Shelved Character Rilua Keykrana

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    «❅» Full Name | Rilua Keykrana
    «❅» Race | Teledden Altalar(Allorn Culture) - Undead Corpse > Lich
    «❅» Age | 493
    «❅» Gender | Male
    «❅» Sexuality | Heterosexual
    «❅» Eye Color | Green
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    «❅» Belief | Rilua has no worship to give anyone but to the betterment of himself. He believes that magic and knowledge are the only things that will cause evolution.

    «❅» Char Concept | Rilua is a skeletal lich who walks down the path of knowledge, bone and magic. Obsessed with magic and bringing about as much chaos and power as possible in exchange for what remains of his humanity. He will bargain it all for absolute power no matter the price.

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    Total Points | « 14 Prof Points, 4 Commute


    «❅» « 0 Strength
    «❅» « 0 Constitution
    «❅» « 0 Wisdom
    «❅» « 0 Dexterity
    «❅» « 8 Magic > Ordial
    «❅» « 5 Charisma
    «❅» « 1 Faith



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    «❅» Teledden Altalar Racials
    1 Ability > DISABLED
    Teledden Buff 1 > Free Pack (Cleansing)

    Teledden Buff 2 > Free Pack (Forced Truce)
    Teledden Buff 3 > Free Pack (Dimenthist Wisdom)
    Teledden Buff 4 > Free Pack (Arcane Invocation)
    Teledden Mechanic > Magic Talent

    «❅» Faith Point Buy
    Death Invocation > Invocation Points


    «❅» Charisma Point Buy
    Demonology > Spirit Hexlord Pack
    Demonology > Spirit Parasite Pack
    Demonology > Spirit Deflection Pack
    Demonology > Spirit Thief Pack
    Demonology > Spirit Anti-Faith Pack



    «❅» Cursed Point Buy(Commute: Lich)
    Territory > Lair Illusion, Lair Knowledge, Lair Summoning
    Betrayer > Accursed Locale, Wallwalking, Accursed Fall
    Parasite > Accursed Heartbeat, Accursed Senses, Accursed Vision.
    Regeneration > Arcane Wardrobe, Chain Break, Prison Break.


    «❅» Spell Point Buy + Specials + Greater Mage

    <<Spell Packs>> 8 Abilities

    Protection
    ⤜ Spellsword
    ⤜ Disruption
    ⤜ Casting
    ⤜ Illusionism
    ⤜ Enchanting
    Blessings
    Thanhicism


    <<Specials>> All Magic Specials (Lich Polymath)


    <<Greater Mage>> 4 Abilities 1 Accursed Bargain

    ⤜ Casting
    ⤜ Target Disrupt
    ⤜ Magic Smash
    ⤜ Control



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    « Common | (Taught by Parents) »
    « Allorn | (Taught by Parents) »
    « Deathspeech | (Corpse Trait) »

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    «❅» Appearance | Rilua appears as a 6 foot Five slim skeleton lich with light purple robes. His eyes are green like a bright green lantern.


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    Life Story


    - Rilua was born into an allorn culture. Magic was something he not only studied and were taught, but used as a way of life. He grew up using it in a way of respect and as a mere language to communicate through the world, rather than a tool. In the instances he were taught to utilize it, Rilua used it consecutively until it drained him of his magical drawing capacity and he held a grasp on how to wield it. He did not practice magic to master spells but practiced it to develop a core and strong qualified catalyst to hold a greater quantity of magic, thus allowing him and his magical blood to possess more spells.

    - Rilua continued to study magic for quite some time. He put his focus solely on this and decided to become a scholar, finding work at one of the Allorn libraries. For the next few years he gathered enough coin alongside knowledge of other places than the Allorn empire, and set off at his youth, travelling around the world. Rilua met many people along the way who were intrigued by his display of magic. He used it only when it was needed held an aura of magical intensity in keeping it together and filled up constantly. On his travels he began learning of the history regarding the empires and wars. He decided to get a map and chose to move on the outskirts, all around the warzones until he found a place known as Regalia.

