Basic Information Full Name: Augustin Mohren, Ludwig Raskopf, Auguszillia Szelloro Age: 114 (Augustin Glamor form age: 38) (Aleksander Glamor form age: 20) Gender: Male Race: Slizzar Sexuality: Heterosexual Preferred Weapon: 4-Foot Bastard Sword Skill Information Total Points: 50 Age, 10 Hobby, 5 Racial Boost = 65 Proficiency Boost: Perception Training Core: Fist Combat: 13 (Age) Sword Combat: 20 (Age) Talent: Perception Training: 10 (5 Age, 5 boost) Hobby: Theater Arts: 10 (+10 Hobby Points) Point Buy Schooling Finance: Narlas College for Commerce, Dragenthal Auguszillia operates a trade company in Narlas. Command: Calemberg Ordner School, Calemberg Statesman: Duchess Morgannan Society, Irvellan Diplomacy: Aerzyraaqvan, Ssassrakand Body Shape 15 physical stat Natural Form Ripped body build Average body fat Glamor Forms Ripped body build Average body fat Languages Zasta (Natural language) Common (Learned in childhood) Regalisch (Learned in youth) Alt-Anglian (Learned in youth) Visual Information Natural Form: Eye Color: Purple Hair Color: Fiery orange Hair Style: Snakey tendrils Skin Color: Shiny black scales with accents of pale, tannish-green. Clothing: Extravagant furs Height: 5’8 Augustin Glamor Form: Eye Color: Arctic blue Hair Color: Mahogany Hair Style: Short-cut hair, short beard. Skin Color: Warm ivory Clothing: Fur-heavy Imperial fashion. Height: 5’10 Ludwig Raskopf Glamor Form: Eye Color: Cobalt blue Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Short-cut hair, stubble. Skin Color: Warm ivory Clothing: Fur-heavy Imperial fashion. Height: 5'10 Personality and Abilities Option Two: The Core List Alignment: True Neutral Personality Type: Executive, ESTJ-a Religion: Nessrassian: 10/10 Patron Deity: The Snake of Power, Vailess Spoiler: ”Personality Scales” Life Story Auguszillia Szelloro was born in Sassrakkand on June 4th, 220 AC, where he was taken to the Hall of Mentors at 14 months old, and was later mentored by an elder Slizzar in politics, military and Regalian society, as well as studying diplomacy at Aerzyraaqvan, from the ages of 6 to 25. Nearing the end of his mentoring, Augiszillia was taken by his Mentor to Anglia to gain practical experience and further hone his abilities. As his mentoring came to an end, Augustin remained in Anglia. Manipulating a minor local conflict, he was able to gain authority and respect from the locals. After some time, he determined it prudent to found a family dynasty, and so courted an Anglian woman. Using the funding of the Anglian locality, Auguszillia departed for Dragenthal in order to study at the Narlas College for Commerce. Auguszillia and his partner soon after faked the conception of a child, and staged a birth, also adopting Imperial culture for his family. Officially, Augustin Mohren was born in the Regalia Isle in 270 AC, but truly did not exist. Following his graduation from Narlas, Auguszillia began a business in the region to fund his further endeavors. From 277 to 282, Auguszillia conceived three sets of children, each time keeping the Ailor child and returning the Slizzar child to Sassrakkand. In 280 AC, Auguszillia began living simultaneously as both Augustin and his old identity, Augustin's father. Through scheduling and manipulation, he avoided any conflicts between his father and son personas; they existed in harmony. Augustin graduated with a Statesman education from the Duchess Morgann Society at an exceptionally young age in 289 AC. Immediately afterwards, Auguszillia's two personas and his wife returned to Anglia. There, Auguszillia prepared a young Anglian woman whom Augustin could marry, and with whom to fabricate the birth of Aleksander Mohren in the same year, 289 AC. Auguszillia then orchestrated the death of his original wife, and shortly after, his first Ailor identy. He assumed the sole role of Augustin Mohren, inheriting the estate of his past identity as first born. He proceeded to Calemberg, where he would study Marshalry at the Calemberg Ordner School. In 308 AC, Augustin and his wife moved to Regalia in order to enter Noble Politics. As one of his first acts in Regalia, Augustin made his way into the Kreiburg family's House Guard, and made the acquaintance of Alaric Keen. After the two left the Kreiburgs, Augustin would become a close confidante of Alaric, and second in command of his Ivory Company. By 309 AC, Augustin had become an infamous figure. As such, he determined it was time to assume the identity of Aleksander Mohren, and so Augustin returned to Anglia.
Review! 1) expand your life story beyond short sentenced points. Mark your changes in Blue @Legoclub22
Requiring re-review, but former reviewer is no longer staff. Update was very simple, just a reworking of proficiencies, and a little touch-up on life story. All in blue.
"--they cannot under any circumstance reproduce an already existing person. For example, they might mimic a person's appearance by adopting parts of their appearance, but something will always be off upon closer inspection, like scars missing, an eye shape off, or a nose bridge not quite right. While Slizzar have a great deal of control over their appearance, they are unable to perfectly mimic an existing appearance." This section conflicts with writing on the wiki.
I am aware, which is why they waited in Regalia for seven years. Upon arrival, there would be nobody to identify that the 12 year old looked different, and after 7 years, the 19 year old returning to Anglia could very easily have any visual differences attributed to age. My understanding of the reason for their inability to reproduce existing people is to prevent players from impersonating other player-characters in-roleplay. I also felt I sufficiently avoided issues of conflicting with this rule by acknowledging the issue of difference in appearance, and then managing the situation so that it would not act as a road block. The life chronicle provides a more detailed explanation than the basic life story of how I portrayed this scenario, if you would like to look. Otherwise, I can look at ways that I might be able to re-structure the life story to avoid this issue, but it will probably take a pretty big rewriting of the life story, which will take time.
Idk who turned this thread to rejected, but I'm putting it back to needs re-reviewer, because that's what it is.
I also decided to make a change to the backstory to write in more family members, all marked in blue.
Changed Rapier combat to Sword combat to reflect a stylistic choice to use a longsword instead of a rapier. I don't think that requires a re-review.
@Caelamus I've made some updates to this sheet, primarily backstory changes to resolve issues posed by the recent Slizzar update. As a result, the specifics of the backstory have changed a bit, and I've changed his age a bit. Additionally, I removed Keyboard proficiency to re-distribute the points into Linguistics and Unarmed, updated the favorite weapon, and updated physical description.
I have a total of 50 age points, 10 talent points, and 10 hobby points allocated, with 5 extra coming from a Proficiency Boost to Statecraft Command from Slizzar race.
I've actually changed my mind on proficiencies sightly. I can't really see myself ever using more languages, so I'll instead put those six points in siege Command and unarmed.
@Caelamus I've done a little bit of reworking on this sheet. Namely, I have added another identity as well as backstory and physical description for said identity. I also got rid of Siege points because I don't think I will ever find myself using them.
@Caelamus Updated proficiency in line with new system. Added point-buy schools. Redid backstory to accommodate schools. Got rid of life chronicle because it was long, useless, and hard to keep up to date. Included additional Glamor Form details.
