Played Character Ealireleia Carbelliirn

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    Ealireleia Aleezahc Carbelliirn
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    Character Information
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    • Full Name: Ealireleia Aleezahc Carbelliirn Dar-Bard Raz-Tol Torhasiel
      • Title: Sera, Rank-Knight of the Basileon Chapter, Bloodcast Order
    • Race: Kathar
      • Subrace: Reason Cult
    • Age: 101
      • Birthday: March 3rd, 209 A.C
      • Zodiac: Taurus
    • Sex: Female
    • Gender: Cisgender Female
      • Pronouns: She/Her/They/Them
    • Sexuality: Polyamorous Homosexual
    • Occult: Unionist Paladin
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    Core Concept
    • Ealireleia is a Bloodcast Knight who follows Evintarian Unionism. Evintarianism being compatible with Katharic world views of self evolution and improvement. As a Bloodcast, she aims to better herself, her people’s status in Regalia, and to protect those who cannot protect themselves while rooting out corruption. Meanwhile, making a name for herself in arena fights.
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    Proficiency Information
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    • Strength: 7 | Prefers using various Greatswords.
      • Melee Combat Point Buy | Technique Parry Pack, Battle Flurry Pack, Unyielding Strike Pack
      • Bruiser Point Buy | Bruiser Stance (Included), Bruiser Slam Pack, Bruiser Flurry Pack, Bruiser Agony, Bruiser Tackle
    • Constitution: 4
      • Training Point Buy | Rage Counter, Debuff Endurance, Rebound Pack, Interception
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Arcane: 0
      • Sinistral Point Buy | Sinistral Rage (Racial), Sinistral Implode (Racial
    • Faith: 3
      • Paladin Point Buy | Divine Smite, Divine Savior, Exorcism
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    Languages
    • Native Language | Pannarokh
    • Free Language | Common
    • Fluent | Altalar, Anglisch
    • Proficient | Calem, D’Ithanie
    • Able | Etos
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    Appearance Information
    • Ealireleia has long wavy, auburn hair that cascades down to her waist. Her ashen skin is light gray as a signature of her kind, and stands at a height of 6’6. She sports a pretty ripped body build with average body fat. Ealireleia also has various Katharic geometric tattoos with some latent Evintarian Unionist symbology, as inspired of her heritage and faith. These tattoos cover her arms in sleeves, her back, and around the neck.
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    Life Story
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    • Ealireleia was born in the region of Mineria, in a small coastal city of Tol Torhasiel that was a pit stop for sea traders. Her mother’s name is Allannia, who was a sorceress who used magic for healing. Her father’s name is Selenar, a soldier and tactician that served in the military.

    • Ealireleia had a happy childhood, and was mostly occupied with doing what kids do with her various childhood friends. However, she wanted to become a Knight one day at her young age, and help people. At sixteen years old, Ealireleia would become a squire under Rank-Knight Joeri van Brum in the Basileon Chapter of the Bloodcast order.

    • Ealireleia graduated at twenty four years old and became officially a Rank-Knight of the Bloodcast Order. Opting to and travel throughout Mineria to aid the people, and keep an eye on the nobles to keep corruption in check.

    • Ealireleia took part in a number of wars Regalia has partook in throughout her lifespan. Often going back and forth between Mineria and Solleria meanwhile to do her day to day Bloodcast duties.

    • Ealireleia moved to Regalia to take advantage of the plentiful opportunities a large city has, whether to serve her home of Mineria, or to serve the wider Regalian Empire. Hoping to find her fortune, fame, and bring aid to the common people and upper class however that might be. However, when investigating a coven of secretive Vampires, she was kidnapped, and killed. Her body dumped outside a sewer tunnel, but to wake up an Archblood. Some time later in 310 A.C, Archblood’s were given a choice to be cured or become Archon, which Ealireleia chose to be cured of her ailment. For some time she moved back to Mineria to visit her family once more before opting to return to Regalia, where her story continues.
     
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    @fantuinn I did a massive overhaul, didn't really like her previous design. Changes are mostly proficiency and life story in red. I did remove sorcery too, which leaves nothing for special traits/magic/etc, so I removed that section.
     
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    @Paganizm I'll be picking up this review. Everything looks good, approved!
     
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    @Azas Ealireleia reached her 100th birthday! Increased her age by one and decided to shift some profs to give her 5 vocal singing, taking 5 from the 10 general command and reducing it to 5 general command. Changes are in red.
     
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    @Azas Only change I made was add a sibling in her lifestory. It's marked in red.
     
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    @Azas Proficiency points updated.
     
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    Approved
     
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    @Azas Revamped the sheet a bit. Racials updated for current Kathar racials, switched some proficiencies around too.
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Last second switched out Glaive Combat for Stave Combat, felt Atrave Staves fit what I'm looking for better.
     
