Played Character Louis Delmotte

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    CHARACTER INFORMATION
    Full Name: Louis Bernard Delmotte
    Age: 46
    Gender: Male
    Race: Regal Ailor

    Faith: Unionism; Sancella of Union

    CORE CONCEPT
    Religion:
    Unionism as a Religion was created in the year 5 AC when Emperor Theomar (the founding Regalian Emperor) proclaimed the Creed (the holy Scripture) as visions received from the Everwatcher. In the beginnings of the Empire, the faith was slow to spread, but through providence and divine intervention, as well as Regalia's military spread and aggressive missionary proselytizing, Unionism quickly spread from its small cult-like origins to a world-religion. It has over the years also absorbed Gods from smaller religions, and included Gods form other Religions to become a very all-inclusive cosmopolitan Religion. While most other Religions are Race specific with some caveats, Unionism is a cross-Race religion that invites all Races to join under the Everwatcher.

    Description:
    This seasoned Tyrian knight, past his prime but still formidable, embodies what it means to be loyal to the Crown and State, seconded only by his loyalty to family. His years in service, as well as his diplomatic stint as Lord Chancellor, have left him sober to the harsh realities of the world, yet he remains steadfast nonetheless.


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    PROFICIENCY

    Melee Combat: Warrior

    Strength: 7

    Melee - Technique Parry
    Melee - Concussive Blow
    Melee - Diving Tackle
    Melee - Knockback Sweep
    Melee - Combat Sight
    Athletics - Brawl Stampede
    Athletics - Steady Body
    Constitution: 7
    Shielding - Shield Block (Free)
    Shielding - Shield Wall
    Shielding - Shield Slam
    Shielding - Shield Taunt
    Shielding - Shield Deflect
    Training - Rebound
    Training - Debuff Endurance
    Training - Rage Counter

    Dexterity: 0
    Roguery: Close Save (Ailor Free)
    Tyrian Mechanic: Tyrian Knights are permitted to wear armor and weapons at the Imperial Palace, and offer protection to Palace Events or Kades. Additionally they are immune to becoming Afflicted.
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    01. Tyrian Knight of the Viridian Order.
    02. Father to Marceau and Adeline Delmotte.
    03. Known to have romantic affections for Prince Cedromar Kade.
    04. Formerly served as Lord Chancellor, dubbed 'The Peacemaker' by Emperor Alexander.
    05. Veteran of numerous wars, though most notably the Kathar War, where he liberated a prison filled with Regalian and Elven officers with the help other Viridian Knights
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    06. He is known to possess a degree of allegiance to the Prince Cedromar and other Dragons, but this has never developed to the point of worship, and some might remark that he even looks down upon Dragon Worshippers.
     
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    Shuffled a few points around, nothing significant though.
     
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    Updated with most recent art
     
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    New art, update to religion and adjusted hairstyle too. Nothing that would warrant the need for a rereview.
     
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    Louis has undergone a significant change that warrants the character-sheet a re-review. Louis Delmotte is now a Dragon Knight. @Carlit0o
     
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    Approved @Arhbi though continue to tag Carl for future re-reviews.
     
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    Shuffled points around to better represent how I'm currently playing Louis. @Carlit0o

    Lowered Blades from 20 to 15
    Lowered Diplomacy from 11 to 6
    Increase General Tactics from 10 to 20

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    A few changes to note. @Carlit0o
    1. Louis' hair is now naturally Auburn
    2. Louis has grown 5 inches, making him 6'5.

    These changes happened in character.
     
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    I'm sorry but I'm going to have to deny your request to update this character application,
    • Please provide an example either here or through PM as to 'why' these changes occurred.

    Thank you for you cooperation in advanced.
     
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    Gardens of Everchange.
     
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    Thank you, approved!
     
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    @Carlit0o Louis' proficiencies have been updated.

    3 Points from Blades Combat were moved to General Tactic
    1 Point from Diplomatic Case was moved to General Tactic
    1 point was added to General Tactic as I have preemptively aged him up so I don't forget to do so on the 24th
     
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    @Carlit0o Ailor Lineage Update. Lexxon Lineage
     
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    @Carlit0o Dragon Warrior update. Pretty sure I did everything right.
     
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    Please take 4 points out of your proficiencies to purchase your Dragon Warden abilities. @Arhbi
     
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    Everything checks out but one issue, He cannot have attended those schools he lists while being a Viridian Knight, that's all. @Arhbi
     
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    Just reject it. Ill put it up for review again if I decide I still want to play. @Carlit0o
     
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