❂ Character Information Full Name: Amir Mustafa Razavi Race: Qadir, National Age: 31 years, born the 25th of October Gender: Male Occult: Void Arkenborn (Body Arken) ❂ Core Concept A proud Clockwork engineer who grew up in a technological society now trying to connect with and understand his Planar heritage as an Arkenborn. Amir continues to follow Esra's tenets, and mainly strifes towards mastering the Skill Purpose. ❂ Appearance Information Standing at a height of 6'0" (184 cm), Amir has a muscular body shape and a dark tan skin tone, which is complimented by short auburn hair and contrasted by his distinct gold eyes with a red limbus. He has a well-kept, short beard and moustache, which is carefully styled to accentuate his jawline. Amir's Soul-skin is entirely gold thanks to his Arkenborn heritage, though it otherwise displays normal floral patterns. At this point in his life, it has reached up to his biceps. Spoiler: More Art Art by @CocoaCherry :D Cropped version, art by MonMarty By MonMarty Amir and Anathema by TwiddleTaffy on Tumblr! Thank you @Eccetra for this art by @MonMarty <3 Art by @Patsie ! Drawn by Owlet-in-chest on Deviantart! Art by @Patsie ! Drawn by Lyrae on Instagram/Twitter! Front view of Amir - some edgy drawing I made for angle/lighting practise. Drawn by Nioartes on tumblr! Beautifully drawn by @Patsie ❂ Proficiencies Proficiencies Strength: 5 Knockback Sweep Pack Concussive Blow Pack Pinning Throw Pack Unyielding Strike Pack Cheap Shot Pack Constitution: 0 Wisdom: 7 Engineering Custom Kit: Here Tech Talent (Qadir) Tech Sanction Pack Tech Barrier Pack Tech Armory Pack Tech Rockets Pack Tech Antimagi Pack Tech Lasso Pack Tech Stim Pack Tech Suit Pack (Qadir) Tech Ghost Pack (Qadir) Arcana Shift Pack (Body Arkenborn) Dexterity: 0 Arcane: 2 Chem Talent (free) Chem Experiment Pack Technique Parry Pack Faith: 0 ❂ Languages Faraddi (Parent) Common (Fluent) Ibeth (Fluent) Altalar (Capable) Anglish (Capable) Shalota (Somewhat Capable) ❂ Life Story Childhood: Amir was born in the capital of Al-Alus to a Nationalist (step)father and mother, and had a relatively uneventful, typical Nationalist Qadir upbringing. Due to his mother's early passing, he holds little recollection of her. Adolescence: He took to engineering like his step-father, working in his workshop and cultivating his knowledge on Clockwork. Due to his Silvenism, Amir had to make regular visits to the underground areas of the Hadritya for research. Deemed no threat to the machinery, he was safe to stay within the Hadritya. Early Adulthood: Wanting to prove his place within the Hadritya walls, Amir enrolled in the Al-Hamjad Hamanh College to study physics, and eventually ended up joining the war effort against the Masaya at Hadr Shdh Jazira, to work on the latest machines for the frontline for most of his early adulthood. An accident at the border almost cost him his life by the hands of the Masaya, only escaping due to the interference of some benevolent Rishiq, and perhaps the resilience his Arken parentage gave him. Amir spent some months with them until he found his way back to the Hadritya, though it no longer felt like home somehow. Arrival in Regalia: Amir set out for the wider world instead, in search of knowledge, not only technological, though also about his Planar heritage, thinking he would not be here today if it wasn’t for just that. Amir was 26 when he set foot on Regalian soil, drawn to whatever the Arken had in store for the center of the world. ❂ Character Relationships Spoiler: Relationships (Outdated) The numbers 1-10 specify how strong a feeling is, not what the feeling is. Spoiler: Relationships (Outdated) Aesling Sylfina - 10 (@Bellarmina) | “I couldn't be more proud of you, and the place you've claimed for yourself now. I've got your back.” [OLD] 9 | “You’ve always been the anchor. It’s a shame so much misfortune befalls you.” Anathema - 9 (@Birdsfoot_Violet) | “We’ve got time. Whatever lies ahead, I’m not going anywhere.” [OLD] 8 | “I'd like to think there is mutual understanding between us, moreso than I could've hoped for.” Naaji al-Makir - 9 (@PuffyPigeon) | “I know you ultimately mean well. I hope.” [OLD] 8 | “I don’t want to admit it, but your ever persistent smile is becoming contagious.” [OLDER] 7 | “I could pick you out from a thousand different you’s, buddy. That’s a joke. Tell me if it’s you.” Xaella - 6 (@Finlaggan) | “I can respect your expertise. Sometimes not your attitude.” [OLD] 6 | “The other side of the same coin, right?” Harlow Ketch - 7 (@fantuinn) | “Incredibly infuriating at times, but at least you’re there for them.” [OLD] 7 | “Leaving the Circle has done wonders for you. Stay on the right path. For them.” [OLDER] 5 | “Have you come to terms with who you are as easily as that?” Malruthiia - 6 (@Bunemma) | “I’m glad you’ve found new people, new things to do.” [OLD] 6 | “I see you’re back. You look like you used to, you act like you used to. Have you found your spark