Played Character Zadicus Luthar

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    Full Name Katharic: Zadidryl Tathohk Luthiirn Dar-Bard Raz-Daendroc
    Or Zadidryl Luthiirn, descendant of Tathonhk, who is common and of the Cult of Reason, from Daendroc
    Nicknames: In the Spoiler
    Regalian Name: Zadicus Luthar
    Aliases: In the Spoiler
    Zad, (Used by everyone.)
    Zadi, (Used by closer friends.)
    Zack, (Just a normal nickname used by some people.)
    Dadicus, (Dude has too many kids)
    Zaddie. (Given to him by friends.)
    Darkness Man or Dude (Given to him by a friend named Dath)
    Starry Eyes, (Used by a friend named Saurian)
    Aliases
    Chemic,
    Abyssal or Abyss
    Age: 56
    Visual Age: 23
    Birthday: February 27
    Zodiac Sign: Pisces
    Gender: Male
    Sexuality: Bisexual
    Pronouns: Him/He
    Race: Fin'ullen
    Affliction: None
    Born Status: Exist Magespark
    Tier: Fourth
    Preferred Weapons: Magic (scimitars)
    Melee Combat Style: Magic Warrior (The Character's Attack Stat is Magic, and Defense Stat is Wisdom.)
    Ranged Combat Style: Mage (The Character's Attack Stat is Magic, and Defense Stat is Wisdom.)
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    Religious Beliefs
    Zadicus doesn't worship a single God all too much, but he does have great respect for Estel. And Morrlond, for their power and strength.
    Background
    Zadicus is overall often very calm, and relaxed, in most situations not easily falling into anger or panic easily. He is very mentally guarded most of the time, only opening his emotions or talking about his past to those he believes he can trust. He had spent years learning many different skills and abilities so in the event he ever needed to defend himself or another, he could do so. He however is overall a very loyal person to those he calls his friends and would almost always stick by their side.


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    Strength (0)
    Constitution (0)
    Rage Counter Pack (Fin'ullen Pack)
    (Intelligence) (1)
    Oceanic Pack (Magic Variant) (Fin'ullen Pack)
    Shapeshifting Pack (Magic Variant)
    (Wisdom) (5)
    Medical Barrier Pack
    Medical Rescue Pack

    Medical Resist Pack
    Medical Bolster Pack
    Medical Buff Pack
    > Medical Stance
    > Medical Talent
    Dexterity (0)
    Magic (7)
    Magic Smog Pack
    Magic Warp Pack

    Magic Cleanse Pack
    Magic Resist Pack
    Magic Isolate Pack

    Magic Shove Pack
    Magic Snare Pack
    Faith (1)
    Sacred Revive
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    Fin'ullen Racials + Specials
    +10 Abilities
    Fin'ullen- MassiveCraft Wiki

    [Zads Spellbook]

    Racial Abilities
    Knockdown Immune
    Whenever Zadicus gets hit by an ability that would normally knock him back or down, the ability seemingly just gets instantly canceled out. Nothing flashy really happens, he still takes damage though.
    Call of the Deep + Waterborne
    When activating Call of the Deep, Zadicus form begins to shift and change, his hair becomes pearly white. His ears turn more akin to fishes, and his hands became webbed together. His legs fuse together to form a completely black-colored tail. with the help of the Waterborne ability, even outside of Call of the Deep, Zadicus can breathe underwater, and swim as quickly as an aquatic Allar, he finally has perfect eyesight underwater.

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    Katharic
    Parental Language
    Common
    Learned on travels
    Nahuatl
    Learned from people in Petalcourt
    Altalar
    Learned from his parents

