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    I instill mercy where mercy is needed.
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    • «Full Name» Nazareth Marroquín Beahandros "Grey" of Daenshore
    • «Age» 26
    • «Gender» Female
    • «Race» Half Songaskian
    • «Sexuality» Whatever
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    Most of the time, I find that the darkness is only shade.
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    • Nazareth is a primal-loyal Archon, once Archblood, though this at first took her a long time to work towards. Between people she once thought as friends whispering doubts in her ear, and others offering her a path to 'freedom,' she is in the midst of a life-long battle choosing between what she thinks is right and wrong, whilst also needing to be careful about how this will affect the people she loves in her life. She now serves in Regalia as a Ward of Fae.
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    I do what I do with the hope that I may redeem myself.
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    • +6 Strength
      • Unarmed Pack
      • Blades Pack
    • +2 Constitution
      • Resilience Pack
      • Physique Pack
    • Wisdom
    • +1 Dexterity
      • Parkour Pack
    • (2) Magic (Archon)
      • Draconic Cleansing Pack
      • Draconic Custodian Pack
    • +5 Charisma
      • West Linguistic Pack
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    The stars don't care about you and I.
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    • «Languages»
      • Ithanian
      • Lëtz
      • Burdi
      • Altalar
      • Allorn
      • Suvial
      • Sulvaley
      • Sinnayed
      • Saan
      • Katharic
      • Ibeth
      • Vasar
      • Common
      • Daendroque (Childhood)
    • Archon Specials
    • Songaskian racial abilities & Specials
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    Tired and lonesome, like I promised to be.
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    • Nazareth is half Avanthar-Ailor, sporting warm, dark skin inherited from both of her parents, and pearlescent white hair that falls past her shoulders, its color gained from a mutation she gained early on in life. Her eyes are a glowing violet, gained by her Archon status. She stands at the height of 5'9 and appears rather fresh for her age. But there is always a weathered quality in all of the scars she sports.
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    I’m not lonely, I’m long lost.
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    • Nazareth was born to an Ailor mother and a Songaskian father in the city of Daenshore. She had two older brothers. She would often go with her father on trips to the deserts his side of the family lived in.
    • As Nazareth grew older, her family grew poorer; her brother violent, her parents spiteful and negligent. Eventually, they decided to move the family to Farahdeen where her father's side of the family already lived. On the road, they bumped into a band of Bloodcasts. Mistaking them for criminals, they fell on their faces begging for mercy. Upon realizing that these were indeed the hedge knights, her parents abandoned her and her brothers to be in their care.
    • After training as a squire, at the age of 20, she made a brash and last-minute decision. She did not end up graduating, instead pledging her life to another lifestyle, and never becoming a knight. She took the training she received with her into the world and traveled to Farahdeen to learn more about her culture, leaving her now knighted brothers behind.
    • She traveled to Regalia, later on, becoming a sell-sword type and working for noble families and as a mercenary. She's since retired from mercenary work and has become a constable.
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    Who am I to stop fate’s hand?
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    Breothric ~ "You're no leader to me."
    Arye ~ "There is so much more this world could offer you."
    Xeniya ~ "Your metal hand serves as a reminder. For me and for you."
    Rodrigo Piergarten ~ "I hope to be just as much of a hard worker as you are one day."
    Fulgore Fanger ~ "The most professional Mercenary in Regalia."
    Franz Knispel ~ "For what you lack in fashion you make up for in comedy."
    Asteria ~ "I wasted too much of your time."
    Theopold Castley ~ "You were the first person to show me kindness in this city, and to think how far you've fallen from that. I won't forget your good deeds, but you will never live down those that were bad."
    Clarisse Castley ~ "She who knows ten thousand things."
    Vivienne ~ "You, my friend, are a shining example."

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    @Nesstro reworked her a bit since her point spread was a little rough. Also made amends to the rather cringe-worthy backstory, changed culture.
     
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    @Nesstro Did a final big overhaul, this is the last update I'll be doing for a while (unless of course otherwise is required). I changed her backstory yet again, and moreover changed her to be a half-race (without the inclusion of proficiency boosts or racial abilities) anddd I think that's pretty much it. The rest of the changes are purely aesthetic. Tyt, and thank you!
     
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    Ma'am all your fonts broke but the app is approved!
     
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    @Nesstro Updated sorcery stuffs, went with 2 abilities
     
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    Circus art is 0.5 investment, so that brings it down to 2.5

    Your sats calculations dont match up to your points allocated according to category. Give this a correction.

    Do point out where they learned to dance and where they learned their circus art from.

    Mark this all up in green so I can see it clearly, please.

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    @Woodwork Fixed the stat hiccup, added on an extra sentence to this bit here. Apologies, I thought explaining the schooling was sufficient enough
     
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    @Woodwork Nazareth has died. But, Archbloodism. Listed the appropriate abilities and also I was wondering if it's required that I add in a spoiler how she died. If so I can just draft that up real quick.
     
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    @Acosmism
    Feel free to add it if you so wish, but approved otherwise.
     
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    @Messtro Updated per proficiency update.
     
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    @Acosmism
    Please remove at least 10 points from combat, or switch it to only type combat types if you're going to invest as much as you are. I feel like realistically theres too many combat points on her for her age.
     
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    God rid of shielding combat, which took out 20 from combat, decided to leave it unspent for IC learning :)
     
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    Approved!
     
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    @Messtro Updated racials per the update and also adjusted backstory to fit in Bloodcast.
     
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    @Messtro Reworked her proficiencies a wee bit. Added a language as well as perception. Reduced from 10 writing arts to 5. Still have 5 leftover for IC learning. Also got rid of instrument art and moved the writing art from Core to Hobby. You may also notice a couple of new mutations on her aesthetic mutations list.
     
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    I also changed her religious faith a bit but that's not as important I suppose, still noting it here
     
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    @Messtro Shifted her combat points more for more ranged combat and less up-close stuff. Changes made in purple.
     
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    Shuffled some proficiencies around. Changes marked in purple. Also edited the backstory a teensy bit but I didn’t mark that part since it was only a couple words.
     
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    These are outdated Linguistics terms; please adjust.

    Please make edits in a separate color and tag me when finished.
     
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    OOPS forgot about the update, should be all good now.
     
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    Sorry son, I'm gonna be changing her to a ward of fae sometime soon. Expect a rewrite :)
     
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    @sonofthestars change of plans, son.

    I'm keeping her as a bloodcast even despite the update, whenever that will be. I HAVE, however, updated her sheet to comply with the new format and I switched her proficiencies around a bit since some got nuked.
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Howdy! App looks great, there's just one edit needed before I can approve it:
    • You currently have 4 unspent Core Points. Would you like for these to be invested into another proficiency, or left open for later IC learning? Please clarify in your proficiency section.
    Go ahead and tag me for review once you've made that change. Thank you!
     
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    I'm so bad at math; put it in unarmed!
     
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    Big mood

    APPROVED
     
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    I THINK I got everything in order. Avantl, Archon, new proficiency update lol
     
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    @Acosmism fucker put the actual numbers you invested into each stat not just the point buy
     
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    FUCK I MEANT TO I FORGOT ONE SECOND
     
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    OK I DID IT
     

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