«❅» Full Name | Tomasean Drayton «❅» Race | Ailor (Velheim) Bear Marken «❅» Age | 26 «❅» Gender | Male «❅» Sexuality | Heterosexual «❅» Eye Color | Dark Brown •⊶─────────⋞•✧•⋟─────❅─────⋞•✦•⋟─────────⊶• «❅» Char Concept | Toma is a wandering warrior with his path set towards worshipping Bard. Having recently conquered his bear markenism, he seeks to perfect every aspect of his being and honor Bard with the now blessing of markenism he's grown with. •⊶─────────⋞•✧•⋟─────❅─────⋞•✦•⋟─────────⊶• «❅» Strength Point Buy (8) ⤜ Cheap Shot ⤜ Knockback Sweep ⤜ Technique Parry ⤜ Unyielding Strike ⤜ Diving Tackle ⤜ Steady Body (Athletic) ⤜ Bruiser Agony ⤜ Force Toss «❅» Constitution Point Buy (5) ⤜ Rage Counter Pack ⤜ Ironheart Pack ⤜ Debuff Endurance Pack ⤜ Rebound Pack ⤜ Interception Pack «❅» Faith Point Buy (1) ⤜ Exorcism ⤜ Shaman Ancestor •⊶─────────⋞•✧•⋟─────❅─────⋞•✦•⋟─────────⊶• « Common | (Taught by Parents) » « Skotadi | (Taught by Parents) » •⊶─────────⋞•✧•⋟─────❅─────⋞•✦•⋟─────────⊶• «❅» Appearance | Tomasean is relatively tall, standing at a mere 6'2 and commonly dresses in bundles of clothings all over his body. His hair is outrageous, long and lengthy all over his body which he keeps closed up at times. •⊶─────────⋞•✧•⋟─────❅─────⋞•✦•⋟─────────⊶• Life story Early Era (Birth to Then) Tomasean Drayton was a Dorkarth vampire born under Faun and Nathaniel Dayton, twenty years prior to the chaos his father caused in Regalia. Toma took on a dominant personality from his mother's side where he grew to be quite the confident and bold young vampire. Toma had a uniquely toned build at such a young age. Upon holding one of his fathers Long daggers, he asked to be taught how to wield such daggers and spent the next few years training with his father. As a young teenager, Toma was quite skilled in his dagger combat, he even disarmed his father in a practice duel. For a time, Toma enjoyed being with both of his parents until he started seeing more of his conversations with his mother Faun. He'd watch as Nathaniel's attitude were rather scary and chaotic to the point where he were shouting at Toma. Nathaniel ended up slapping Faun on the cheek, in which Toma lashed out and slashed his father on his cheek, shouting at him to leave. As soon as his father Nathan left the house, Faun decided she were done with the man, packing her bags with Toma and moving. As time passed Toma and Faun enjoyed their lives separate from their father whom had been destructive and chaotic even against them. Toma learned some skills and languages from his mother while learning all of his own Dorkarth abilities fully. As his father left, Toma were alone when it came to hunting and feeding, though after his first few hunts, he got over being alone. His mentality were far greater than his fathers. Toma grew to become a bold and near-overconfident Dorkarth, where he expressed a superior Dorkarth mentality compared to his old man or other Dorkarths. Toma became confident to the point where he would not need to be cocky in certain situations, and actually held the intelligence to remain contained. Toma now at the age of twenty, heard some rumors and news about his father. He stumbled upon a wanted poster of his father where the information explained him naming himself "The Reaper", and were wanted for the death and crimes he committed. Toma decided to travel to Regalia with his intent on dealing with his father, fixing his mess and continuing on his own vampiric path. Toma after coming to Regalia had now stumbled upon an ancient text that looked old and ripped from a book. The text explained how the Dorkarth Vampire Lords were and how they ruled over it's race. Realizing how capable he was with his own skills, he made it a goal to one day become a proper Vampire Lord while co-existing with those he'd meet in Regalia. Spoiler: Recent Info Recent Life Toma had a weird experience coming into Regalia. Everything he saw and experienced was new and bizarre. He explored it for a while until he met the Kathar Hessolis, in which they became acquaintances. After seeing some issues her group was going through, he decided to support them up to the point where they offered to change his bloodline for possible power. Toma accepted in which he became a Rokhaal vampire. Toma had even taken part of the Sepulchre raid, utilizing his archery skills to the best as his side ended up winning the raid. As time passed Toma grew used to the forests and wildlife that surrounded the outer walls of Crookback, but to his downside so did the other beasts that roamed the deep wild. After successfully hunting deer for meat, he were pounced upon by a strange bear figure, one with bright purple eyes and a great mass. It bit into his flesh, grinding his leg apart before chomping it's maw towards his neck only to meet Toma's dagger head on. Toma managed to stop the beast from causing anymore damage but suffered to an injury that soon would ruin the rest of his days for he were infected by a Marken.
Re-Approved, though I recommend adding to the end of your LS how they became this new bloodline, at some point in the future.
Please add information to your Life Story explaining why he changed bloodlines, only to immediately revert back.
@HydraLana App is for review under the Arcanology and Ailor rework, as well as being turned back into a Rokhaal.
Rokhaal's aesthetic don't really work like this. They're, for the most part, anti-Sanguine and anti-Cahal. The lone wolf type style, they really fight against Vampire and Cahal. The character's mental views will swap, as stated on the Wiki. You may want to reread the page before flopping between the two bloodlines to make sure you're using them correctly. Furthermore, your Life Story and Abilities conflict each other. Please make it clear which bloodline is active and which is not. Make these changes and tag me once done. Thanks!
@Volaie Fixed it up. Removed that section in the recent life after reading some more on the wiki. Toma is Rokhaal and you were right in the sense that he could not willingly switch back. Toma once again is Rokhaal as of this moment.
@Volaie After being fed on Toma has been cured from Rokhaalism, and cut down a little on the combat profs.
@Volaie Toma has been changed by a Marken. And re-review for all the recent changes and balances. Not as combaty.
Claimed for review! You'll want to go ahead and remove the mention of Dorkarth and Rokhaal abilities, since you will no longer be able to be infected as a Marken (also because they're out of date). That's all though, everything else is fine! APPROVED
