Basic Information Full Name: Khafra Talaat Age: 33 Gender: Male Race: City Asha (Legacy of Forgiving) Preferred Weapon: Speech Core Concept Khafra is a Dogmatic Unionist Asha who has spent most of his life in the Lothar Order, viewing the Occult less so with personal hatred and more so with a pragmatic need to clear them out for public safety. Calm and studious, he wishes to see a world that no longer fears the unknown powers from beyond the Veil. Proficiencies Strength: 1 Steady Body Constitution: 4 Rebound Debuff Endurance Rage Counter Wisdom: 3 Tech Sanction (Living Metal) Tech Hook (Living Metal) Tech Antimagi (Living Metal) Arcana Protect [Free & Mundane Tech; Legacy of Forgiving] Dexterity: 6 Cutthroat Backstab Cutthroat Target Cutthroat Dodge Cutthroat Flank Cutthroat Evasion Cutthroat Timer Magic: 0 Faith: 0 Languages Common Ibeth (Native) Appearance Khafra is a 5'8" feline Asha with green eyes and orange fur, usually wearing either an indigo suit or a dark purple Krsnik uniform. Plot Hooks Khafra is foremost a Krsnik Lothar Knight, and as such is opposed to the Occult in all forms. He is a Dogmatic Unionist but is on friendly terms with Baskarr worshipers, still having some cultural ties with them and having mutual respect as Baskarr is mostly an anti-magic religion. Partially a scholar, he enjoys diving into the study of history and archaeology to find out more of the past.
@KrakenLord01 Here is my review: Basic Information - No issuesSkill Information - Include Racial abilities in your skills section.Visual Information - No issuesPersonality - This is more of a personal nitpick and if this was the only point I had on the application I would approve it anyway, but, You can't really be Lawful Neutral OR Chaotic Neutral, since... Lawful and Chaotic are opposites of the same spectrum. Just go true neutral if your character bridges the middle, or has the tendency to lean either way. HOWEVER. The following of a personal moral code sounds more 'chaotic' to me than 'lawful', as 'lawful implies more of following laws imposed by others, and 'chaotic' is following your own moral laws, or none at all.Life Story - No issues Please fix the issue in the skills section and then tag me.
@Lizmun Updated the Racial Abilities, but also switched out Government Forgery for Sleight of Hand. All changes made in Green.
@Lizmun I decided to better emphasize the pirate side of Khafra with the following changes: Took out Honed Skill 4 while also taking out 3 points from Circus Arts. Added the Yacht-Tier ship that's acquired after investing 10 points into Sailing Arts. Transferred 6 points into Admiral Schooling for both the Zarmanh Asha College and the Silverwind Pirate Commune. Updated Physical Stat due to Prof changes, and Body Shape to reflect being a Senef. Made changes to Life Story to reflect Schooling. All changes made in Green.
CRP build entirely changed from Charisma to Dexterity / Cutthroat since the Charisma stat got nuked Khafra is now Legacy of Forgiving instead of Legacy of Rule since Charisma isn't a thing anymore Finally got rid of Darkwald Archive, replaced with Tech Antimagi