again?” [OLDER] 7 | “I wanted you to look past what you’ve lost, to see things from my perspective. It didn’t work, evidently.” Abigail Tucker - 6 (@Lizmun) | “You’ve improved so much. I want to make sure it remains an upward trend.” [OLD] 5 | “I'm not ignoring you, I'm just struggling to accept that despite everything, you're still full of optimism.” Tullion Kearney - 5 (@ShipIt) | “It’s crazy how much out paths have diverged. Be well, old friend.” [OLD] 5 | “Something was lost in the last year or so.” Sivrid Sorenvik - 5 @MrsCripple | “A mind I can deeply appreciate. You’re still down to earth, despite your climb upwards.” Saren - 6 @Carlit0o | “Are we true friends, or are you purposefully making me feel like I should trust you? Because it’s working.” Gehrman Gahan - 6 @TheWonderOfYou | “Is it your own conviction pushing you this far, or is it the ghost whispering in your ears?” [OLD] 5 | “One of the few of us whose values do not clash with my own. Mostly.” Argo Dressal - 6 @SuperKamiWarlock | “Someone I’ve come to respect gradually, and hope to see more from.” Bennet Clayton - 7 @DedJok | “I admire the strength to remain as you are despite everything. A constant factor amidst the chaos.”
~Update Log~ Updated the sheet to comply with the Arken Parentage Registry. Added Body Arken Conduits description in the visual information expansion, changed some wording in the life story. No major changes. Tagging you just to make sure, shouldn't be enough for a re-review. @Vegemiite
~Update Log~ Updated the sheet to comply with the updated Proficiency System. Updated the life story to get rid of pre-rework proficiency mentions, no changes story-wise. Removed Daendroque to conform to the new language rules. Added some cool art in a spoiler. Requesting a re-review. Tagging @Vegemiite !
~Update Log~ Tagging @Percuriam to let a reviewer know that I changed Metallurgy Arts to Finecraft Arts according to the Lore update. Also changed the Silven muters according to the update! Went from 30 to 31 years because his birthday passed. No re-review needed.
~Update Log~ Updated the Physical Stat and Body Shape according to the recent update, made all edits in red. Went from: 15 Pole Combat + 10 Unarmed Combat = 25 Physical Stat Body Shape: Ripped To: 15 Pole Combat + (10x2) Unarmed Combat = 35 Physical Stat Body Shape: Muscular @Percuriam
~Update Log~ Updated Virtuoso Permission and moved some points around. Body Stat outcome did not change and no more than 10 points were moved, so no need for a re-review. On a side note that I don't have a reviewer anymore anyway.
~Update Log~ Updated the Proficiency points and Body Shape to allign with the new system. Aged Amir up by 1 year due to Virtuoso requirements changing. Updated the personality section with the new format. Added recent happenings to Amir's life story. I'll need a new reviewer! :fingerguns:
@WaterDruppel here we go: Everything is fine. I like how you factor in the Silvenism in the life story, and how Amir has had to deal with that aberrancy as either a boon or a bust. Re-Approved. Now back to tinkering.
~Update Log~ Updated the app with the Hobby points Removed Virtuoso due to the permission rework Changed Finecraft Arts to Finecraft Sciences due to the name change of the proficiency Edited the art section Tag didn't break and I'm not sure whether this requires a re-review, but I'm just gonna tag you to let you know I made these edits. @FireFan96
~Update Log~ Updated the app with the new Proficiency System. Point spread cleared by Birdsfoot. Updated the Art section. @FireFan96
~Update Log~ Updated Proficiencies due to the Metallurgy update. I didn't move any points into different proficiencies other than moving the Racial Boost. Updated Physical Stat accordingly. @FireFan96
~Update Log~ Updated Proficiencies due to the Proficiency Update. Added more points to Metallurgy, switched from Spear to Glaive combat to stay more true to Qadir lore, added Pathfinding, added an Arcanology pack and a Schooling pack. I will be updating the backstory with the Schooling justification added once the Qadir update rolls out. It is just in a bit of an awkward spot right now. @FireFan96
~Update Log~ Updated the entire Life Story to include the Qadir update. Added an expansion section to reflect the happenings in roleplay. I purposefully kept the expansion vague both because of how much happened and the nature of what happened. Updated Point Spread due to Qadir Racial Honed Skill I. Only moved 3 Metallurgy points into Unspent. Also upped Common to an 8/10 because he's lived in Regalia for a good while now. Updated Physical Stat because of fewer Metallurgy points. Updated the Visual Information Expansion section with the Qadir Soul-skin. Updated both Basic and Visual Information to reflect the Qadir update. @FireFan96
~Update Log~ Updated Proficiency Points. Removed 5 Pathfinding and 4 Unspent to put into 3 Clockwork packs. @FireFan96 No need for a re-review, it's just to log the changes.
