@BillyTheScroofy Requesting re-review, updated religions, as well as inventories and personality. Aged him up two years as well.
@Caelamus Applied the Lineage Ailor change to Wilvamair, and aged him up accordingly such that he maintains the same visual appearance. Edited the timeline of some parts of the life story to accommodate, as well as his proficiency.
@Caelamus Added some stuff to Weaknesses and Likes/Dislikes, as well as the Art section. Touched up aesthetics should be a quick re-review
@Caelamus Added a few sentences to personality expansion, touched up aesthetics, added a relations section at the bottom.
Wilvamair is now fifty one, as it's his birthday. Also added a sentence or two to his faith, and clarified it. @Caelamus
@Caelamus aha.... i changed sumtin aged Wilvamair down to 30, adjusted life story in accordance and mentioned his role as a soldier in the First Songaskian War. Adjusted proficiencies in turn.
✦ +18 Swords (+18 Base) ✦ +10 Perception Training (+5 Talent, +5 Boost) ✦ +10 Pathfinding Art (+5 Hobby, +5 Base) ✦ +5 Frontline Command (+5 Talent) ✦ +5 Hunting Art (+5 Hobby) ✦ +5 Circus Arts (+5 Base) ✦ +3 Linguistics Science (Modern Altalar) (+3 Base) ✦ +2 Dancing Arts- Childhood (+2 Base) ✦ +2 Cooking Art - Childhood (+2 Base) From this spread, the base points are: 18+5+5+3+2+2=35 Talent is: 5+5=10 Hobby is: 5+5=10 Racial boost is 5 I'm pretty sure I've got it right? Idk @Caelamus
You did, I just didn't register Boost as being the racial boost because people will do things like add in the +5 Boost from age and label it as being that rather than just tallying it with the rest of the standard points like I would prefer them to, so it gets confusing.
Updated proficiencies and height as per Norean removal. Wahoo. Also touched up the Religions section @Caelamus
I have rewritten Wilvamair into a Wards of Fae, because the new lore is dope af. Rewritten some areas of the app to remove mention of the Bloodcasts, and added parts of the life story to accommodate, which is highlighted in green. @Caelamus
Updated app to fit proficiency rework. Changed backstory since it was outdated as fk and I like this one more. Minor changes made to app aesthetics and spoilered sections.
Apologies this slipped under my radar, make sure you tag me. I don't get it in my alert box if you don't.
Aged Wilvamair down to 24 since I think he acts a bit too lost and unsure of himself for a man supposed to be in his late 20s. @Caelamus
Edits made to proficiencies, physical stat, and mutations in lieu of Wilvamair falling to Pechod (as per kit doc) @Caelamus
