Lily Camilla Janssen

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    "Le jardin de Monet, Argenteuil" /|/ Claude Monet [1873]

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    Chosen Name: Lily Camilla Janssen
    Full Name: Lily Ailaise-Solarent Aidercoeur Janssen Chouette de Småby
    Nicknames: Snowflake, Janssen, Doctor
    Age: Twenty-Seven
    Date of Birth: 17th of May
    Zodiac: Gemini-Taurus Cusp
    Gender: Female
    Race: Velheimer-Ithanian Ailor
    Eye Color: Blue
    Sexuality: Pansexual
    Preferred Weapon: Her Shield and Words

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    Inter Arma Caritas
    "In War, Charity."

    << Red Cross, 1881>>

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    Lily Janssen is a woman of peace and medicine, not just wishing to help those who are hurting get better, but to see them prosper. She has also picked up diplomatic skills to help further this goal on a larger scale than working as a doctor could. However, she has an inner conflict deriving from her Ithanian mother and her Velheim father, who each pass on occasionally conflicting worldviews onto Lily.

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    "The Love Potion" /|/ Evelyn de Morgan [1903]

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    Proficiency Points (14/14):
    Strength: 0

    Consitution: 2
    -Resilience
    Pack
    -Physique Pack

    Wisdom: 8
    -Affliction Wisdom Pack
    -Hôterie Wisom Pack
    -Amontaar Wisdom Pack
    -Archive Wisdom Pack (Storvel Circle)
    -Artificer Point Buy: 1 (Godsamtro)
    -Medical Pack
    -Technictian Point Buy: 3 (Godsamtro)
    -Lifelink Pack
    -Recall Pack
    -Stimboost Pack

    Dexterity: 0

    Magic: 0

    Charisma: 4
    -Diplomat Pack
    -North Linguist Pack
    -Ancient Speech Pack
    -Mount Husbandry Pack

    Languages:

    Ithanian | Native | Paternal
    Common | Fluent | Parental
    Northern Languages | Fairly fluent | Learned
    Special Traits:
    Manifest Familiar: Snowpaw (Freyja)
    Dark Empathy
    Practiced Mockery
    Manifest Destiny
    Destiny Stressors
    Job Opportunities
    Healing Hands
    Lifelink Engineering
    Redstone Radio
    Steroid Stim
    Endurance Stim
    Speed Stim
    Forced Truce
    Advanced Racial Mount: Cheval du Ciel
    Constable's Belt
    Medical Patent
    Common Patent
    Biotic Patent
    Lifegiver Patent
    Hair-Chem Patent
    Body-Chem Patent
    Appliance Patent

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    Per Humanitatem ad Pacem

    "With Humanity, towards Peace."
    << Red Cross, 1961 >>

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    Mutations: Lily is (currently) not mutated.
    Physical Description: Lily is a small woman standing at 5'1" with fair skin, wavy blonde hair, and blue eyes. She is often seen wearing extravagant clothes, blending Velheim and Ithanian fashions.
    Disguises: Lily has no disguises.


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    【 Alignment / STEADFAST
    Lawful Good /|/ "Stand with anybody that stands right. Stand with him while he is right, and part with him when he goes wrong." Abraham Lincoln
    【 Personality / AMELIORATE
    Advocate (INFJ) /|/ "Treat people as if they were what they ought to be and you help them to become what they are capable of being." Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
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    "Into whatever homes I go, I will enter them for the benefit of the sick"

    Ορκος

    << The Hippocratic Oath >>

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    | BIRTH |
    Lily Caroline Janssen was born on May 17th, 283 AC in the outer regions of Nordskag. She was an only child to a Velheim Hunter/Fisher and an Ithanian nurse who had moved there the year before. She quickly took after her mother more than her father, wanting to be with her nearly all the time.

    | YOUNGER YEARS |
    While Lily was stuck with her mother at the clinic, she quickly showed interest in the prospect of helping others. So, from a rather young age, she was taught how to help people by her mother. During that same time, her father tried to force her to learn how to defend herself. However, he was unsuccessful at best, hindered by her adamant pacifism. So, she grew up mainly knowing the ways of medicine. However, her father helped to teach her how to properly ride a horse so she could join on hunts in case anyone needed medical attention.

    | TEENAGE - YOUNG ADULT YEARS |
    After she had turned fifteen she took an interest in her appearance, working to make herself look more desirable. But, she also wanted to explore the world and expand her knowledge. She first went to the capital of Nordskag to learn diplomacy and all the northern languages. She then went South, to the Ithanian Sovernty, to formalize her medical education. Finally, she went even further South to Amontaar to learn their views on diplomacy. Finally, to round her trip out, she traveled back up to Nordskag to learn how to create and service Godsamtro Tech.

    | CURRENT YEARS |
    Lily has since mastered Godsamtro Tech and brought all her skills to the grand city of Regalia to help those around Ailoria, with the assistance of her family's wealth and her own influence.


