Spoiler: Holy Jams to Sermon to Spoiler: Art! Azrael and Astrid, ready for combat (Before he was reworked). Azrael and Alexandria in a dance to remember. artist is FleurMarigold. "Some may call the Arcane Arts as a sin. I consider it a privilege." Name: Azrael Tempetyr Delmotte Race: Breizh Ailor Age: 33 Gender: Male Affliction: None Preferred Weapon: His Sorcery and his Blade. Core Concept Azrael is a knight of the Fae Order who wields Magical Prowess within the Cold, and staunch follower to the ideologies of his Elders. Azrael is a vigilante who believes that the city cannot protect themselves, and so he must do it himself. Using his Knightly Order and Code as a face for the public, and blackened armor for when evils lurk. Azrael is a devout follower of Breizh Unionism. A believer in the Everwatcher's faith, and follower to The Weards who stood before his time. A Specific Weard he follows mostly is Rhiannon. "My hands will warm up soon- I swear." Total Points: 50 (Core) + 10 (Hobby) + 5 (Racial Boost), 41/50 Core Used Core Group Proficiencies +10 Swords Combat +18 Sorcery Magic Sight I Elemental Control I Elemental Brand I Light Mend II Wall Climb III Super Self I Exorcism I (Seizing Destiny) +3 Arcanology Affliction Knowledge Talent Group Proficiencies +10 Strength Training Hobby Group Proficiencies +5 Cooking Art +5 Writing Art Physical Stat 10+10 =20 Phys Stat Languages: Breizh (Learned from Family) Common (Learned Overtime) D'Ithanie (People of Many Tongues) "I remember days when I'd cover the home with ice. Terrible, but funny nonetheless." Justice Silven Kit Ailor Racial Kit Sorcery Magic Sight I Elemental Control I Elemental Brand I Light Mend II Wall Climb III Super Self I Strength Training Great Force I Gate Smash 1 "Magic was not a sin. It was a gift that the sinners abused." Azrael mostly adorns himself within his armor in public. Iced crystals usually stuck to the metal and his cloak at times. Azrael has gray eyes, with near pale skin. A resting tired look on himself and long brown hair that reaches to the beginning of his neck. His height is 6'2 "Mother's teachings will always guide me on the right path, as it always has." Azrael Tempetyr was born alongside Aldair Tempetyr within the North Side of Kintyr to Maitrair and Vanessa Tempetyr. However was born as an indirect descendant to the Arken of Justice thanks to his mother's side. At the age of 7, Azrael was taken into the Prime Sepulcher to become a Fae Knight. In there, Azrael would learn to master the Arcane Arts, studying afflictions, and bettering his Sorcery. Azrael would eventually leave the Sepulcher at the age of 21, serving within the tunnels in secrecy during The Azure Order, and residing in Kintyr until the age of 29, when the order had ended its reign against The Fae Order. Azrael would leave Kintyr, alongside his family and arriving to Regalia to protect The Sepulcher until today. Progression Information 2 Sorcerer 1 Warrior
@Jonificus In need of review. Due to the change for Knights to not be allowed schooling, I decided to put the +3 into Artifact knowledge! Thank you! :) Change is done in Magenta
@Jonificus Just giving you another ping due to Knight orders coming up soon, and I will be needing Domitius for that pretty soon- Sorry about this!
Reworked Domitius's proficiencies. And while the staff member I had isn't well- staff. I'm gonna put this up for looking reviewer!
@RainAxe Hello, I've claimed this application for Review, and will get back to you in twenty four hours.
@RainAxe After reviewing your application, only one thing needs to be corrected: Your physical stat calculation is incorrect, please adjust it for your new proficiencies. Once you have done this, tag me and I will review it once more.
@Follower decided to fully rework Domitius as his concept wasn’t working out for the better. Decided to dip into the Fae Order and work to see if I can try something new. I’d say the entire sheet’s been reworked at this point!
@Follower Reworked Domitius quite a bit. He retains the same story and concept, but now is fitted to be more attuned with his culture, and more fitting to his aesthetics. Name's been changed as well since his family's being renamed. Lastly, everything's been remade to the new format. Thank you!
After realizing the staff member I have hasn’t been on in a couple weeks, i’ve decided to put him up for Review!
Casting Combat is more intended for full wizard characters and that archetype not spellblades. Remove this and invest it into something else or something not combat affiliated. If you want to play a spell blade just invest into the brands and focus on using them more.
@Caelamus Reworked Azrael's Proficiencies following the new Racial Rework. Also decided to just take 10 points off of Bola Combat, as it didn't feel right for the character concept. All changes were done in Blue, and shouldn't be too big of a change.
Approved but you might want to clarify under your abilities that this is removed as result of lowering.
Not gonna tag because this is moreso a fix rather than a rework. But I had forgotten to chance Azrael's Phys Stat following his rework. Just fixed it.
@Caelamus Few things to redo. First was to change a bit of his concept. With his family being adopted into House Delmotte, I realized that having him be a Vigilante would no longer work out. And instead of limiting himself to being a crime fighter, he's now instead a Mage Supremacist. Replaced Bola Combat with extra sorcery to compensate for this, and replaced Inquest knowledge with Affliction knowledge as well. All changes have been done in Blue. Thank you!
Your Physical Stat would be 15 now, looking at your points. Also, we don't really need the Body Type and Body Fat section of character applications anymore! You can keep them there if you so choose, but they have no function beyond. This paragraph doesn't make much sense, seeing as Azrael would have years of training to be a Knight. Along with, your next sentence implies that he would be in Regalia for 26 years. Please make this a bit more understandable, seeing as it may have been a simple typo! Tag me once you've made these changes, thanks!
@Volaie Updated the story a bit, decided to go more in depth to allow clarification. As for the Phys stat, I misinterpreted Seizing Destiny's description, and instead added an extra Sorcery ability due to his abberancy, and added an extra +5 Core points to Strength Training to keep his Phys stat as 20. All changes been done in Blue!
@Volaie Small change to the app with a big impact with the character. Made Azrael a Justice Silven (Though will switch this to Vengeance once Dimension swapping comes out), and fixed up his concept to better adhere it.