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    Abnormalities
    Zadicus has a variety of mutations on his body as a result of the Magespark he was born with. These are crystals that grow around his body. Currently, he has a pair of transparent crystal horns, some crystals creeping up on the edges of his face. And he has crystals growing out of both his shoulders and parts of his legs/arms are crystalized as well. These crystals let off a barely noticeable whitish like mist due to how cold the crystals are.
    Appearance
    Zadicus is 6’2 in height with a very lean body build, with a slightly darker skin tone. Around the edges of Zadicus face rests some dark purple crystals, and on top of it some crystalized horns. Some crystals also come out of the sides of his upper arms and some down his shoulders.
    Cahal Form
    In this form, Zadicus is entirely consumed by the crystals on his body, which rapidly expands, covering him head to toe in dark blue crystals that rip through his clothing. And his eyes become an icy blue color, the air around him becomes colder as a whitish mist radiates off of his body.
    Red = Dead
    Green = Alive
    Blue = Unknown Status
    • The children
      • Amber Wilson
        • Zadicus used to be very close to Amber, when Zadicus first met Amber he saw she was already quite broken. He had always tried his best to be there for here and care for her to let her know she was going to be ok. But over time they have somewhat drifted apart, meaning they are not exactly as close they used to be. But, they still find a way to make it work and still are family to each other. Despite how far apart they may have grown.
      • Milo Pinefellow
        • Zadicus met Milo when he was much younger, and was still friends with Justin. Milo at the time was Milo and Elliots adopted son. Zadicus was pissed when Milo one day came to him saying Justin had abandoned him and said Justin no longer cared about him. Zadicus took Milo in and over time Milo left Justin completely to stay with him instead. And the two are still quite close to this day and have a very good and healthy relationship.
      • Nilsa Rieka
        • Zadicus and Nilsa have a decent relationship. And it continues to get better as time goes on. Zadicus at first was always quite busy and didn't see his kids often. But he recently got out of work and decided to begin visiting his kids more often. Therefore repairing the relationship to its best form of glory.
      • Azrhael Gomorrha
        • Zadicus and Azrhael had never been exactly close or spent a lot of time together. But they certainly do enjoy the time together when they do get it. And still maintain a healthy enough relationship despite this divide.
        • Zadicus recently found out from his daughter Amber, that Azrhael had died from sickness.
        • Turns out he lives. By some miracle.
      • Aileana Luthar
        • Zadicus hadn't seen Aileana in a long time, and is unsure where his relationship still fully stands with his daughter. Though he still calls her his daughter and loves her more brightly than ever when she is around.
      • Loki D' Genero
        • Zadicus had only met Loki a few times before. And fairly doesn't know him very well. Being the biological brother of Amber. He considers Loki his son and loves him as any other of his kids. Despite him not being very connected to Loki.
      • Yvette Daen
        • Yvette is a kid whom he had picked off the streets and decided to give a home and family to. Being close to her but she is still somewhat unknown really to the rest of a lot of the family.
      • Cassandra Luthar
        • His youngest and most recently adopted child, Cassia is a three year old Cielother that Zadicus adopted with Justin Kaleoua. The reasoning behind it is best found out In Character though.
      • Rosana Luthar
        • Rosana and Zadicus we're very close, one of Zadicus first adopted kids. But at lass, now she is gone. Zadicus found out she had turned into a Kathar, and she has gone missing. He hasn't seen her sense, and doesn't know if she is still alive or not. But it's assumed she is long dead now among the family. But she is still not forgotten.
    • Friends
      • Autumn E. Faulkner
        • Zadicus met Autumn when she walked up to him one day when he was passing out alchemy. From there the two began to grow on their relationship and Autumn became Zadicus apprentice in the study of Alchemy.
      • Frank Hendrickson
        • When Zadicus and Frank first met, Zadicus was playing with his younger nephew when two Oldguards patrolled by. Alarmed at first as the guards approached, but quickly calmed down seeing they meant no Ill will. Frank and Zadicus later in that same week ran into each other again, only this time Frank was out of his armor. Reading over a report, the two greeted each other and began chatting. Zadicus always came back quite often to find Frank in the same spot reading over his reports. So he began visiting more and more, or Frank would stop by at his place instead. And so the two became friends from there.
      • Anya
