Shelved Character Ibra Camara

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  1. BertToast

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    Themes: Due West | Jarebi

    Basic Information (Required)

    • Full Name: Ibrahima “Ibra” Camara
    • Age: 23
    • Gender: Nonbinary (he/she/they)
    • Race: Songalay Songaskia
    • Sexuality: Androsexual
    Inventory Information (Optional)
    • Journal
    • A kora
    • A coin pouch with 40 regals
    • A pot of rouge
    • A tin of lotion

    Skill Information (Required)
    Total Points: 65
    50 core + 10 hobby + 5 racial

    • Spear Combat: 15 (10 core + 5 racial)
    • Bodycare Training: 5 core
    • Body Art: 5 core
    • Dancing Art: 5 core
    • Instrument Art: 5 core
    • Vocal Art: 5 core
    • Cooking Art: 10 hobby
    • Baking Art: 10 core
    • Mixology Art: 5 core
    Body Shape
    • Physical Stat: 20 (15 Spear + 5/2 Bodycare + 5/2 Dancing)
    • Body Shape: Androgynous
    • Body Fat: Average
    Languages
    • Common
    • Sofaal (native tongue)
    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations

    Racial Abilities

    • Elder Form 1
    • Elder Form 2
    • Elder Form 3
    • Super Self 7
    • Element Control 3
    • Element Brand 3
    • Home Enchant 2
    • Magic Sight 2
    Bodycare Training
    • Skin Purge 1
    Visual Information (Required)
    • Eye Color: Amber
    • Hair Color: Black
    • Hair Style: Bald
    • Skin Color: Dark brown
    • Clothing: Tight-fit dresses with gold embellishments
    • Height: 6 feet 2 inches
    Personality (Required with Choice)
    Option Two: The Core List

    • Alignment: Neutral Good
    • Personality Type: The Campaigner
    • Religion: Shambala (5/10)
    Life Story (Required)
    Ibrahima Song Camara was born in 291 AC in Korbamakora, the shining capital of the Songaskian Masaya. Descending from the warrior dragon Songalay, Ibra’s family was zealously proud of their lineage. Their parents both had an extensive military career, having trained in the prestigious School of Melaak and serving in the infantry. From an early age, Ibrahima was taught to be a warrior, training in spear combat from the age of six up until adulthood. Ibra’s parents also heavily stressed the importance of taking care of one’s body, drilling them in nutrition and fitness. Unlike most Songaskian parents, they rarely allowed Ibra to eat desserts, a rule that produced bemused looks at restaurants and dinner parties. However, because of their obligations to the military, namely their service in the First and Second Songaskian Wars, the Camaras spent less time with their child than the average Songaskian, and Ibra was mostly raised by their paternal grandparents. The Camara elders ignored their son and daughter-in-law’s strict guidelines, feeding Ibra dish upon dish of savory and sweet junk foods.


    Eventually, when Ibra was old enough to help around the kitchen, their grandmother showed them how to cook and bake. She taught them how to prepare traditional Songaskian treats such as meat pies and Sfenj doughnuts and snuck recipe books into their room when their parents weren’t looking, inspiring a love of cooking in Ibra from an early age. A former hoofer, she also taught Ibra traditional Songaskian dances when they weren’t in school or practicing martial arts. Ibra’s grandfather, a musician, was initially hesitant to pass on his musical knowledge to their grandchild, but after months of nagging, he began teaching how to sing and play the kora, a 21-string lute. Upon reaching adolescence, Ibrahima also received more abstract lessons from their grandparents. After a formative experience in their early teens, Ibrahima gained a deeper understanding of their heritage. Following a physical altercation with another student in their martial arts class, Ibra’s grandparents lectured them on how Songalay was a lover as well as a fierce warrior and to not mistake senseless violence with strength. They also instructed Ibra to embrace their naturally androgynous features, as these characteristics were the mark of their lineage.

    It was around this time that Ibra’s parents, having returned from the Second Songaskian War, began to spend more time with their child. Ibrahima’s grandparents moved away from the city to retire in the countryside and Ibra began seeing them less often, visiting them every other weekend as opposed to living with them. Having little in common with their parents, Ibra got away from the house by working part-time in restaurants and shutting themselves in their room. In their alone time, they also started experimenting with their gender expression and general appearance, shaving their hair to mimic high-status Songaskian women and frequently inviting an artist friend over to show them how to use Tawhroon, traditional Songaskian body paint, to enhance their features. The Camaras, though accepting of these changes, were at a loss for how to parent their now free-spirited and sugar-loving child. Ibra had grown into a completely different person than they had envisioned and the three often butt heads. Eventually, once they reached adulthood, Ibra started learning how to bartend and began earning a decent wage as a cook. Given that Ibra could now live on their own, the family mutually decided that it was time for Ibra to leave home and explore the world. After receiving a letter from a distant cousin asking them to visit them in the Holy City, Ibrahima packed their bags and set off for Regalia, not realizing that they would soon fall in love with the place and eventually choose to live and pursue a culinary career there.
     
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  2. Grimmsome

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  4. BertToast

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    @Lumiess Hi! I need a re-review. I aged Ibra up, changed Fist Combat to Spear Combat, adding the racial bonus, and changed the Racial Abilities section to align with the update. All edits are in red. Let me know what you think!
     
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    Looks good. Approved.
     
  6. BertToast

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    @Lumiess Hi! I need a re-review. I changed Ibra's career from a musician to a cook, so I moved around some proficiency points, replaced Composition Art with Mixology, and edited the life story to align with the rest of the application. I also aged them up slightly. All edits are in red. Let me know what you think!
     
  7. Antimreoir

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    I'll be claiming this app for review going forward, that being said, approved.
     
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