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    @Azas Was unhappy with a shield and stave combo, found it too strong for my liking. So I changed it to Greatsword primary with a mace secondary as outlined on Akhl'xarak, Canak'bor discipline.
     
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    @Azas You're going to understandably be annoyed, but Ealireleia has died IC and became an Archblood. So I'm tagging for re-review. I'm not gonna bother tagging for a re-review if she changes allegiance to lets say Exist or Ordial.
     
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    @Azas I changed her hair color, people kept thinking her hair looked more pink than anything so I had it changed to noticeably copper-like Dark Copper Auburn hair tone.
     
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    @Azas Major change is mostly the aesthetics included. Not a lot was changed from the original though.
    - Added to Basic Info, changed sexuality ( ic self discovery of 'maybe i am actually gay' )
    - Changed the Clothing part of the Visual Info. Gotta show some new tats.
    - Only other change are some grammatical corrections to the life story. Everything is mostly word to word from before.
     
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    @Azas imsosorry but with the new Knight Order out, I re-written her app to be an Aranarth Knight, changed profs around to fit such, and the backstory ofc.
     
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    I was a big dumb and didn't realize I didn't need to change her sword use from Greatsword to normal swords. So I changed it back. Left out maces though to keep within Knight Order styles.
     
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    @Yoggery doing a quick skim while on my break, if you choose to make your character a knight they cannot attend any other schools. So you will either have to remove the knighthood or rework the profs to remove the additional schooling. Entirely up to you.

    Once you make your decision you can tag Azas to finish up your review.
     
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    @Azas The fixes has been made. Kept Ealireleia a knight, but took out the additional schooling point buy. Dumped the six points into other proficiencies instead including just adding another language.
     
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    @Yoggery Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    @Follower Mostly only tried to fix the aesthetics but failed. Only changes to the words of the sheet itself is in regard to the Archblood update. Changes done in red.
     
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    @Yoggery Everything seems to be in order, Approved. Just keep in mind that because your character is an Exist Corrupted Archblood, you only have access to the Primal Base Kit and the Exist Corruption Kit.
     
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    @Follower No significant changes. Just swapped Arken Sense 1 for Arken Speculate 1 with the new ability change.
     
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    @Yoggery Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    @Follower Completely revamped the app format to the current format. There was also a few changes to proficiencies, among others, due to the total rewrite into a different format, I didn't bother coloring in anything as the whole sheet is under review. (Note too, she was an Archblood before it became a special perm, her sort've death was done IC)
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Didn't realize Follower's no longer staff until after I posted the revision.
     
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    App looks great! Very solid, no changes needed.

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    @Yurs Added a relationship section. No need for a re-review since nothing else was changed.
     
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    @Yurs I decided I wanted to take part in Knight RP. While she was already an Aranarth, I voided it since I heard that was being removed. Now I want to bring bacc knight stuff into the character so I re-wrote her into a Bloodcast. Necessary changes in red and an extra name being added to the relationship section.
     
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    Looks great! The Bloodcast Knight angle is super neat, I'm a big fan.

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    @Yurs A complete revamp of this character and her sheet. Here's a list of changes, which are marked in red.
    • Her name was formerly Ealireleia Carbellenor, which sounded a little too Allorn for a Kathar with the current Kathar lore. So I completely changed her name to Velirellonn Aleezahc Kharbelliirn Dar-Bard Raz-Sciermanna (Sciermanna region of Anchal Sollen being where she's from). Sounds a bit more Katharic.
    • She's no longer an Archblood. When Archblood were given the choice to be cured or turn to Archon, she chose to be cured.
    • Updated her proficiency information to the current system. POG!!!
    • Added onto and edited her life story to reflect name changes.
    • Pog pog her birthday passed without her even knowing cause old elf. Aged up, among other character information changes.
    • Yeah. Mostly updates to current standards and lore, with some personal changes.
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Need a new reviewer, and putting up the whole application for review once more since LOTS were changed.
    Notable changes...
    - Renamed her back to Ealireleia, that's generally how most people know her. Just minor adjustments to her old surname, Carbellenor to Carbelliirn to fit a Katharic naming convention.
    - Huge backstory overhaul.
    - Still a Bloodcast Knight, just mentions of the old Blucherwald Castle lore changed to Wit Uilenburg.
    - Proficiencies changed.
    - Ealireleia is now an Evintarian Unionist, Evintarianism fits Cult of Reason Kathar well tbh!!

    Didn't color anything to focus on, the whole sheet needs re-review for the most part. <3
     
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    Sorry about the wait, school got really hectic!
    • Magic still needs to be Void-sourced even as a Reason Kathar, only Cult of Light gets Exist.
    Make changes and tag me when finished.
     
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    @KrakenLord01 Fixed. Didn't realize I put exist instead of void. Oops! Fix is colored red
     
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