Layla Monou

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    @Staff Roleplay
    I might need a new staff member to look over my sheet since Arhbi is no longer working as one of the staffs..
    I updated her archblood abilities due to the Archblood changes~None have been used yet so I just put all the abilities she could use for now with them.
    Removed the archblood languages since they are no longer in the update.
    Removed Perception points and used those points for Heavy ranged combat.
    At somepoint I changed my dancing hobby points into husbandy art points.
    That and I changed her race to the Half Race a Feka if its allowed.
     
    #41 LilyMCD, Sep 18, 2021
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    @Kana__Rose Hello I have picked up this application for review, expect a reply with 48 hours.
     
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    @Kana__Rose Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    Wanted to rework somethings with the racial abilities, switching it for the more asha abilities instead of the ailor woaden ones. Using the other parent as the predominant one for the the asha abilities. If that is allowed.
     
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    @Kana__Rose You may, however be sure to include the appropriate aesthetic features to match, in the Asha Tail, and Asha ears. Also, due to the recent changes to Linguistics, please modify your application to match, and tag me once more once you have done so.
     
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    @Follower
    I made sure to include the appropriate aesthetic features with skinning wise but would you like me to put it in visuals too on the forum? I fixed the Linguistics- Still have Altalar as the second birth language and Daen and Ithanian as ther learned languages.
    Swapped out Sulvaley for Ithanian.
    Thank you for the reviewing and help!
     
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    @Kana__Rose Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    Hey I decided to remove husbandry art and replaced it with Warlash combat!
     
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    Claimed for review.
    I'd like you to slim down on this, per the new formatting, and try to keep the detailing to a minimum. For instance, keeping the killing to 'betrayal and revenge' in a few skim words. I only need two-three sentences for each grouping of lifetime.
     
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    @Volaie
    Okay so I looked back on the new update of forum pages
    ~Changed where she was born, but that doesn't affect anything since she was living in Regalia a week later after that.
    ~Fixed it where there was only the main details in the story, but did keep the story in spoilers underneath.
    ~Mostly just touched up some things that were not needed or repositioned some areas like Eye color,removing preferred weapon.
    Didn't mess with progression talents since I did not think that would be applied for her.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Volaie
    Got a whole new list for you with the new prof update, but take your time!
    What changed besides the new proficiency update!
    • Changed back to mundane.
    • Added the vamp abilities back
    • Fixed visuals due to removement of archbloods.
    • Fixed the update with abilities in her race.
    • Language has changed too but that is only due to prof update.
     
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    Approved, but just so you know, this part is messed up haha
     
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    @Acosmism

    Added another point buy! Just added ice magic pack.
    Oh as well as adding in the automata point buy pack from engineering, though that is a free one from the asha ability (Feka Gifted)
     
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    Reviewed, changes are fine, Approved!
     
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