        • Zadicus and Anya are very close friends, both from the Solifuge which Zadicus recently joined. Perhaps even to the near lovers though such is still a thing with question.
      • Merith Wyrmwood
        • Zadicus joined Meriths coven when the threat of Greywitches became too high to remain a loner anymore. Though it wasn't until Merirth and the coven had helped saved him when he nearly died to a terrible betrayal to Justin Keleoua. Merith had gained his full loyalty and he remained by her side even when a bounty was placed on her head. And became in shorts of a spy for her and general friend. When she was killed Zadicus was once more left with a heart full of disappointment to see yet another friend go.
      • Amidee Cera
        • Zadicus and Amidee first met in the Nook, when a fight broke out he noticed a very scared Amidee in the corner of the room. He went over to her and got her away from the violence. They began speaking and ever since then they've been very good friends.
      • Axil Chandrell
        • Zadicus and Axil met when Zadicus one day wondered into the Nook. Saw someone attacking his kid Amber, Zadicus was quick to jump in and defend her. Using magical means, needless to say Guards were called. Axil being one of them. Axil and him began meeting more often. Soon becoming friends.
    • Enemies
    • Zadicus normally refrains from having many enemies. And quite dislikes violence. But there are some people he just doesn't get along with.
      • Elliot Kaleoua
        • Elliot and Zadicus never really got along since day one. But hate each other with a near passion now.
    • Neutrals
      • Most Guards/Officials/Sewer Allies
        • Zadicus really has no care for what guards do unless it screws himself or his family over. Also being very neutral to how he feels towards them, having both friends in the Sewers and in the Guards. Based on what he believes is right he will let a thing or two slip for either side. But of course doesn't let one side know about his afflictions on the other side. Though partially also blames the Inquisition for making other guards look bad and corrupted.
      • Justin Kaleoua
        • Justin and Zadicus used to be very good friends, close. All until Justin began getting more violent in the relationship. He began to attack Zadicus more and more. Zadicus took it for a while. But the finale straw was when Justin nearly ended up killing him. Therefore from then on there was always a negative vibe between the two from there on.
        • As of recent the two had recently seen eachother again and now are neutral in their relationship. Adopting a child together which took on a Luthar traditional first name and the last name of Justins family.
      • Thalia Yavanna
        • Thalia and Zadicus met when Zadicus attempted to get a job at a place as a cook. Got hired and fired in less then an hour. But Zadicus seemed to make semi friends with Thalia in the process.
      • Nym'vrae Helvath
        • Zadicus met Nym'vrae in the streets of Oldtown one day while passing out free medicine to people. Now they are somewhat neutrals when around each other.
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    The Start
    Zadicus grew up in Daenloc, being taught by his Uncle that Fin'ullens should be strong fighters. And as such, tried getting Zadicus more used to fighting, however often through much more abusive tactics. It didn't help that most of the time, all Zadicus wanted to do was read books and practice in the Arcane of Magic. Along with learning how to heal and do alchemy, whenever a merchant would come along, Zadicus traded whatever he had to get his hands on a few new books he could read. However his uncle greatly disliked this, and when finding out about Zadicus secret, burned what books he found and told him he had to stop and will never get far in life reading books.
    That's when a
    vampire coven came into play, recognizing Zadicus love for books and study. They offered to take him away and give him all the magic lessons and books he could ever want, traveling with them across many continents outside of Regalian in pursuit of knowledge. Zadicus began to travel with them, taking a particular interest in the languages of the distant kingdoms and lands. In which he began to study, and acted as a translator for the others whenever they visited a foreign land. Zadicus learned many other skills along the way and eventually became a vampire himself through the blessing of Djjwa. He learned how to hunt and cook for himself while on these journeys, perfecting his skills in using a longbow.
    Zadicus moved into the city, which was difficult at first, and when Zadicus began to realize perhaps his uncle had been right about to be unable to fight was a poor choice. As not all disputes could be solved with talking like he was used to.. So he learned how to fight, joining the Hierarchy, got betrayed, after the Hierarchy fell he joined the Solifuge for a while. Before finding friends in Petalcourt whom he ended up visiting more and more and now he lives there yayy. And has left his life of crime behind him, trying to live a normal life.

