Played Character Lorraine Du Poncaire

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  1. FlossyBerryRene

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    Basic Information

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    The Swan Knight
    [Core Concept]

    Lirh Lorraine du Poincare The Swan Knight

    The Lirh is empathetic, timid, gentle and ambivert in nature, a protector their heart urns for the sword to serve the Empire. They are obedient, loyal and unhesitating to their duty and loved ones. Lorraine preserves through turmoil, their flaw lies with themselves and the insecurities they feel. The Ugly Duckling feeling unworthy around other does not understand the beauty and worth they have and that they will grow into a Swan.

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    [Character Information]
    Full Name: Lorraine du Poncaire
    Race: Ithanian Ailor
    Age: 22
    Gender: They/Them
    Eye Color: Soft Blue
    Height: 5'7
    Weight: 152 pounds increasing.

    Proficiencies

    Strength: 0


    Constitution: 7
    Rebound
    Debuff Endurance
    Rage Counter
    Interception


    Arcane: 0

    Dexterity: 6
    Cutthroat Target
    Cutthroat Backstab
    Cutthroat Dodge
    Cutthroat Evasion
    Cutthroat Reversal
    Cutthroat Timer



    Wisdom: 0

    Faith: 1
    Hallow Invocation Pack [Ailor Racial]

    Magic: 0

    Charisma: 0

    ⥈Languages
    ⥈Common (Childhood)
    ⥈ D’Ithanie, (Mother-tongue)
    ⥈ Leutz (Taught)


    ⥈Mutations

    Wings

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    [Visuals]

    Lorraine du Poincare embodies both male and female Ithanian qualities, having a round feminine face with round doefull eyes and broad shoulders with a tall and atoned body. Their chest laid flat, but their back was curved and their legs were tall and slender, they can not identify as a woman or man as their appearance is a beautiful mixture of both.

    A staple of Lorraine's appearance is their long coil curly blonde hair, the curls were often frizzy and their hair damaged on the rare occasion that their hair is tamed and styled. Noted tangled in their hair are two sets of wings that extend from their scalp.

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    ]Life Story]
    (Spoilers: Please read only if necessary)

    Childhood
    Lorraine was born alongside their twin sister Fabienne in Maraisbruke (Leutz Land) As a babe Lorraine developed a mutation causing the new-born Cadieux to sprout angelic wings from their scalp that would grow as they did. This led to the nickname 'The Ugly Duckling'. Lorraine saw very little of their parents, while being looked after by servants Fabienne was the one who read them to sleep, comforted them when sad or scared, and looked after them.

    [Adolescence]
    Fabienne being sent away to Ithanian courts left Lorraine lonely, they often confided in books and found comfort in fictional characters. Lorraine's father enrolled them into Knight education, sending Lorraine to Regalia in order to study, train , and squire to become a Viridian. Lorraine obediently studied and was happy to read books but being frail and weaker struggled to train, Because of this they felt isolated and became timid, reserved, and shy. Lorraine's timid nature left them lonely and struggling to communicate but despite this, they never faltered in their ability to be kind to others and devoted to their duty.

    [Young Adulthood]
    Lorraine in this time would write, illustrate and publish their book "The Moon Princess" in Ithania which became a success. The book features a Knight character that is a reflection of the type of person Lorraine wants to be. A Children's Ithanian Publisher offered Lorraine a contract to sign with the Publisher to distribute and handle all production of the book while they
    focused on their studies. A year later Lorraine graduated.

    [Present Day]
    After releasing their book and graduating Lorraine would spend a year finishing a book tour across Ithania. Lorraine returned to Regalia to join their sister Fabienne in the capital and to be adopted into the du Poncaire family, now attending to their duties as a graduate.


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    The Moon Princess is a story following a woman named Celeste who after the death of her father departs to live with a knight in Moonriver Valley, Celeste inherits an ancient storybook from her father that tell’s the tale of the Moon Curse, a plague that causes the people of Moonriver Valley to fall into a endless sleep. The Story follows the Princess and Mysterious Knight to save Moonriver Valley, The story follows bloody battles fought by the Knight and complex puzzles solved by the Princess with a grim ending of sacrifice.

    The book came under harsh criticism in 304Ac when a journalist released a review claiming the book was “bloody and depicts unnecessary violence” and deemed to “inappropriate” for children. Despite the harsh critique, slander and attempts to make the novel political, The Moon Princess was successfully sold all over Ithania and Lorraine proceeded to take a book tour from the wealth she gained from the publication.



     
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  2. fantuinn

    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for review.​
     
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    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    @FlossyBerryRene Clarify the amount of points unspent in the skill information section.
     
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    @fantuinn
    Done
     
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    @fantuinn removed schools and re-wrote backstory SLIGHTLY to leave her more open for future changes and developments.
     
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    I am sorry for the excessive time it's taken for a re-review.
    What is the point investment in these Proficiencies? Please review your Proficiency List and make the appropriate adjustments to both it and your Physical Stat should the updates impact it. Tag me when you are done.
     
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    Wow I didnt even see that I'm sorry I fixed it and I think the physical stat is right? I've always been bad at that part so let me know if its wrong
     
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    Both of these Proficiencies add half their value to the Body Stat, so please add them to the 7 you get from your other Profs.
     
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    FIXED!
     
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    @WingedJade I need a re-review for the update please!
     
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    Beautiful character! Approved.
     
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    Just tidyied the backstory and core concept but it took the approved off
     
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    Finished re-working the characters stats, just need someone to approve it all works out
     
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    Looks good to me!
     

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