Basic Information -Full name: Charles de Piedmont -Age: 21 -Gender: Male -Race: Nautilaan Ailor Points Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy Frontline (3 Age) Regalian Diplomatic Academy (3 Age) + 10 Body care training (+5 Race boost) +20 Rapier combat +10 Dancing Art (Free Hobby) +7 Instrument Art +10 Dagger combat +2 Gardening art Physical stat= 26.5 (20 for sword combat, 4 for Dancing, 2.5 for Gardening) Body shape: Athletic body shape, Average body fat Languages -Common -D'Ithanie -Alt Regalian -Leutz-Vixe Visual Information -Eye color: Light green -Hair color: Dark Brown -Hair style: Medium-Short heavily styled hair -Skin color: Ivory -Clothing: He wears colors of various clothing depending on his mood -Height: 6’0 Alignment: Neutral Good -Personality: Campaigner -Religion: Unionism (7/10) Backstory *Childhood* -Charles was born into the de Piedmont family along with his older twin sister Noelle. -Charles often loved to spend time with his sisters finding time alone by himself hard and boring. This led him to pull pranks and bond with them growing up. -One day, in his younger years, Charles was gently scratched by a young tabby cat. Resulting in a lifelong deadly fear of small, but vicious creatures. - After Noelle took an interest in plants, Charles did as well. He started a small garden of yellow roses with the help of Noelle’s knowledge of gardening. -Charles took up the Rapier and fencing when he was just nine years old, learning all he could from his mentor, Edmond. *Teenage years* -Upon entering his teenage years, Charles found it easy to communicate with other people outside of his family, causing him to make new friends and become more outgoing than he already was. -Charles often performed for various members of his family through the piano, singing, and dancing. -As the rest of the family exceeded at sailing, Charles did not. He wanted to do something different than that of naval combat, which led him to read up on land combat and wartime strategies. -Charles often hit it off frequently with girls his age, but never quite had a strong relationship with any of them. He felt as if they didn't truly understand him and his motivations. Charles often used his sisters as an example for how a woman should act and treat a man. -When Charles was fourteen his mother passed away. At that moment he decided to be sent off to the School of Mariposa for five years, to study fencing and good footwork. -After graduation the School of Mariposa Charles joined the School of Marshalry in Regalia, learning frontline command and tactics. -Upon entering the school he exceeded at the various training and studies taught there. -Charles met a close friend whom he spent his free time with, Leutz fencing and studying within the span of the five years. *Adulthood/Present* -Once Charles graduated from the School of Marshalry, he went to the Regalian Diplomatic Academy where he was aught in the ways of diplomacy. -after his studies he travelled he world visiting capitals and meeting great leaders. -His journey ended when he returned back home to stay at his family’s home, confronting his past and finally visiting his mothers grave. -After realising there wasn’t much for him at his old home in the Ithianian countryside, he went to Regalia to live with his rest of his family. -Upon returning to the city Charles made various friends and has slowly started to strengthen his relationship with his family after all these years.
Nautilaan does grant a Racial Boost to Sword Combat, but Rapier Combat is a separate Proficiency from Sword Combat. I would recommend changing this accordingly. Make changes in Green and tag me when finished.
Specify which Points are using your free Hobby Points, as of now you're currently 5 points over the 50 maximum. Make this change in a diff color then tag me, and you're good to go.
Are you using any of your free Hobby Points for the proficiency spread? It looks like you have 60 normal Proficiency points being spent when the maximum is 50 (I miscalculated the first time and thought that it was only 5 over).