    Early Years [4-18]
    Growing up, Zadicus had a deep fascination with knowledge, he adored the study of alchemy, medicine, and magic. However, his family had shown to have other plans for him. As his studies were often cut short by his uncle and father alike, he only ever really had his aunt. Who would often defend him against them, his mother wasn’t involved in his life a lot. As often all she ever cared for was partying and inviting over her friends. This would often result in Zadicus being locked out of the house all day while his mother hosted parties. Sometimes even late into the night he would be left to fend for himself on the streets of Daendroc. home to thieves, con artists, mercenaries, fences, thugs for hire, and assassins. Many people around Daendroc feared his father as did he, for they knew what a cruel man his father was. His father had wanted him to follow in his footsteps of reining terror to those around him, but Zadicus was simply never interested in such things. When on the streets, Zadicus would often use any money or other things he got his hands on to buy books, alchemy supplies, and so forth from traveling merchants. He would have a hideout where he would study these things for hours on end. Eventually, news of Zadicus' activity had reached the ears of a few Kathar Scholars, who took him in under their wings. And began to train him.
    Later Years [19-30]
    Zadicus began his training under the Scholars, learning their values and the worship of Djjwa. Before this, Zadicus wasn’t ever really Religious, but when learning of Djjwa, it seemed to be something clicked in the Fin'ullen. From the Vampires, they helped him further study the ways of magic and how to harness more powerful spells. They ended up one night Dread Birthing Zadicus into a Kathar himself, at which Zadicus fled from them. Often conflicting with himself between fixing himself, but never knowing how to even ask. He eventually gave in, living with what had happened. He soon after began to travel the world, learning about alchemy which he took a deep liking to and went to the School of Alchemy from using his disguising abilities. Looking to see what it might offer him. Zadicus was soon contacted from another side of the family who had originally been kept from him by his family. He went out to meet them and found himself in the lives of a Von Kerle mother and Ezekiel father. With his Ezekiel father the two explored their love of books and knowledge together, as well as patience and how to keep a cool head. From his Von Kerle mother he learned unarmed combat and how to use a Longbow. He traveled with them for many years to basically wherever in pursuit to learn more. During his travels with his parents, he had used his bow often to hunt, and learned how to grow and cook his own food. These would be some skills Zadicus would spend much more time learning how to get better at as side hobbies over time.
    Zadicus told his father of the concept of Djjwa, who thought it was ridiculous to worship a God of supposed knowledge, believing himself knowledge was to come from the blood and not an outside force. Zadicus never pushed the issue however and therefore remained on good terms with his father. However never bringing up The Coven, and every so often meeting with the other Vampires to share and exchange knowledge with them. Along to worship Djjwa.
    Living Life [31-41]
    After many years of travel Zadicus finally arrived to the Regalian Capital, this was the beginning of a new era. Adventures, a life of making friends and possible enemies. And growing a family for himself. Zadicus made friends with an Altalar by the name of Justin, the two became close and soon Zadicus met his boyfriend, named Elliot. Zadicus and Elliot never got along, mostly because of Zadicus Affliction. When the Greywitches began to become a problem, and after too many encounters and times of nearly getting captured by the guards in the sewers he decided staying a loner was no longer an option. Which after he joined a Coven at the time known as the Heirarchy. Zadicus became close to the leader named Merith. Justin however did not like this and called Zadicus a tratior over it and in result nearly killed Zadicus. Not having the faith that Zadicus may remain loyal to him as well. He survived the brutal attack only due to the Hierarchy's help, which made him more or less at the moment not regret his choice to refuse turning on Merith for Justin.
    As time passed on, Zadicus grew more loyal to the Coven, and Merith. Teaching the deprincess the way of fighting with her fists and becoming a spy for her. Even claiming her at one point as his liege. However it was not enough as Merith got killed in an explosion on the Hierarchy base, or so he thought at the time. Turned out Merith had survived and brought the old Hierarchy back together for a short time before she was yet killed again. And did time she did not survive, and in turn Zadicus joined another coven that soon merged in with a Coven called the Solifuge. Given the Solifuge had a library Zadicus often would go there to read, but in turn forged a strong friendship with Anya, at the time Xils second in command and Liberian. They shared their love of books and enjoyment of family. Shared their pasts and experiences to eachother, however it was short lived as Zadicus began having more and more outside matters to attend to, losing more and more time to visit the library and Anya. And soon they lost the bond they had, but Zadicus still hopes to someday mend it.
    In this time Zadicus would spend hours upon hours in the library, studying further about cultures and histories of other races. And learning more about the Arkens, and their history. Zadicus had also adopted many kids off the streets and made a huge family for himself. However over time Zadicus distanced himself more and more away from the Solifuge, and sadly enough Anya as well. In order to hopefully find a more peaceful life. And leave his past life behind him, for a while he even joined a Vigilante group called the Pale Orchid, in which he made a lot of new friends and experienced many new things. Zadicus among them was known as the Dark Sage, for his seemingly tendency to create crystal out of Shadows.
    To the Present [42-45]
    Zadicus would keep going with his studies of alchemy. And focusing on his family, he also began going to Floralcourt more and more in which he made a large group of new friends. He lived through the recent Vampire Crisis and now is trying to get readjusted into society all over again because of his odd appearance. Eventually, his friends in Floralcourt helped Zadicus become a Fin'ullen again, saving him from the grasp of the Void. The transformation reawakened Zadicus exist magespark, the Void Essence could no longer hinder it. So it grew stronger and stronger with each passing day. He began to learn more about Morrlond, and how to better care for plants.
    Name: Leviathan
    Strength (0)
    Constitution (0)
    (Wisdom) (7)
    Enchant Oceana Pack (Spirit Buff 3)
    Enchant Shifting Pack
    Enchant Mimic Pack
    Enchant Defense Pack
    Enchant Revenge Pack
    Enchant Bolts Pack
    Medical Resist Pack
    Dexterity (0)
    Magic (7)
    Sinistral Puppet (Spirit Buff 1)
    Sinistral Mindvex (Spirit Buff 2)
    Sinistral Leap Pack
    Sinistral Explode Pack

