Alban Koning

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  1. notjayp

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Alban Koning
    • Race: Ailor
    • Age: 23
    • Sex: Male
    • Ideology: Collectivist
    • Chosen Weapons: Venom and Virtue
    • Eye Color: Gold with a red limbus
    Core Concept
    • Alban is a Tenpenny Silven Mage who wants others to see him as he sees himself; he is an unruly follower of Emended Unionism, and his patrons are the Lovers.
    Proficiencies
    • 8 Strength
      • Duelist Pack (Technique Parry)
      • Hunter Pack (Concussive Strike)
      • Unyielding Pack (Steady Body)
      • Demolisher Pack (Force Smash)
      • Frenzy Pack (Berserker Fury)
      • Bruiser Slam Pack (Bruiser Slam)
      • Bruiser Feint Pack (Bruiser Feint)
      • Bruiser Agony Pack (Bruiser Agony)
    • 3 Constitution
      • Counterplay Pack (Rage Counter)
      • Recovery Pack (Bonfire)
      • Ironheart Pack
    • 0 Wisdom
    • 2 Dexterity
      • Parkour Pack
      • Trickery Pack (Dirty Fighter)
    • 1 Void Magic
      • Displacing (Arcane Knockback)
    • 0 Charisma
    Abilities
    • Ailor Specials
    • Pride Silven Specials
    • Void Magic Specials: Chain Break, Mage Weapon, Element Control
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Anglish (Native)
    Appearance Information
    • Alban has mutated eyes, the telltale sign of Silvenism.
    • Alban is five foot ten and androgynous. He has muted crimson hair swept into a ponytail.
    Life Story
    • Alban was born in the heart of Crookback. His sickly father barely looked after him, too stuck in the past to consider the present. He supplanted a bygone age’s bigoted ideals unto the child, along with an outlet: A mace.
    • A run-in with a Sanguine forced the two to find refuge in the streets. He quickly turned to crime to make ends meet, and he cared for his father out of desperation for approval.
    • Time passed, and as Alban was ushered into adulthood, he was deeply rooted in the politics of the slums. He was shoved under an ex-Tenpenny's wing and trained among other children, befriended by Harlow Ketch. Mirroring his mentor he volunteers then deserts in the Dread War, making it back home by the skin of his teeth.
    • His father left him to retire in Anglia, leaving him isolated. He was quickly plucked up by Qalhata Dzekh'aar and molded into a freedom fighter. With the help of the Hexenblood he found the error in his ways and redeemed himself in his eyes, and passed off his prized possessions as the ultimate "fuck you" to his past self.
    • Regalia is his home: it always has been, and it always will.
     
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    #1 notjayp, Sep 27, 2020
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    @notjayp
    Everything looks in order!
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    @Athelois i did an oopsie with the union blessings but it shouldnt affect much since i haven't used any of em, the changes are in blue
     
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    @Athelois swapped off archan after realizing just how limiting it made character decisions, and didn't work for the direction i want the char to go in. added previous infection and fixed backstory accordingly. small prof change included. changes in red
     
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    Everything looks good! Reapproved!
     
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    @Athelois added aesthetics + profs + backstory redo in preparation for silven, a good few changes so no color change
     
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    @Athelois small point update. axed darkness sorcery for continuity's sake (a mentor swapped sorceries + didn't fit the character in retrospect thematically) so i returned them to the point pool and reinvested. along with this alban got a new pet for wintertide so i updated that for husbandry art as well. i also put in some talent points to use since i'm here. have a good new year!
     
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    @Athelois alban got infected with vampirism B) no changes besides that
     
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    @Athelois not anymore he got cured but i still need the approved tag :(
     
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    @Athelois new prof update. added a few sorcery spells that match what i'm going for, lost some physical stat in the process :( but it's all good!! i reworked the lifestory since the knight stuff changed a little as well. i like the update thank you for the hard work!!
     
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    @Athelois Edits:
    • Added Arconology, Bodycare, Volacorum, some Sword Combat & brought spells up by two. At max profs now
    • Added two expansions
    • Another lifestory facelift incoming since I'm never satisfied with my writing
     
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    @Athelois my perm got updated B) so i redid proficiencies:
    • added fist combat
    • removed volacorum, lack of use
    • added circus art (for obvious reasons)
    • added 1 more sorcery spell (element brand)
     
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    @Athelois manathar update. swapped 2 sorc spells out since they were copied + removed 5 husbandry. also incoming life story uprooting, taking out essalonia entirely, just have to work up the motivation to write all that
     
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    @Athelois edited life story, cut it down a lot. sorcery overhaul as well. pls approve
     
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    Picking up for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    seethe.

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    @Yurs i had a skill issue pls re review (updated format and profs)
     
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    wrong.

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    @Yurs habibi please rereview
     
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    لقد وافقت. تم إرسال عنوان منزلك إلى الميليشيا الإيرانية للتقييم.
     
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    @notjayp you didn't set it to 'needs re-review' sorry I can't do anything until you do that sorry!!
     
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    fix this please!
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    whoah, dude, that was a sick flip
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    @sonofthestars Updated character application to reflect new changes to Silven & added Demonology so I could go down a Rhaast arc approve now
     
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    still haven't fixed this!
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    Have you checked if your michaelwave is running?
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    @sonofthestars locking in prof changes for foreseeable future. approve me
     
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    still not fixed.
    approved!
     
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    @sonofthestars Brought Alban's app back up to date. Might redo Magic Point-buy once the overhaul comes around but for now it's all set.
     
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    Remains unfixed.
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