    -Rilua found a very similar but different culture in Regalia. But with it came the troubles of being magically inclined. Immediately he saw an abundance of mundane people with little to no magically inclined. Rilua for now decided to hide his traits of magic and began exploring the city, finding information about it's history and how it was ran. He stayed in the city for quite a while, discovering many things along his way. He hid out in libraries and private rentals to study a handful of regalians history, culture, and unfortunate nature of magic at the time mages were feared and collared up to use as weapons. He kept his secret solely to himself and chose to stay away from people and crowded spaces as much as he could in order to get by, reserve his magical knowledge, and expand more on it. Rilua did meet a handful of threats along his way. From mysterious and bizarre creatures, to different leaders trying to raid the empire and take over, Rilua had a handful of assaults and attempts at fending himself off. He were not a warrior or a fighter. When it came to these assaults he opted to give up and let himself be beaten or subject to the mass that led towards the following or adapting of their lives per the countless threats, leaders and beings taking over regalia. Perhaps it was fate that let him survive this far, but he managed to avoid serious injury or worse from these events.

    -Rilua during his time entered into a place known as the sewers, and unfortunately met a horrible fate. He were attacked by magical blood spears and soon had to fend off a group of vampires. Being a scholar meant anything but combat and he panicked, falling victim to these vampires. They saw his magical potential and instead of infecting him, they decided to slaughter him straight up and believed he would be a threat if left alive for vengeance. His body fell to their blades as his soul were sliced right out of his body. As his soul began to pass, it gave a wavering effect of resistance and Rilua fought against his passing. A necromancer felt the odd disturbance of imbalance from his passing and inquired as to why he resisted fate. He felt it was not his time and he were wronged. He believed there was much more for him to discover and utilize within the field of magic. With a short but lengthy promise, he made a pact with the necromancer and they promptly allowed Rilua to reject his passing, guiding them back to his body. They bestowed a strange variant of power based on the pact he made but with it came a horrifying and unexpected result. His body's flesh melted off as the ordial chaotic energy rushed into his body, taking away any manner of flesh for fuel and the price. Rilua could do nothing but accept his fate at the painful extraction and weakening of his body, though felt an abundance of power and magical influence that overwhelmed him. Something that were achieved beyond normal circumstances had occurred with magic and he understood at the time what it meant to give it all away for power. There was no turning back now.

    -Rilua discovered Tharracology during a trip into the lower layers of the sewer. He opened a tomb surrounded by rusted chains and decided to burn it off of the book. The book were scratchy and held green insignia everywhere upon it. His eyes lit up as the information drove into him forcefully, a spirit that was left behind in the book entering into his body with a surge of memory and information. Rilua read the tomb and accepted the spirit that entered with him, deciding this new pact would be the only thing he'd carry along him for the remaining time of his life. He turned around and thrived in the underworld with his new shade, discovering it's dark uses and the dark secrets of the arcane. He toyed with life and death, finding new ways to expand his magical capacity, accepting the terms and drawbacks that came with it. He was final and he believed he was whole. He lost sight of what it meant to have flesh after years passed without it, being only skeletal and bone. The ordial essence surged within him and he continued reading and performed many rituals of magic all to the benefit of himself. Rilua witnessed many events occur around the world and happen right on the lands of Regalia. Every so often he'd venture up to witness the changes of the city and the world around himself. Through the threat of many races, beings, and people always wanting to take over, he shook his head and wandered back into the lower layers of the sewer. He gathered his knowledge and secrets of the dark arcane and continued to refine it, making quality out of the magic he possessed. His sanity and what little remained of his humanity were swept away with each moment he obtained something new of the arcane.
     
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  2. Antimreoir

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    Hello! I'll be picking this application for review, expect a response soon!
     
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    Here's my review!

    Basic Information

    All good here!
    Skill Information
    Please note your 22 additional points as unspent, or invest them wherever you like.
    Bolven only get a single Lineage Boost, please only take one of Strength Training or Hunting Arts. However you have 10 Talent Points and 10 Hobby points, so you can just note that these are in use instead.
    Special Traits
    All good here!
    Visual Information
    All good here!
    Personality
    All good here!
    Life Story
    All good here!

    Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
     
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    @Antimreoir Finished, Removed the bolven boost on both since I have 10 points in each. Points are stated as to remaining unspent.
     
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    Remus got cured so made the curse Inactive
     
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    @Antimreoir Added in Heavy Ranged Combat, +4 points. (Student RP). Teacher = Ingemar of Rustwood.
     
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    @Antimreoir Reworked prof points. Added in the Zikiel bloodline and abilities. Reworked some abilities. Changed fonts. App is up for re-review.
     
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    Everything checks out, reapproved. @Koyote
     
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    @Antimreoir I made a mistake. Removed the points for warlash and transferred to Void Sorcery. Zikiel can only have 5 combat prof.
     
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    @Antimreoir changed warlash to light ranged combat.
     
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    @Antimreoir Removed Sorcery, added in light ranged and utility ranged after the curing. App is up for review.
     
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    @Koyote Taking both Utility and Light Ranged is a little strange to me, as you cannot use both at the same time or on the same weapon, please change the Utility Ranged.
     
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    @Antimreoir Not only changed the utility to shielding, Remus is infected with the cratos bloodline. I'll rp his sickness for the next few days
     
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    @Koyote When being re-infected with Vampirism, you re-infect with the same bloodline you had before, with the exact same mutations as you selected prior. Please remove the mention of Cratos Vampirism.

    Also, these reviews are within 72 hours of each other, you cannot be re-infected with Vampirism or Werebeastism within 72 hours of curing.
     
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    @Antimreoir Made the requested changes and removed the Infection/cratos bloodline
     
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    Awesome, reapproved.
     
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    @Antimreoir Did the Ezekiel Rework update on Remus and app is up for re-review. May have to take another reviewer as Anti has been off straight for a month.
     
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    Going to put app for needs reviewer, I don't think Anti is coming on to see this.. Not sure if that is wrong but they have been off for a while.
     
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    @Koyote Antimreoir is no longer staff, with that said, Hello this application has been claimed for review, expect a reply within thirty six hours.
     
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    @Koyote Sorry for the delay, I have been unwell. After reviewing your application, Everything seems to be in order, Approved. (Please specify that your Sorcery abilities are Void based, even though you are Vampire Attuned.)
     
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    All good and take as much time as you need, changes were made @Follower
     
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    @Follower Small change, Remus is now Sanguine Alligned as an Ezekiel.
     
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    @Follower Due to genetics and Arcanology update, huge point distribution on abilities. Putting this app for review as well when I finish formatting to the new format.
     
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    Editted backstory, changing this app to the new format soon
     
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    Bringing back this ancient man
     
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    Claimed for review.
     
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    "These Commutable Point Buy Points may be used in the following Categories: Artificer Point Buy, Roguery Point Buy, Spell Point Buy, and Curses Point Buy a unique category only certain Afflictions have access to. Each Vampire Type does still have Specials though."
     
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    @Caelamus Editted! The Recovery pack is from curses point buy.
     
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    @Caelamus Small review, probably wasn't needed but changed the demonology hexlord pack from the old one to new
     
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    This area is severely lacking for someone who is close to three hundred years old and is a Teledden with an Ailor name. Try to maintain around three sentences minimum here. It "works" as far as presented information goes but I would encourage you to expand on this to help flesh this character out more outside of an explanation of "I was born. I studied magic. I went to Regalia and got vampirism. Vampirism made me a skeleton. I found demons."
     
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    @Caelamus Sorry for the delay! Adjusted the name to suit for a more elvish/teledeen name. Fixed the backstory as well.
     
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    @Caelamus I lied, I've been about the skeletal appearance for a while now and decided it just doesn't fit with the vampiric side, especially since I'm not even playing a proper sanguine right with Rilua. Made a hefty rework on Rilua and decided to make him undead with a lich variant.
     
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    Approved. I like the change.
     
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    Big update, removed any and all sources of prof from strength, const and dex. Rilua is now a squishy skeleton mage and added faith points.
     

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