Syndrei Eljor

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  1. _Breakshot_

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    • -《 ʙᴀsɪᴄ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ || to note one's identity. 》-
      • « BIRTH NAME » Syndrei Ortiz Eljor
        • ↬ [ Preferred: Syndrei Eljor ]
      • « AGE » Thirty-five.
        • ↬ [ Birthday: March 2nd. ]
        • ↬ [ Star Sign: Pisces ]
      • « GENDER » Female.
      • « RACE » Cielothar.
        • ↬ [ Circle of Joeil ]
      • « SEXUALITY » Bisexual.
      • « PREFERRED WEAPON » La Chancla.
    • -《 sᴋɪʟʟ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ || to harness one's skillset. 》-
      • « TOTAL POINTS TO SPEND » 40 points to spend alongside ten hobby points and ten talent points.
      • « POINTS ALLOCATION »
        • Point-Buy Group Proficiencies
          • +9 Exist Sorcery { +9 from Core. }
            • ↬ [ Mythic Shift: Flux Shift 6 ]
            • ↬ [ Toggle Passive: Magic Shift 1 ]
            • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Arcane Mastery 1 ]
          • +3 Linguistics { +3 from Core. }
            • ↬ [ Selected: Daendroquin ]
        • Core Group Proficiencies
          • +6 One-handed Blunt Combat { +6 from Points. }
          • +4 Light-Ranged Combat { +4 from Points. }
        • Hobby Group Proficiencies
          • +10 Cooking Art { +10 from Core. }
          • +5 Husbandry Art { +5 from Core. }
          • +10 Baking Art { +10 from Hobby. }
          • +5 Instrument Art { +5 from Core. }
          • +3 Horticulture Art { +3 from Points }
          • +5 Mixology Art { +5 from Points. }
      • « PHYSICAL STAT » 13.
        • ↬ [ Calculation: 6 Stave + 4 Light + 3 Horti = 13. ]
        • ↬ [ Body Shape: Athletic ]
        • ↬ [ Body Fat: Moderate ]
      • « LANGUAGES »
        • ↬ [ Plains Altalar: Native. ]
        • ↬ [ Daendroquin: Linguistics. ]
        • ↬ [ Common: Learned. ]
    • sᴘᴇᴄɪᴀʟ ᴛʀᴀɪᴛs || to utilize one's abilities.
      • « RACIALS » Cielothar.
        • ↬ [ All Racials, including the Joeil Circle racials, are available. ]
        • ↬ [ Familiar: Appears as a Resplendent Quetzal -- an exotic bird. ]
      • « SORCERY » From Lightblooded & Invested.
        • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Arcane Mastery 1 ]
        • ↬ [ Toggle Passive: Magic Sight 1 ]
        • ↬ [ Mythic Shift: Flux Shift 6 ]
        • ↬ [ Toggle Passive: True Path 1 | Lightblooded ]
    • -《 ᴠɪsᴜᴀʟ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ || to show one's self. 》-
      • « EYE COLOR » Emerald green.
      • « HAIR COLOR » Dark brunette.
      • « HAIR STYLE » Meets the small of her back when it's not styled in a messy bun.
      • « SKIN TONE » Ciellonian tan.
      • « CLOTHING » Commoner/”Bohemian” garb, sticks to green & skirted attire with open footwear.
      • « HEIGHT » Five feet, five inches.
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    • -《 ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ & ᴀʙɪʟɪᴛɪᴇs || to know one's nature. 》-
      • « ALIGNMENT » Lawful / Neutral Good.
      • « MBTI PERSONALITY TYPE » The Entertainer || ESFP.
        • "Spontaneous, energetic and enthusiastic people - life is never boring around them."
      • « FAITH » Ciellonian version of the Estellian Faith. 7/10
        • Indoctrinated.
    • ʟɪғᴇ sᴛᴏʀʏ || to know one's background.
      • The Beginning
        • Syndrei Eljor was born unto a quaint, small family of Cielothar as a single child to a loving Aiel and Joeil-circle father and mother. As the child grew, she took to the vast forest that surrounded their abode which was wrapped in the safety of Windgarden, the young Cielothar searching far and wide to observe the teeming wildlife and vibrant flora that inhabited the greenery she freely explored, Ta’rath familiar at her side.
      • Childhood
        • Upon reaching the age of fifteen, she had taken on the Trial of Estel, finding herself anointed by the Circle of Joeil quite comfortably, her Animal Companion thusly established as a Resplendent Quetzal, as she always had a penchant for assisting her friends and family with cooking, entertainment and crafts. She grew to be fast friends with everyone she met, gladly going along with the Avanthar on their hunts and interacting with the creatures of the forest, the Nelfin taking the fauna back to her home to care for them as best she could if they were injured, or sick.
        • On the Arcane side, the Cielothar was blessed with Whimsical sorcery and a mystic familiar from birth, however she was fascinated beyond what she already possessed; a sagacious Yanar proved most resourceful in teaching her the ways of Nature Sorcery, to nurture the flora and fauna, and provide herself a means of protection.
      • Young Adulthood
        • Due to her parents’ migratory tradition, and her adherence to their presence, she bade her bittersweet farewell to her friends and family of Windgarden, journeying by horse-led cart to the City of Daenshore, where her parents soon established a humble inn. The young woman became quickly acquainted with Daendroque culture, even learning their language and customs by way of tutors gladly hired by her parents.
        • This newfound knowledge prompted the Cielothar to take to serving patrons at their family’s tavern, where she would continue to cook and clean, however she reveled in performing for customers with the help of her familiar and pan flute. Exposure to the general populace of Daenshore’s deep-seated criminal background and its residents left the Nelfin somewhat jaded, however she remained to be her cheery self.
      • Adulthood
        • Her mother and father wearily decided it was their time to return to their homeland, but Syndrei wasn’t finished with her life in Daenshore just yet; she gave them a warm farewell, and asked them to give her friends in Windgarden her regards, as she saw them off. Naturally, she took over the family tavern, where she continued to run it proficiently enough on her own. Eventually, the Cielothar caught wind of whole hosts of opportunities for professions in the Crown Isles, and so she thusly sold her establishment and made the voyage to Regalia.
      • The Present
        • Shuffling off of the ship and onto the city’s docks, she had made her seasick arrival, purchasing an abode in the Saint Road district and hiring on as a cook at the Nook and Cranny Inn for quite some time, where they met Lyaois Komast, an Avanthar who the Ciellonian woman was deeply charmed by, and has chosen to be with, as the couple made their returning visit to their home in the Plains, where they were wed. The Nelfin has since returned to Regalia, newly rendered displaced following the catastrophic burning of Petal court, but have found residence and refuge at the ragtag camp, situated by the Red Spire.
     
