Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Pavel Tarknid (Pav) Age: 55 Years Gender: Male Race: Als-Allar Preferred Weapon: Crossbow Proficiency Limits: None Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 50 Points, 10 Hobby Metallurgy Sciences: 39 (From Points) Wooden Arts: 10 (Hobby Points) (Schooling) Skole Militair Nordskag: 3 (From Points) Utility Ranged Combat: 8 (From Points) Character's Abilities: All Metallurgy Packs (39 Points into Metallurgy Sciences) Body Shape (Required) Physical Stat:15 Body Shape: Athletic Body Fat: Low Body Fat Languages (Required) Common (Learned in Childhood) Mirnoy Dialect (Homeland Language) Zasta (Taught After Arriving) Special Traits/Spells/Mutations N/A Visual Information Eye Color: Round Pupils with Yellow Iris and White Sclera Hair Color: Not Applicable Hair Style: No Horns on his head but more so a rounded jagged head. Skin Color: Grey scales with some black (Gunpowder Pattern) Clothing: He wears something very close to an explorers jacket with long pants and a satchel slung over his right hip. He wears a brown undershirt below the jacket. Height: 6’0” Personality (The Question List) Pavel would express happiness as most people would, he would enjoy more time with his friends or anyone close. If he was upset he would want isolation to solve his problems. Pavel was raised by Vladnos, he experiences fear as anyone else but he would push through it and face the fear head on. Defeating anything in his path or dying trying. If Pavel can not push through his fear, the Allar will begin to break down and appear to be going insane as he slowly falls apart mentally. When Pavel is stressed, he attempts to seclude himself to collect his thoughts. Or if someone he trusts is available he will seek council to get their advice. As a Vladno Pavel doesn’t really listen to the law or Authority of Regalia. He listens to those he deems worthy of listening to. But he will not seek to break laws but won’t care if he does. Races other than Allar, are who they are to Pavel. As long as they have done nothing wrong to him they will be treated as equals and experience good hospitality. As he was raised by Vladno, Pavel is an Etosian Unionist. He believes everyone has a right to believe in what they want, as long as no-one tries to keep him from his religion or take it away he will not do it to them. Pavel has mostly come to terms as being viewed as lesser because he is an Allar, but he still wished to make his family as proud as he can in this life before his next. Arcanes and Magics have always confused Pavel as he wasn’t exposed to them as most Allar are in Hadar, he is neither scared nor enchanted by it. He thinks it is neat but will leave it be, he won’t get involved with it. Pavel never knew who his actual family was, but he was raised by Ailor who were Vladnos. But towards his mother and father he loved them as a child should, his father taught him almost all he knows and his mother loved and cared for him. Pavel is most proud of all he has learned in the short 40 years he has been alive for an Allar, he wonders at what amazing things he will learn in the rest of his life. Pavel is motivated to move forward in life by what he has been taught as a Vladno. In life he should strive to get a wife and bare healthy children, but he is Bi as it is in Allar nature so that conflicts with it slightly. But after he has as a family he will seek to better himself to be able to care for said family. Pavel has always been a warrior in his life for his family and clan. But not on the front lines, he was a siege engineer/officer. His biggest insecurity is that one day his small size as a Zu will fail him and he will fail his family/friends. His biggest fear would be his fear of death, he has been a warrior most of his life but he has always done what keeps him the farthest from battle. Such as being a siege engineer or using Crossbows in battle. Life Story (Required) ChildHood | 1-18 Pavel wasn’t born in Hadar as most Allar were. He was born in Etosil, or his egg hatched there at least.He was hatched to a Vladno family. When his egg was produced hsi actual parents had it sent off to Etosil mostly hoping the egg would get damaged as they thought the child was a mistake. Pavel will never know this. A Vladno Mother and Father found the egg as it arrived and upon finding no owners they kept it to see if it hatched, when Pavel hatched he was accepted as part of the family and given a Vladno name. In his early childhood he was a smaller child, with slimer proportions not to mention a heightened sense of taste. This designated him of the Al-Allar subclass though no-one knew this. His parents had other children before him and as he got older he got bullied by his siblings as he was a lizard, it wasn’t anything too harsh but was mean enough for kids. At the age of fourteen he left with his father to go train for multiple years, he followed in his father’s skills of being a siege engineer on land and sea. He wouldn’t return home until he was eighteen. Early AdultHood | 19-30 After he returned home he found many of his siblings left and it was his parents, him and only the three youngest siblings who remained. He spent the next few years of his life practicing his combat skill with crossbows and siege weaponry. He also practiced the skills he needed to work on or produce siege weapons. When the Cyrasant War started Pavel was twenty-two and he might have never been to Hadar but it still affected him. He didn't fight for either side and during most of the conflict, his parents kept him hidden from others, telling them he fled the archipelago before the war was declared. This was all to help keep him safe from the racially motivated attacks on Allar during the war. Pavel enjoyed making things with his father but wanted to do more of the process so he got into blacksmithing to make metal components for weapons and siege armaments. This later led to fine craft to adorn weapons with family and clan symbols. At some point in Pavel's Adulthood he wanted to learn more with commanding the Siege Weapons he so much enjoyed and went to the Skole Militair Nordskag command school. But when he wasn’t with his father he was with his mother who enjoyed her time with carpentry and at some points he worked with her acquiring a hobby in the carpentry arts. By the time he reached thirty his father was too old to fight so he took over his position as a Siege engineer and or Siege officer. He fought for a few years before he made some decisions in his life. Present | 31-40 Pavel fought for his clan until he was thirty-four. At this point he wanted to see something else, maybe meet other Allar. After discussing much with his father he finally decided to sail for the beacon of light known to all places that was Regalia. Upon his trip there he gained some attention from people he met from being a Vlando but more importantly a Vlando Allar along with an accent that resembles a Russain one from his family and the clan he grew up with. Upon arriving into the city Pavel immediately set out to meet new people and find the community of Allar he heard lived in the city. But well here he will always remember his family and never leave his beliefs or culture for another.
Apologies for the wait @Camzuwu My review is as follows: On fear, I would like to know how Pavel reacts when he is fully helpless, and cannot just persevere to get through it. How does he react to true fear? As an Etosian Unionist, how does Pavel view the belief that this faith views him as a Lesser and needing to reincarnate into an Ailor in the next life? In life story, please remove the hand explosives aspects. As an Allar living in a time before, during, and after the Chrysant War, I expect Pavel had some major issues with xenophobia during the war years. The Regalians would not have allowed Allar to serve in their militaries until after the war, and while I can believe his adoptive father teaching him skills outside of formal education, this social stigma of an Allar in a pre-Chrysant War Regalian Empire has to be accounted for somewhere. I would try to figure out a way to either lay low during the decade of war, or leaving the Archipelago before war was declared so that he would avoid most of the racially motivated attacks. When you've made these changes, tag me once complete.
@Camzuwu your Proficiencies are still reliant on the old system. Everyone starts out with 50 core points, and 10 hobby. Racial buffs can give the extra +5 with an investment. Frontline and Siege Command no longer exist, and have been replaced by Schooling. Below are two pages to consider as you edit the skillset: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Schooling Should you need any further guidance, please let me know!
