༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ ༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ ████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████ ████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████ ༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ || ART || VOICE CLAIM || Character Information =──────── ✧ ────────= Full Name | Cillian Ciaran Hazzard ✧ Nicknames | Killian Hazzard, Kills, Redresser ✧ Affliction | Void Power Silven Race | Ailor ✧ Culture | Gallovian Aontaithe Age | 24 ✧ Birthday | October 5th Sex | Male ✧ Pronouns | He/Him Sexuality | Homosexual Eye Color | Gold with a red limbus Face Claim | Colin Donahue Core Concept =──────── ✧ ────────= Religion: ✧ Killian doesn't worship a higher power. Character Concept: ✧ Killian Hazzard, a foul mouthed Aontaithe, went from a common street rat to an aspiring sorcerer with a passion for violence. ༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ ████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████ ████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████ ༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ Proficiency Information =──────── ✧ ────────= ✧ Strength 2 : Unarmed Pack and Short Blades Weapon Pack ✧ Constitution 2 : Physique Pack, Light Shielding Pack ✧ Wisdom 2 : Dimenthist Wisdom Pack, Volacrum Wisdom Pack ✧ Dexterity 3 : Sleight of Hand Pack, Parkour Pack, Pistol Pack ✧ Magic 3 : Fire, Arcane, and Space Magic ✧ Charisma 2 : Northern Linguist Pack, State Saboteur Pack Abilities =──────── ✧ ────────= Abilities Ailor Abilities Power Silven Abilities (Void) Languages Common (Exposure | 9/10) Aon (Parental/Regional | 10/10) Altalar (Point-buy) ༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ ████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████ ████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████ ༺ ────────=──────── ✧ ────────=──────── ༻ Proficiency Information =──────── ✧ ────────= ✧ | Killian is a silven who draws his power from the void. ✧ | Kills is a lanky 6’2 Aontaithe Ailor with pale skin, Void Silven eyes, and medium length dark hair, usually slicked back and greased, and a beard. Life Story =──────── ✧ ────────= Killian ‘Kills’ Hazzard was born to the Arken of Power, and to Ciara Hazzard, an Aontaithe tradeswoman. From a very young age, he had a knack for getting into places he wasn't supposed to be. From the early age of 13, he rebelled against his workaholic mother, who often wasn't present in Killian’s life. Kills took to stealing from his friends and neighbors, and got affiliated in some local gangs. Kills kept on his path of crime throughout his late teens and early twenties. He learned how to fight from underground fight clubs, where he would learn to adapt his usual sword and dagger oriented combat to a sleeker form of fighting, mostly using his fists. His fighting style is quite unique, in that he will often use moves from swordplay with his preferred weapons. After Killian’s mother died "unexpectedly", he came to the city of Regalia to find more uses for his unorthodox talents, but found another passion, one in sorcery. Now Kills wanders the streets of Crookback wondering where his life will take him.
Please list your physical stat calculation. This section should be expanded on a bit more to explain why he has his current proficiencies and any other key points. It doesn't have to be much longer than it already is but I want to see why he is the way he is a bit more.
Made edits to his life story, added more information to the Physical Stat area, Added voice claim, Added body shape and body weight
You can't use a racial boost unless you've invested ten base points into the proficiency, which would bump it to a 15 at minimum. The only exception is for proficiencies in the special training You've used 44 out of 50 core points here, and no hobby points. Indicate this somewhere on your sheet or use the points you have left. State from which proficiency you are purchasing this from, which I am assuming is sorcery. Same here, indicate that this is from Roguery. section.
I'm assuming you've put your racial boost into this, just make sure that's indicated on there. Otherwise approved.
Approved, though continue to tag Acosmism for future updates. Also make sure to ping your reviewer with an @Caelamus for example, otherwise we don't get notified and it might take longer than necessary for a review to complete.
Claimed for review! App looks good, there's just a few small points that need to be clarified before I can approve: You currently have 26 of 50 points invested, not including 7 unspent hobby points. Would you like to leave these open for IC learning? If so, please add a blurb that says 'x amount of unspent points', just for clarity in review. Please state which plane your character draws their sorcery from. (Exist/Void) Go ahead and tag me once you've made those changes so I can get this reviewed again and approved ASAP, thank you!
That's fine! Please go ahead and list the plane of sorcery where it's mentioned, as I can't approve the app until it's specified in the ability or proficiency tab.
Silven Specials =/= Sorcery. You can be a Void Silven who uses Exist magic and vice versa, they do not impact one another
You can add it here, under Proficiency Information: +3 Arcane Mastery (Void OR Exist Sorcery) Or here under Ability Information: Arcane Mastery (Void OR Exist Sorcery) Either works, but preferably do it for both.