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  2. Antimreoir

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    Hello! I'll be claiming your application for an Aspirant Review! Expect a response soon!
     
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    Here's my review! @_Breakshot_

    Basic Information
    All good here!
    Skill Information
    Though not a vital fix, can you split your proficiencies up into segments based on what points are used to invest in each? A separate point for Core, Talent and Hobby, this just makes the listing more readable for me as a reviewer.
    You've 5 Points in Woodwind Instruments yet you've stated 4 Points in your brackets, just a wee fix here to clarify which total it is.
    I would recommend investing 3 points in Linguistic Sciences for the Daendroquin language, the additional languages granted by childhood are provided from each of the races of the parents. With both parents being Cielothar, she would only know Plains Altalar by default. To have learned Daendroquin she would have needed to grow up in a Dandroquin Dominated province, which she only moved to during her adolescence.
    Special Traits
    All good here!
    Visual Information
    All good here!
    Personality
    All good here!
    Life Story
    Besides the mention of language expanded upon in the Skill Information segment, it's all perfect here!
     
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    @Antimreoir Lost the tag when I was making the requested edits, should be all set now! Let me know if I need to fix anything else.
     
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    Lovely! Just make sure to fix your Physical Stat per your updated calculation and you're all set!

    Provided that's done, I'm marking this application as Approved! @_Breakshot_
     
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  6. _Breakshot_

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    @Antimreoir
    Howdy! I swapped out some of her sorcery spells, because I underestimated how much I had to emote through aesthetics.
    Namely...
    Wardrobe of Feeling -> Glitterdewoo
    Soothe the Beast -> Brambling
    Familiar Sensor -> Wood Singing
    Lastly,
    Construct of Tranquility -> Your Will is Mine
    That's about it!
    Let me know if there are any mistakes or if I missed anything, thank you.
     
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    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
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