~Update Log~ Updated Proficiency points (and phys stat as a result): Moved 3 points from Fist Combat Skill into Metallurgy, added Armour pack Switched Metallurgy Steamtek pack to Weapon pack Removed +5 Glass Art and +5 Wooden Art in favour of +10 Pathfinding Art It's a little over 10 points so I'm just going to tag you @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Changed Clockwork packs into Engineering packs as per the update. Replaced Bronze Family Metallurgy with Daen Family Metallurgy and added justification in the recent lifestory; apprenticeship in Hadr Maas-Darrah. Changed Bodystat calculations accordingly. Not re-review worthy but good to let you know anyway :D @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Changed the format in accordance with the new Character Application format. Summarised Life Story Added an Optional Section for Personality Moved around proficiencies: Moved 7 Unarmed Combat Skill into Strength Training Added 3 more points to Engineering Set 3 points to 'unspent' All other backstory information has been kept the same. @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Added Engineering Pack Seven: Hooking, in line with the Qadir Racial Sariyd Gift 3 update. Shouldn't need a re-review, tagging just to let you know. @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Changed Pathfinding Art into Wooden Art because the former got removed from the system. @FireFan96 This shouldn't need a re-review, but I'll tag you just to be sure.
~Update Log ~ Updated the Profiency and Ability section due to the Qadir Abilities/Specials update. Added the Qadir Specials, removed Engineering Pack Seven: Hooking. I wrote down Engineering Pack Eight: Familiar to clarify it is being used to force Engineer 2 as a Progression Talent. Recalculated Proficiency Points and Physical Stat. Removed mentions of old Ability/Racial names. Moved another 3 points into 'Unspent', for a total of 6. @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Updated the Proficiency and Ability section due to the Proficiency system rework. Needs re-review! Merged the two sections to streamline the app. Updated life story due to Songaskia update. Removed mentions of capture, kept overall story the same. Replaced 'travelling Qadir' with Rishiq, as per the 'new' Qadir lore. Updated optional relationship section :D
~ Update Log ~ No point allocation changes, but I replaced the Axe Pack with the Large Blades Pack, and replaced the Resilience Pack with the Light Shielding Pack. Small adjustment to physical description because of hair style change. Put in the new link for the Custom Kit update. Rearranged some of the art :) Not worthy of a re-review I believe, just posting the update to let you know @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Major point-shuffle due to the Technician/Artificer update. Moved all points out of melee/defensive to qualify for Technician, and moved the 5 points into other proficiencies instead (1 more Training pack, 1 Rogue pack, 1 Presence pack and 2 Charisma packs) Probably needs re-review! @FireFan96
~ Update Log ~ Added the names of the characters currently in possession of the Mindblock chip(s) and the Recall Radio(s). I'll probably keep doing minor edits as the owners change over time. No re-review needed! Just logging this for transparency.
~ Update Log ~ Removed Parkour Pack and defunct Stupid Luck Pack. Added Diplomat Pack and Resilience Pack. Removed Artificer Mechsuit Plus, added Artificer Barricade Pack and cleaned up the formatting a little. Updated the Custom Kit link. Updated the Core Concept with the updated Esra faith. @fantuinn tagging just so you know I updated the app!
~ Update Log ~ Finally got around to updating the application to the new format Removed Ironheart Pack (now Debuff Endurance) because it is no longer in the Training Category and replaced it with Wood Craft Pack Simplified Soul-skin description Removed Personality Section Moved Relationships to the bottom of the application (because it is optional information)
~ Update Log ~ Reworked Proficiency points as per the recent updates: Removed 3 Constitution Packs and 1 Charisma Pack, invested in 4 Chem Packs Swapped most Engineering Packs to Tech Packs Added more art to the spoiler :) Probably a temporary spread as Crafting Point Buy/other PBs are reworked