    Sinistral Sever Pack
    Sinistral Rage Pack

    Sinistral Implode Pack
    Radiant Relocate Pack
    Radiant Shield Pack
    Faith (0)
     
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    Hello, here is my review for your character:

    Skill Information:
    You have an additional +10 Fast Blade Combat Skill OR +10 Rogue Training to spend from your Kathar race boost.

    Tag me when you are done and I'll take another look.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    MidnightRey Ruler of the Abyss

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    @Arendan
    I've changed Zacks Bloodline. Edits are marked in blue in the storyline~
     
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    Approved.
     
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    hey ! i am Chap and this is my peer review
    to try and help with the crazy amount of apps being reposted / posted I will look at prof points and body stat but thats it . my thing is numbers not words !
    https://forums.massivecraft.com/threads/proficiency-system-rework.78847/
    https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Physical_Stat_Limits

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    Kathar physical stat limit is 50 please note this next to your stat
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    The reason I didn't put down 50 stat is because I heard all Stat limits were removed expect for Vampires sorry if that made anything inconvenient. i'll put it back on now thanks bud
     
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    @Arendan
    Boop, sorry for pinging you again
     
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    I see you fixed the physical cap! Approved!
     
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    Approved! Assuming all that was changed was points!
     
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    @PapidaCarrot reeee, hello again! :D
    I did basically an entire rewrite on this character so I think it may end up needing to be basically an entire review all over again. I hope this doesn't bother you too much, you're awesome!
     
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    @PapidaCarrot Updated with the new Kathar racial abilities! :d weee
     
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    Papida is no longer a member of staff, but never the less I will be claiming this application for review.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    This entire section is a difficult to read mess. Please fix this error and make it easier to read following this example;

    +15 Blades (+15 Invested)
    +5 Shielding (+5 Invested)
    +8 Void Ritualism (+8 Invested)
    +20 Alchemy Sciences (+20 Invested)
    +12 Sorcery Or however much you've spent (+12 Invested)
    +10 Culinary Arts (+10 Hobby Points)

    Vampire Mutations: <bloodline>
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    Sorcery Spells: <your two chosen schools>
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    Body Calculations
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    Mutations: etc etc

    Please follow this format so I can review the application. The biggest point of contention is the blob of proficiency points that are difficult to discern.

    Crimson Witches cannot have mutations that overwrite their eye color or hair color in any way or form.

    Please place expansions underneath a spoiler.

    Kathar tend to religiously praise magic and its use.

