Played Character Carmen Vincenzo

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    The Witch of Shadow and Storm…
    La strega dell'ombra e della tempesta
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    { visuals. I II III }
    ───
    " I have walked in the blackest depths,
    You cannot guess what spells I have cast, what poisons I have gathered to protect myself
    How your power may rebound upon your head,
    Who knows what is in me? Will you find out? ”
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    CIRCE, MADELINE MILLER

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    INVENTORY…

    › A black velvet choker with a silver Cimaruta amulet. Inscribed in the middle of the pendant is a diamond-shaped piece of laqoria.
    › A macabre rosary made of garnet and ox bone beads. Various bronze charms like Dressolini coins, crosses, and horns hang around the Unionist Eye at the end of the prayer beads.
    › One coin purse, carrying a mix of regals and birdseed.

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    WEAPONRY…
    › An ornate longsword. The blade is made of Blacksteel with various Unionist glyphs dedicated to Elia and Eirlys inscribed on it. A dark bronze makes up the hilt which is modeled to look like a pair of angel wings with a Unionist Eye in the middle.
    › A twin set of stiletto daggers. Each hilt is bound with dark leather and bears the crest of the Penn Archwilio Chapterhouse.
    › A shield crafted out of marble and gold that's strong as steel. Symmetrical patterns that tell a story mark every edge of the shield, all depicting Carmen in battle. Carmen received this as a gift from the Mother of Serenity.

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    MORE PLOT HOOKS & PERSONALITY..
    As a member of the Penn Archwilio Chapter, Carmen has made frequent appearances across the Regalian Archipelago on missions. Her assignments range from hunting renegade mages, pushing magical boundaries to reveal potential threats, and patrolling for new discoveries. Other characters may have encountered her on her journeys.

    Carmen engages in all the Aelrrigan jobs in the City, but her focus mainly lies on investigating occult events and ensuring safe magic usage. Other characters may have joined her on patrols, or they may have been harshly interrogated and pursued.

    Early in her youth, Carmen was taught God Magic by mentors in Canolbarth. Her magic is majorly combative. It manifests as bolts of lightning, warped shadows, and harsh burning light. The light takes the shape of religious symbols like the Unionist Eye and other tomes/emblems. Despite being God Magic sourced (holy and bright), her magic has an unsettling and threatening aura (Void influences.)

    Carmen enjoys painting, reading, and singing opera. She prefers literature of the gothic subculture and non-fiction. Her paintings consist of eerie settings, landscapes from her travels, or portraits of loved ones.

    The sorceress presents herself as stubborn, cold, and disagreeable. Despite her prickly demeanor and sharp tongue, she is loyal to her own and cares deeply for those she holds close. Those not a part of her inner circle do not get the personal/vulnerable display of affection and protectiveness.

    Carmen is cunning and ambitious. She prides herself on her intelligence and her ability to use every resource offered to her. One of the primary cores of her identity is her self-assuredness and the ability to complete her goals. She is above personal feelings and is practical in pocketing emotions to not act rashly or impulsively in dire situations.
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    @Lizmun moved hunting points to husbandry & added drahl boost
     
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    Please list what animals you're gaining through your husbandry boost, then I'll approve you. Tag me when you do!
     
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    animals listed! @Lizmun
     
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    @Lizmun made some changes to points - moved the 2 unused into cooking art & swapped super self 1 in sorcery for dueling brand 1
     
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    @Lizmun profs fixed bc of update
     
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    @Lizmun we do a bit of point reshuffling
    writing art was replaced with drawing
     
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    I believe the only issue is that your character, based on her point spead, cannot have a PS of 20? Unless I am missing something. Please show the calculation in the section so I can understand how she has this better.
     
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    @falcvns I agree with Hydralana's motion. Give me a stat calculation, please.
     
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    @Lizmun got infected w graal vampirism, updates made
     
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    @Lizmun just updated aesthetics & added expansions. i lost the approved tag :(
     
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    @Staff Roleplay need a new reviewer. moved points out of drawing & gardening into linguistics & sorcery
     
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    Hi! I’ll be happy to claim this for review. Expect one shortly.
     
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    Basic Information
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    Personality
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    Re-approved.
     
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    @Acosmism updated format (Again.) didnt make any prof changes
     
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    @Acosmism
    removed 1 caster ranged ability & 1 language. both points moved into sorcery :-3
    i'll probs edit this sheet again w aesthetics tmrw
     
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    @Acosmism moved hobby points around & swapped out a spell
     
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    Claimed for review! Expect a reply shortly.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Volaie hello bestie. i think i have everything down right regarding prof update
     
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    @fantuinn nvm changed my mind, moved a point into strength away from charisma
    also @FireFan96 since u wanted to look over knight apps
     
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    @fantuinn freak
    swapped some points around
     
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    lol approved
     
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    @Volaie added breaking magic meow meow mrwo
     
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    mewo emow meow moew mrow

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