Here is my review: Point accrue until age 60, so your total points is equal to 60, not 65. Because of this, your proficiency points will have to be adjusted. If any of your proficiency changes affect body shape, please correct this as well. Please fix this issue, and your application should be good to go. Tag me with @AlphaInsomnia when you are ready.
Huh, well I totally misunderstood that change then lol! I've made the change. Just bumped down the medical prof. @AlphaInsomnia thanks!
Hiya! Used the Society Prof change of one point as an excuse to change up some aesthetics and add some description in the personality section. Thanks! @AlphaInsomnia
Here is my review: The only issue I see are the points. Points are capped at 60 + 10 hobby. You'll have to remove five of your points. Tag me when you've made the appropriate edits.
Hello! Sorry, idk what dark energy overtook me but I felt the need to redo her profs. Trying to make a stronger concept I guess. Let me know if anythings amiss or if it just seems complicated. Bless <3 @AlphaInsomnia
Made edits according to the recent Race update. The most pressing thingies are in blue. Thanks! @AlphaInsomnia
@HoshiWomp my review: I'm counting 2 extra free hobby points in Baking art. Either allocate some unspent points or lower it to 5 make this one change and tag me when complete.
Hi friend! Thanks for your review! I used my unspent points to fill in the Baking Arts. Sorry I missed that lol. Be well! @FireFan96
Updated for the new application format I’ll tag you @FireFan96 as you were my last reviewer. Thanks for your help! :)
Hello, claimed for review. Please list your physical stat calculation; moreover, when it turns out as a decimal, always round up!
Bumping for re-review. Updated character to new standards(hopefully) and changed some things. Thank you to whoever picks this up! I appreciate it. ❤️
Hello. Here's my review: Basic Information -Please specify which race Ysil is predominatily. I'm assuming half-fin'ullen. Proficiencies -Please specify which artificier branch that was taken for your artificier point buys. -Please adjust your dexterity to note you have two points invested instead of 1 -As well, you do have a free point to use elsewhere as pet husbandry was removed as everyone can have pets now. Please make the above changes, and tag me when your finished or if you have any questions!
@RaggedyGrace Done! (I think?) Though I don't plan on using Technology Branches with my two abilities and instead using it kind of like old Alchemy with potions and salves. Should I dictate a branch regardless? Thank you for your review! <3
Yes, even if its alchemy you still need to choose a branch but its alright if you dont use it. I would suggest chemtech if you lean more on the side of alchemy. Once thats done, your good to go!