Character Information Full Name: Henry James Stevenson Race / Culture: Ceardian Ailor Age: 37 Gender / Pronouns: Male, He/Him Occult: Henry is not Occult Core Concept Henry is an Everian of Unionism. As a child of the Ceardian Dispora, he holds firm beliefs in Unionism, believing that calamity can be overcome by extreme devotion to the Everwatcher and adherence to the Creed. Consequently, he is believes that the Holy City is under attack by the rise of secularism, and desires a return of religious piety to the capital. Appearance Information Henry stands as 5'11'' with an Average Body Shape and Low Body Fat. His clothing almost always consists of his Everian Robes, and he has shorter, brown hair. Proficiencies Strength: 0 Constitution: 0 Intelligence: 3 Safeguard Pack (Mundane) Wisdom: 4 Dexterity: 0 Magic: 0 Faith: 7 Unseen Prayer Safety Prayer Languages Common Calem d'Ithanie Anglisch Life Story / Plot Hooks Henry's parents survived the Destruction of Ceardia, and told him many stories regarding their flight from their homeland. Henry studied at the Divine College of Divinity in Calemberg a couple decades ago. Henry has been an Everian for several years, Consequently, he is strongly versed in Unionism, including its vast history and the several schisms.
While I hate to make you mess with your pretty image format, could you outline the source of his knowing each language to better adhere to the standard template?
@Eronoc requesting a re-review of the character: Added Unionism Faith Manifest. Per guidance by Marty, I have allocated 4 points as a placeholder for when Seminary Proficiency is released. Removed Archblood Archanology Knowledge as I never used it, nor do I think any Archblood Unionists exist that would wish to be purified in the current rp climate. Added Keyboard Instrument since organ playing is dope, but also to capitalize on Holy Crafts I. Added an 'Ability List' section which is just a rewording and reformatting of what existed previously. Aged down two years because I had 2 points, and any chance I make the character somewhat younger, I will take it. Removed a year mention from the life story to make it independent of any future age changes. Removed Patron Heron flavor box to try and shorten the spreadsheet for an easy copy-paste. I still had to scale it to 90% Added the Union Blessing Image since it's a decent image.
@Eronoc updated with Unionism Stuff: Removed the Heron Name Volkamaar since we have deleted Catholicism. Decided to add a second column to the Ability List to have abilities on two sides. This helped shorten the table by a lot. Added more Arcanology packs because they're better since I last updated this app, and can help Unionists deal with aberrant freaks. Swapped d'Ithanie to Anglian as the Schism Cultures are the only languages that matter. Shortened the Life Story to the Caan Eli format of small sentences. Nobody reads life stories, so no need to waste time writing one. Removed Divine College Schools outside of Dogmatic, because Celates only pick one. This gave me 10 points left over, which I threw into Perception for the hell of it (ie, maybe I can help someone check forgeries in game, fuck if I know). The fact that I've been able to consolidate an app into a screenshot size is proof enough that we're going in the right place.
App Updated. Since this was literally an example application template I didn't see the need to set to re-review with the Ailor changes
