Character Information Full Name: Sone Vevveth Nicknames: ℜ, Elmnister, Seraph(Disguised Form name) Race: Saivalthar Age: 149 Sex: Male Sexuality: Heterosexual Eye Color: Dark Brown Core Concept Sone has a faith in following the worship of the Nightmare Arken. One that he tends to hide from others. Sone is a Sorcery Mentor who aims to spread the Arcane out towards the world and gain as many apprentices as he can while keeping demon worshipping and demonic rituals to the side and hidden from the world. Proficiency Information 24 Sorcery (Void) 5 Perception Training 4 Caster Ranged Combat 6 Drawing Art (Demonic Drawings) 3 Alchemy 3 Roguery 3 Arcanology 10 Sculpting (Hobby) Physical Stat: 0 Points Left: 2 Ability Information Sorcery: Darkness 3 Power Curse 2 Power Curse 1 Element Control 5 Light Mend 1 Dark Curse 2 Magic Sight 1 Caster Ranged Combat: (Conduit is a Golden Staff) Spell Shot Arcanology: Ward Knowledge Alchemy: Common Alchemy Roguery Wall Climb 3 Common Kathar Abilities: Kathar Binding 1 Kathar Binding 2 Arcane Mastery 1 Arken Speculate 1 Kathar Ability Pool(Perm): Age Control 1 Emotion Sense 1 Saivalthar Tribe Abilities: Disguised Form 1 Super Self 2 Languages Common (Free) Kathar (Parents) Appearance Information Sone has no mutations but frequently carries a Bronze Horned Mask that contains only the right eye opening of the mask and a layer of black fabric to hide his actual eye. Sone is a very slim person who stands at a height of 6'2 and wears Dread leather styles that were made nearly one hundred years back in the dread empire he grew up in, deciding to be covered entirely at all times. His hair color is Black. Disguised Form 1(Active) Sone appears to be shifted into a young fin'ullen with dark grey hair and light hazel eyes, dressed in a pair of dyed dread armor he previously wore that took on the shade of grey, light gold, and orange. Life Story Sone was born in the deep west under the Dread Empire. He were born under two Saivalthar who sought nothing but to make Sone their greatest creation. Sone's teenage years were harsh as he underwent strict training in the art of Sorcery. He were forced to learn it and were beaten when performing under expectations. Sone heavily despised his parents but understood what needed to be done after he tasted the power of the Arcane. Sone after growing into quite the sorcerer found himself stuck after reaching a limit on what he were capable of with Sorcery. He understood it could only go so far by learning new spells of Sorcery, though wanted something more and embarked on a journey of learning Casting Ranged Spells. He grew into fighting with such combat, efficiently making a name for himself in his homelands. After causing quite the problems for others, he decided to rename himself to ℜ in order to protect his identity from possible assassins or hitman. Sone Gathered as much knowledge as he could with the Arcane and decided to make it his goal to spread that information and knowledge with everyone, wanting to be the sole Mentor of the Arcane itself. Sone came to Regalia for two reasons. The first was he needed to get away from the Dread Empire in order to clear his name and start off fresh as ℜ until the time was right. The second was due to the status of Regalia's size and reputation. He felt it would be great to mentor many of those in Regalia and decided this would be the place he'd spend most of his life in. Progression Information Sorcerer Level 3
@Koyote Hello! Here's my review: Before I give you a full review, I want you to do the following: - Place all non-required information in spoilers - Significantly shorten your life story. As is is, it's very nicely written but it's an absolute wall of text, and when paired with your abundant use of archaic or generally difficult / uncommon adjectives, it makes it hard to read (sorry, my brain is small and I am monke). You can put the current life story in a spoiler, but please provide a non-loquacious bullet list of significant events in your character's lifetime so that's it's not only more palatable for me but other reviewers or readers in the future as well. After you have done this, tag me.
@Lizmun Finished, made the requested changes by spoiling the non-required info. Made the Life Story a spoiler and summarized it in short for the non advanced readers.
@Koyote Here's my first round of reviews: Basic Information - No issues Skill Information - No issues Visual Information - No issues Personality - No issues Life Story - No issues approved
@Koyote Almost! This is a mess up on my part, but, sorcery no longer has any limit on the number of spells you can buy (within reviewer discretion) and only cost 3 points instead of 4. Your current sorcery is set to 20 while you only have 5 abilities, with your current layout sorcery would only coast 15!
@Lizmun Changed the points to fit the current abilities. It is a lot but I'm keeping my remaining points as 26 for future plans.
@Lizmun Changed a few fonts all out the app. Added an appearance spoiler. App is up for re-review since couldn't upload an image without going more into options
@Koyote Reapproved. I will be taking this application going forward, please tag me whenever you make any edits.
@Antimreoir Changed Sone to the reworked Kathar abilities. Spent the rest of the 26 points (Had trouble with rp due to the huge gap missing). App if up for Re-Review.
@Antimreoir Changed Dagger combat to Heavy ranged combat. App is up for re-review. Not sure if it were needed so did it just in case.
@Follower Hello, after some rp i've decided to change a few things around with Sone. Firstly i've decided to remove the +5 fist combat and give him 2 sorcery abilities, that being Light Mend 3 for a source of food, and Magic Sight 1. The intent I had for Sone was for him to gain more of a heavy experience in Sorcery whilst keeping some form of Archery, that being his crossbow with him. Removed any close combat features including Element Brand 5 which there is no longer a use for due to him being only ranged in order to keep close combat a pure weakness of his, and exchanged it for Magic Sight 3. App is up for re-review.
@Follower Changed to the core list for sone. The previous one were just a mess and no one could understand it.
@Follower Set the app to re-review for the overall changes on the past week that being the graal kit, core list on personalities and now a change in points lowering the amount of sorcery abilities down, focusing on range only and fixing a small part in the life story.
@Follower Hey! Small change, - Element control 4 > 5. - Power curse 1 > Element Control 3 Nothing too crazy.
@Follower Scratch that, big update to the format and rework of overall abilities. Changed from heavy ranged to caster range as well, just the points switch.
@Koyote After reviewing your application, only a few things require correction: Your character does not have 15 physical stat, since you have no proficiencies that contribute to physical stat. Please correct this. Your Talents are currently listed incorrectly. You can at most have 3 Talent Points. As such, since Sorcery is higher and I'm assuming you desire a Sorcery and Warrior spread, it would be Sorcery 2, Warrior 1. Once you have made the appropriate changes, tag me once more.