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    "The Good Samaritan" /|/ Émile Édouard Nicolet

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    @SleepyIsVerySlep Howdy, I'll be picking up this application from here on out. That being said, it looks good. Reapproved.
     
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    @Antimreoir Edited backstory, and please delete all other comments on this page
     
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    @Antimreoir Profs should now be all corrected for the current system! If I'm re approved, can you also clear out the comments on this thread?
     
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    You cannot get racial bonuses by invested 5 points anymore, it requires a 10 point investment, please rectify this for Alchemy. Besides that, all good. I'll clear out the thread too @SleepyIsVerySlep
     
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    done and done
     
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    @Antimreoir Need re-approve for the Medical update!
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Messtro Need re-approval for alchemy update, as well as added shield prof. Updated life story to explain
     
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    @Messtro Got rid of Perception as it wasn't useful to me, and spent the rest of my points to achieve the other two northern languages, and achieve the unlocked language, as well as buy ithanian. Finally, i dumped my last two points into strength training and horticulture art. This should be the last change for a while.
     
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    @Messtro played around with prof points, mainly deleting schooling, and replacing it with linguistics, giving me three more languages. I also added the progression talents, let me know if I need to update the format of everything as well
     
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    Approved.
     
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    not going to ping, but updated to be compliant with new ailor lore
     
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    @Volaie Updated Profienceny and abilities to be in line with new ailor update
     
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    @Volaie i hav update. god speed my dude. Also, please clear all comments
     
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    Approved!
     
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    Bumping this for a Re-Review, Updated from old Alchemy system, shuffled points around!
     
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    Claimed for review!
     
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    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Hello! Here's my review:

    Basic Information
    -Please add Lily's eye color as it is apart of the current character template.
    -Please add a core concept and religion. I see in the personality section that Lilly is a old gods worshipper, you can just move that up to this section and remove from the other.
    Skill Information
    -Just something to note, but you have only used 13/14 points with your current proficiency spread. I would suggest noting that in the part above.
    -Please add the Storvel Circle in parentheses next to your archive wisdom pack. It makes it hard to read a little bit.
    Languages
    -Please replace D'Ithanie with Skodje. When reviewing the life story, Lilly grew up primarily in velheim territory and culture. She would likely have that as her native tongue moreso than d'ithanie. Maybe switch that with the west language pack or empire linguistics if you wish to keep both.
    Visual Information
    -Please reformat this section to fit with the current character application template.
    Life Story
    -Lily's life story is a bit long especially in her teenage/young adult years and current years. Please try to condense these down into a single paragraph bullet.
    -Also please add when Lily would be trained to be an Amontaar feather as there is no current mention of it in the current life story.

    Please make these changes, and tag me when your done!
     
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    Sorry for the preemptive tag before I get to fixing the issues, but I had some questions/clearifications on these two points
    A) Lily's eye color is mentioned in the Visual Information section, would you like me to move that elsewhere?
    B) Lily's mother is Ithanian, and that's where she learned d'Ithanie from, is this acceptable? I make note of this both in roleplay and on the sheet here, so please lmk
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    Hello, and your okay!
    A) Yes, please move this from the Visual Information as to follow the current character template.
    B) I suppose this can work. The thought still stands that if Lily grew up in velheim territory, skodje would be her native tongue over d'Ithanie with the West Linguist pack covering her mother's language. If that makes sense.

    If you have anymore questions, feel free to just tag me here!
     
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    @RaggedyGrace I believe that's everything!
    In addition, I spent the last point I missed into the Physique Pack, and I added one more Technitan special (Appliance Patent)
     
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    You forgot to add Lily's eye color to basic information, but other than that Approved!
     
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    @RaggedyGrace No, its there. Does it need to be its own section?
     
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    Yes, it needs to be move to the basic information section.
     
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    ah my apologies, ill fix that
     
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