • RELIGION. | Iris follows the Lord of the Full Moon and the Mother of All Mysteries, admiring either Gods' dedication to thwarting the void-tainted and cruel-hearted.
      • IDENTITY. | Iris, a skilled alchemist and artisan, bares Sihina's curse born from the raw hatred of the Void. The young Allar lashes out on her surroundings and punishes those she and her patron deems wicked.
    • ઇଓ || VISUAL INFORMATION || to show one's self. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • MUTATIONS | Iris is mutated. She has pearly white teeth and a body free of any scarring. Her blood bears an oily sheen, and flows like water.
      • APPEARANCE | The blue-scaled Allar has a cranial crest that almost resembles a skull mask. Her build is slight, and she stands no taller than five feet and three inches.
      • SOULCURSED FORM | In her Soulcursed form, Iris's scales shift into a stark white, with stygian black and red highlights around her arms and legs. Any area covered in black shifts to resemble a bug's carapace, shining under the light and covered in harmless spikes. The Allar sprouts butterfly-wing-like crests around her cranial mask, and gains a bigger pair of butterfly wings atop her back (which are useless for actual flight). Iris is recognizable in this form.
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    • ઇଓ || PROFICIENCY INFORMATION || to note one's personality. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • 14/14 Points Used.
      • ⟡. 1 STRENGTH
        • › Diving Tackle. (Free)
        • › Building Scale.
      • ⟡. 0 CONSTITUTION
      • ⟡. 0 WISDOM.
      • ⟡. 1 INTELLIGENCE. (Arctech, Alchemy)
        • › Oceanic. (Free, Mundane)
        • › Safeguard. (Magical)
      • ⟡. 0 DEXTERITY.
      • ⟡. 5 FAITH.
        • › Divine Burn.
        • › Divine Savior.
        • › Divine Antimagi.
        • › Divine Smite.
        • › Divine Aura.
      • ⟡. 7 MAGIC. (Exist)
        • › Magic Warp.
        • › Magic Feather.
        • › Magic Isolate.
        • › Magic Bolster.
        • › Magic Resist.
        • › Magic Smog.
        • › Magic Cleanse.
      • [*]14/14 Points Used.
        [*]⟡. 0 STRENGTH
        • › Diving Tackle. (Free)
        [*]⟡. 0 CONSTITUTION
        [*]⟡. 0 WISDOM.
        [*]⟡. 0 INTELLIGENCE. (Arctech, Alchemy)
        • › Oceanic. (Free, Mundane)
        [*]⟡. 0 DEXTERITY.
        [*]⟡. 7 FAITH.
        • › Divine Burn.
        • › Divine Rescue.
        • › Divine Antimagi.
        • › Divine Smite.
        • › Divine Aura.
        • › Divine Savior.
        • › Divine Aggro.
        [*]⟡. 7 MAGIC. (Exist)
        • › Magic Warp.
        • › Magic Revenge.
        • › Magic Isolate.
        • › Magic Bolster.
        • › Magic Resist.
        • › Magic Smog.
        • › Magic Cleanse.
    • ઇଓ || ABILITY INFORMATION || to note one's powers. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • « CUSTOM KIT » | Soulcursed. ( x )
      • « INTERTWINED SOULS » | Once-Extinguisher, Penitent Veteran - Ailred Drulviirn ( x )
      • « KYAT ALLAR » | Two Free Packs, Five Mechanics.
      • « COMBAT STYLE » | Holy Spellblade.
    • ઇଓ || LANGUAGE INFORMATION || to note one's languages. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • › Common.
      • › Pidato.
      • › Altalar.
      • › Nātl.
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    • ઇଓ || LIFE STORY || to note one's history. .ೃ࿐ 》
      • THE BEGINNING: Sekar was born to a pair of Kyat Allar, within the outskirts of Hadar. Sendrassian agents and Sanguine alike lurked in her Digmaan, marking her family as cattle.
      • CHILDHOOD: The hatchling hardly understood what happened and why. Her memories are hazy.
      • ADOLESCENCE: As Sekar grew older, her rebellious streak emerged. She learned to sneak out of the house and picked up a bit of magic, much to both of her parents dismay.
      • EARLY ADULTHOOD: Freedom arrives, but the Allar is soon enough deprived. The Sendrassians attack, eating, burning, maiming all who cannot run. She loses her father. Her bitter heart swells, culimating into action as she thrusts herself into a dangerous ritual that alters her fate forevermore. She changes her name to abandon her hurt- Iris.
      • PRESENT: Iris soon arrived in Regalia, offering her healing services to her fellow faithful and purposefully getting afflicted in the process.
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    I will be claiming this for Aspirant Review!
     
