Name: Magnus Morathes Race: Full Asha (Nefer) Age: 32 Sex: Male Gender: He, him, his Sexuality: Dancing Crab Eye Color: Dark Browm Core Concept Magnusis a dogmatic Celate who believes in progresive, enlightened rule with the Empeor at the center. Attempting to exemplify nefer altruism in all he does while helping further the empire. Also a accomplished patron and participant in the arts. Point Buy S: 1 (str. 3 when in use - body claws) Unarmed C: 3 Wood arts Resilience Physique W: 5 Engineering (Hallowtech) Medica Engineering Alchemy Healing Morphing Arcanology Dimenthist Affliction knowledge D: 1 Firearms Pistol M: 0 Ch: 4 State Diplomat Consul of: Osso and Massif Husbandry Mount Racial Language (quality of speaking) Empire Pack Spoiler: Addition (Art skills - Free choice) Theater Composition (Dance/Music/Singing) Singing Dance Musical instrument (Violing, Drum, Guitar) Abilities Asha Racials Body Claws (asha mod) +2 str when using unarmed Asha speed (standing), Higher speed (all fours) Warring Metal Aiding Metal Intrusive Metal Lightning Immune Unarmed Unarmed Dodge Pistol Pinning shot Ritualism (Unionist - No pt.) Ritualistic Manifest Ritualistic Scripture Ritualistic Crafting Light of the Path (Unionism) Languages Common Ibeth (Family) Spoiler: Empire Ruling Class [*]Fordic (passable) [*]Thalic (passable) [*]Calem (Fluent) [*]Etosian (Fluent) [*]Skodje (mostly fluent) [*]Ithanian (passable) [*]Lëtz (Fluent) [*]Dressolini (mostly fluent) [*]Daendroque (entirely fluent) [*]Kriv (mostly fluent) [*]High-Anglian (fluent) [*]Breizh (passable) Appearance Info A clean, manicured look with alchemically softened fur and a trained physique, which maintained the usual nefer grace. Spoiler: Tattoos Letter box Daendroque style tattoos of broken chains in dark blue contrasted by his short, fluffy fox fur. Alongside them were scenes of Vess uplifting people through celebration and shattering the chains of slaves. The Unionist scenes shimmered and moved faintly as if alive [Ritualist Scripture]. Back A large Sufiq with pale green eyes expanded its white crane wings across his shoulder blades. Along the wings were lines of indecipherable script [Deathscript] in traditional Asha descriptions of Paradise. Arms Dark blue tattoos spanned the noble’s short orange fur wrapping around his shoulders, arms, and wrists with flowing patterns of lines and shapes. The traditional Daendroque style was accentuated by interspersed Ashal and Unionist symbols within each pattern. Life Story Magnus (born Atum Rashida) was born to Rahim and Muminah Morathes within Morathes holdings. Rahim was a long-term servant of the noble family while Muminah was a career diplomat and musician contracted to the Noble house. Magnus spent much of his early life being taught the arts and noble protocol by his Mother and Father as his mother instructed him in all the duties and tricks of a Nefer. He would find his first love in music finding art a almost necessity to life. Magnus went to an arts school in Luetz learning about the world meeting several celates among them, Fronz Von Calemburg. The Dogmatic celate helped the Asha find a deeper connection to unionism inspiring him to seek seminary training, in addition, to his preexisting diplomatic education. After finishing his clerical training he remained to administer a celary in basta before he felt a need to travel. Visiting many capitals and finding many styles of music he'd seek to blend. Before ending up in the Capital and meeting his now daughter. Spoiler: Special Inventory 1. A silver pocket watch with golden hands as it ticks Softly. An Ibeth inscription on the back says "Where ever you go, what ever time you stand. Remeber your family shall always stand with you, till the very end" 2. A Unionist eye pendant 3. A starfish charm (on a necklace chain) Spoiler: Schooling Schooling Divine College of Divinity (Dogmatic Unionism)- Basta
- You have a lot of schooling for someone who's still a teenager. I would either diversify your points a bit or age them up. Additionally, genetics cost 3 points each. If you would like Sanguiphobia, you would need to invest said points. -Please flesh out your personality, ideally two to three sentences for each entry would be fine. - I'm additionally a bit unsure of how they were able to train with Puretek. I'd flesh that a bit out in the backstory to elaborate on that. Mark changes made in Green, and tag me once you're all set! @bwmwags3
@bwmwags3 Looks alright. Keep in mind the limits of Sanguiphobia in regards to combat and you should be good. Approved.
@Ded Jok re-review in preparation for a hopefully successful noble house application (left three points unspent while Unionism is being reworked)
@DedJok Re-review with the unionism update changed a lot of the backstory and redid my choice for the personality section
@Caelamus Hey I'm updating changes are in orange. Took out two arcanology and replaced them with two alchemy, shifted reamining point into charisma
