Grigoku Xurganth Ydag

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  1. GSG5970

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    Basic Information

    • Full Name: Grigoku Xurganth Ydag

    • Nicknames: Grigu, Grig, Xurg

    • Age: 20

    • Gender: Male

    • Race: Allar(Als-Allar) (physical stat limit=15)

    • Sexuality: Straight
    Inventory Information

    • Personal Journal

    • Necklace Jewelry

    • Potion of Healing, Fire Resistance, and Splash Potion of Poison


    Skill Information

    50 skill points (50 used)

    • Ranged Light Combat= Light Shot,(4 points main) Evading Shot (8 points main)

    • Melee Combat= Dagger Combat, (5 points main) Sword Combat (8 points main)

    • Alchemy Science= 25 points main (+15 racial boost)

    • Roguery= Guard forgery pack (3 points), Sleight of Hand Pack (3 points), Rouge gift 5 (3 points), Rouge gift 4 (3 points), Wall climb 3 (3 points)
    10 hobby points

    • Culinary Arts: Cooking Art (points 3 hobby), Brewing Art (points 4 hobby)

    • Nature: Pathfinding Art (3 hobby points)

    Body Shape
      • Slim Lean Body Shape

      • Average Body Fat

      • Physical stat 20.5
    Languages

    • Allar Language Parent

    • Common: Free

    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations

    Racial:

    • Body Mend 2

    • Skin Purge 1

    • Honed Skill 1

    • Super Self 3

    • Allar Biology 1
    Visual Information

    • Eye Color: Hazy Blue

    • Hair Color: none

    • Hair Style: none

    • Skin Color: Pear Green

    • Clothing:

    • Cloth dark forest green robes with a fading color of dark cyan covering every part of his body except for his light green tail and yellow singular horns on the side of his head

    • A gold necklace with a light emerald jewel in the middle of the chain around his neck above his robes

    • Dark brown leather compression gloves to expose his silver claws

    • Carved out wooden mask painted white to cover face, holes for eyes and mouth are made however aren't very visible and only expose a bit of his eyes

    • A blue leather belt for holding potions whenever needed

    • Silver Iron chains around each leg, proof he has done crime in the past and has been punished

    • Height: 6’0
    Personality

    • Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

    • Personality Type: Architect

    • Religion: 0/10 (barely religious)


    Life Story


    Childhood: Grigoku Xurganth Ydag was born as an only child living in the beaches of Hadar, despite that his family had to keep up a family business of brewing up delicious goods for all Allars as shopkeepers. Once they were done with work however they would teach Grigoku how to brew, cook, and eventually create potions but only simple ones. It wouldn’t be until a while the Grigoku would actually learn to create what he was taught properly. Eventually Grigoku learned how to swim before he hit puberty and when that came along he was able to control his new abilities of fast swimming and controlling his tail. Besides his family, it was hard for him to open up to others and didn’t have many friends. Either way it was ok because he had his family and was able to eventually be a part of the family business.


    Early Adulthood: At age 14 Grigoku’s life would turn for the worst as his family would have to deal with raiders. Ailorians would migrate over to his island, at first his parents were skeptical but accepted them into society. Grigoku would ask his parents to take the shift for him whenever Ailorians came to shop. With the amount of regals the family got they were able to support themselves more and could buy jewelry, his mother bought a nice golden necklace with a shiny emerald in the center. One day however Grigoku saw that some Ailorians were raiding the nearby beach searching for treasures as he called out to his parents and they slithered in front of him to see what was happening. Eventually the parents demanded that the robbers stopped at once but yet to no prevail they kept scrapping and searching. Grigoku’s father then smacked an Ailor away with his tail, the robbers fled but promised that they would bring back more people. Grigoku was scared but his father and mother didn’t seem too worried but that would only lead to arrogance and the last time they would see their son.

    The very next day Grigoku woke up to see his mother place her necklace around his neck, gave him a journal, and demanded that he leave as from above Ailor robbers came and were ambushing their household. Grigoku didn’t know what to do but just jumped out from a window and ran away as he hid in the ocean as he saw that his father was fighting off the Ailor robbers to his best might as he saw his son swim off into the distance. Soon enough Grigoku ran to a stranded island somewhat far from Hadar, but didn’t know what to do. He created a living for himself with what he could and wrote to himself recipes of what his parents taught him, however every time he would write about them he’d sob up with tears just thinking about his memories with them and how with his new life he’d be waiting for them soon to assume that they were dead.


    Present Day: After 6 years of living, Grigoku scraped together robes created from cloth in the forest of his island and taught himself everything about alchemy. He’d even carve weapons that were lost at sea and use them in combat against the wild life that would live there. Grigoku then saw a ship pass by heading north from Hedar, and soon a poster flew by from the ship into his his hands that said “Regalia” he knew somewhat of what it was and decided to go follow the ship but before he did, he created a mask out of wood and splattered paint on it to make it white and soon after he jumped into the ocean with his personal goods and followed the ship to Regalia through the sewers of Crookback and soon learn the life of Roguery
    and business and eventually live within the waters.
     
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    Last edited: Jul 10, 2021
  2. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for review!
     
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    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    @GSG5970 Apologies, I thought I posted a reply earlier, but it never sent.

    Your application is out of order of the format, and I tried to review it but it ended up confusing me because my brain is square shaped. If you could please, organize your application in the order of the template then tag me!
     
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    @GSG5970 Apologies for the delay, work has kept me dead.

    The only issue I have found with this app is this: You cannot have more than 20 points invested into anything. Racial boosts only give you +5 point boosts, not +15
     
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