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    • You are 1 point over for the invested Age points (i.e. at 31 points instead of 30 points).
    • Clarify the proficiencies being used in your Physical Stat calculation.
    Make these changes in Green and then tag me once finished.
     
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    dimetros unironic scalie Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @KrakenLord01 thanks for the pointers! changes have been made in green.
     
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    dimetros unironic scalie Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @KrakenLord01 I re-arranged point allocation in preperation for the ritualism update. The six points I had were split evenly between glass art and circus art. Iriss's phys stat was also bumped up a whole one point thanks to higher investment in circus art, too. All changes have been made in blue!
     
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    Re-approved!
     
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    dimetros unironic scalie Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @KrakenLord01 revamped this sheet almost from top to bottom, changing hyzzop's age, the formatting of the app itself, and her skills. I removed mentions of the Mivver bloodline and werebeast mutations and instead added a vampiric form. her backstory remains largely the same, but other than that, she's a new allar.
     
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    • You are 8 points over the 50 Core point maximum. Please adjust your points accordingly.
    Make changes in different color of choice and tag me when finished.
     
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    dimetros unironic scalie Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @KrakenLord01 perception reduced by five, dagger reduced by 3, and body-stat adjusted accordingly based on change. also added a tiny blurb about her nickname on the top of the app. all in blue.
     
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    Re-approved!
     
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    @KrakenLord01 alchemy update go brrrrrr. her racial boost got shifted from alchemy to science, leaving her with plenty of room for some more profs- all marked in blue. i also updated her religion a bit because cult of order just fits.
     
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    To be reviewed today, sorry for the wait!
     
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    @KrakenLord01 as much as i love brood Iris, i really want to play as a Cahal again. being a brood was retconned and replaced with her dad just being a really shitty dude. i added her cahal form in preparation to play her, and made her changes in blue!
     
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    You'll need to tag for a new reviewer, as I'm no longer staff.
     
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    Godspeed sir
     
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    Requesting new reviewer!
     
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    These changes are all good, but I would advise you update the sheet formatting to the new one! I'll hit approve after giving that a glance over <3 I apologize for the wait you had endured.
     
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    @Carlit0o it's not a problem- i reformatted everything to the new sheet, and trimmed the fat on her backstory so it'd be quicker to read! let me know if anything else is needed!
     
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    Looks great
     
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    @Carlit0o realized that i could've been benefitting from honed skill 1, so i reflected that in iris's arconology knowledge. also remembered to add phys stat and add the refunded points to my pool.
     
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    Alrighty!
     
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    @Carlit0o changed a few things around, namely iris's birth name and the diety her father worshipped. also specified the type of allar she is in accordance to the update. also switched dagger combat to thin blades. used leftover points to re-invest in dagger.
     
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    @Carlit0o profs have been fully readjusted to account for recent changes!
     
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    .. She is dead.
    She died..
    Dead.
    She’s not coming back, unlike him.

    (That was an incredible rp scene though, good drama.)
     
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    @Carlit0o replaced tripwire pack with unarmed combat because it's kind of stupid to have armor rend but no unarmed capability.
     
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    Requesting new reviewer! Got a raid coming up very soon ^^'
     
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    @Caelamus replaced whimsy with afflicted evasion pack for the sake of advanced bugposting.
     
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    @Caelamus vandalism is dead. replaced with burglary so i can keep doing mischief bullshit.
     
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    app's been beauty-fied. still need to swap around points and such.
     
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    @Caelamus it is done. in addition to switching profs, i updated her backstory so it aligned more with her new skills and tried to shift things towards the reworked estellon religion. aesthetics were also very much overhauled. major gameplay(?) changes made in light purple.
     
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    @Caelamus replaced burglary with cover pack.
     
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