    Please elaborate answers in two to three sentences.

    Hallowed Lanterns are a general weakness, weaknesses if you intend to add any, should always be personal and serve as a genuine hindrance to the character.

    This is not acceptable, the mutations gained from ritualism do not affect the character's combat capacity and cannot be used in combat.

    Tag me and highlight edits when you are done. There are quite a few points of contention to cover and you still need to fix and update Shirina's application as well, so I understand if you need to take awhile to correct all the points made.
     
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    @Caelamus
    --I changed up one of his mutations
    --I got rid of the summoning weapon one and Abyssal Dance, replacing them with Abyssal Liege and Abyssal Shadow. I realized the summoning one was kinda just taking up a mutation slot given I wanted to now switch him to Dao blades and he can just summon swords whenever he wants with his Void Maw.
    --I also made him a Haunt Ritualist a while back IC as he lost his care for the Void and for character development reasons switched to Haunt Ritualism instead of Void. I hope this is ok given the new rules. But I wanted to make sure. It kinda feels unfair to send him back to Void after IGly going through everything leading up to the point of turning him to Haunt. I understand if not though.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Crimson witches can only learn void ritualism.
     
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    Fixed,
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    @Caelamus for some reason it lost its tag. I changed the format of the app but not like the actual points and such. Can you put it back on as accepted rq?
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    @Caelamus I hath updated Zads application!
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved.
     
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    Cael,

    I just did a /big/ update on Zadicus backstory. If you could check that out for me, it would be great! And lately I have been considering a few things, with the fact Crimson Witches might be soon loosing his Vampirism.
    And a decent amount of his character is kinda based on growing up with Vampirism and dealing with it, causing people to betray him over it etc.

    -And with his love for books and nerdy side, that I have been playing out a lot more lately. I was wondering if you think he would be better off as a Zikiel? Cause he loves books, and is a pacifist as of now, but I worry of it being too big of a change to his character and wanted to try getting your opinion on it before setting anything into stone.

    Would keeping him the way I've grown him up to be now personality wise be possible if he was a Zikiel due to Crimson Witch mentality and Zikiel Mentality being still so different? Mostly in how they see family and out sider Vampires.
    --Or maybe would him being a Von Kerle be better cause yes where they do fight a lot they also are a lot less strict on Mentality. Etc being the most non-evil plotting like vampires and only taking in what they believe they're owned, nor ever caring about having the most cattle or power.

    And need to work for what they earn. etc him trying to get a job under Kade as a house guard would make no sense if he's always been a Zikiel. Maybe he could've been a Zikiel earlier in life and then switched to Von Kerle even? And then turned back to Zikiel at some point given the mixed up mentalities he has over the years.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Remind me to look over this after the unga bunga event.
     
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    Updated along with the new Sorcery update! If you could give it a look over really quick that be great.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Right off the bat this character is immensely stacked with abilities and potential for CRP with 5 abilities from Crimson Witch, 5 from Sorcery and ontop of it all +20 alchemy with some combat ability. Equally clarify where true path is coming from as Crimson Witches can only learn curse combat and aesthetic.

    Please stop trying to make stacked murder hobo characters and tone down the volume of abilities or pick mostly aesthetics.
     
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    --True Path was meant to be an escape ability, which I did not realize he couldn't even learn until now so I will get into changing that.
    --Super Self I only has knockback first upon being activated which after it is all aesthetics.
    --Element Control V is so he can summon tools/weapons at will which is useful for him should he ever need it. Which again, which I guess makes little sense given he has Void Storage and can just summon whatever tools or weapons he needs... So likely will just remove it.
    --Magic Bolt I is really the only ability which does actual damage against enemies and works as a good offense. I will replace Element Control with something else. Personally the last time I remember entering full out combat as Zadicus was months ago during a raid. I'll make him more defensive focused rather then offense focused.

    Update Finished
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved however on the stipulation that you use this as your vibe char and try to not get into so much CRP with them. I will be watching your conduct on this character and if you do misuse abilities then this app will be revisited.
     
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    I have changed some things around, turns out. I don't need a lot of the extra fancy combat abilities ahh, and updated his points to.
     
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