Alexandria, Lost And Found

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  1. NetXeroVT

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    Name: Endromyda ‘Alexandria’ Nerirona

    Nicknames: Alex

    Age: 29

    Eye Color: Green

    Race: Feka Asha

    Affliction: None

    Preferred Weapon(s):
    Fists

    Religion and Concept

    Alexandria is not currently religious in any way.

    A girl moving forward in her life with a bright outlook, her positive demeanor having returned to her.


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    14 Points
    0 Unused


    ◈ 2 Strength
    -Fisticuffs Pack
    -Comrade Pack


    ◈ 2 Constitution
    -Thread Pack
    -Resilience Pack

    ◈ 4 Wisdom(Artificer)
    Branch: Teslatech
    -Medical Pack
    -Barricade Pack
    -Communicator Pack
    -Tusseling Pack


    ◈ 4 Dexterity
    -Parkour Pack
    -Outlaw Pack
    -Reaction Pack
    -Escapist Pack


    ◈ 0 Magic

    ◈ 2 Charisma

    -Pet Husbandry Pack
    -Empire Linguist Pack


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    Languages

    Common (Free)

    Faraddi (Parental, adopted by Qadir)

    Empire Linguistic Pack


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    Born to an Altalar and a Nefer Asha, then dumped in front of Greygate.

    She worked in crookback to learn how to use her fists to defend herself alongside learning to sew.

    Eventually she found her way into the Sewers where she was taken in by Rhys and Sivo Sagh. Here she also met her first husband, Lock Render, and had her first son Raymond Render.

    She, having been consumed by grief when Lock died, ran to old friends in search for assistance where she became a shut-in. Her son massively suffered from this, causing a rift in their relationship.

    After years of trying to get herself together, she's finally begun to step outside. She had recovered in her own way with a cheery demeanor and much like her old self, ready to face the world again.

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    Rhys Sagh ( @RainAxe )- Alexandria came to hate her family, father included, despite how much she looked up to him. She will no longer deny the crimes of her father.
    Sivo Sagh ( @DogVibes )- She will no longer make excuses for the woman she once called her mother.

    Lock Render ( @DuchBargollo )- Alexandria's late husband. She misses him with every bit of her body, and even struggles to look at her son without tears falling from her face. She regrets being unable to see him in his final moments, and continues to blame herself for not being around enough for him to still be here.
    Esfir Afsoun ( @Karthadon )- One of Alexandria's best friends. She would go to bat for her no matter what. Alexandria values their friendship highly, even if it feels like babysitting sometimes.
    Zara ( @bwmwags3 )- Another close friend of Alexandria's. She is more than willing to be emotional support to Zara and loves talking to her, but sometimes it's hard to keep track of all the trouble Zara gets into.
    Dion Mallory (@illusi0nVA )- One of the closest friends she's got, she spends a lot of time bugging him since she doesn't seem to know where else really to go.

    Fahim Hajaar ( @Regular_Spud )- Alexandria views him as an Uncle of sorts. Although she doesn't quite know what he says sometimes, she still does her best to keep up and make sure he feels welcome with her. She thinks of him as another family member.
    Aldair T. Delmotte ( @AshenRoman )- She does not care at all about this man anymore.
    Azrael Tempetyr (@RainAxe ) Post separation, she did all she could to remove herself from Azrael. Though, couldn't help but love his son as her own.

    Arntyr T. Delmotte ( @TheRook1 ) The child of Azrael T. Delmotte, and one she considers her own child as well. She'd do anything for him, whether it's ask her connections for help or just consoling him after a hard day.
    Tim Borros/Tempetyr ( @Dodink )- She doesn’t know him well, but trusts him enough to ask for his advice. She’d love to talk to him more.
    Cale Al-Khalid ( @RainAxe )- A good friend, despite being kind of stupid. She tends to make fun of him a little, though all in good fun. She can see his potential and hopes to see him be amazing, if not a little worried about his life choices.
    Azib 'Lance' Nerirona( @ColinRedstone )- Alexandria's biological father. She respects him, and has a care for him, but she does not view him as her father due to the abandonment. She views him as a mentor of her abilities, and a close friend/ally.

    Ania ( @MidnightRey )- With her fathers disownment of Ania, she too disowns her sister.
    Rizu Sagh ( @DogVibes )- Her brother! Her favorite sibling in all honesty. She loves the few times she gets to see him, and generally doesn't understand her mothers distaste of him.
     
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  2. Antimreoir

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    Hello! I'll be taking this application for review, expect a response shortly.
     
  3. NetXeroVT

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    Thank you!!! I appreciate that!
     
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    Here's my review!

    Basic Information

    Everything looks good here.
    Skill Information
    You have 1 additional point to spend wherever, feel free to mark it as unused if you wish to use it for IC developments too.
    Special Traits
    Everything looks good here.
    Visual Information
    Everything looks good here.
    Personality
    Everything looks good here.
    Life Story
    I would ask that Alexandria be a touch older than 4 when she turned to crime in desperation, or was perhaps taken in by some criminal faction, as I find it incredibly unlikely that a child as young as she would have survived at all in Regalia.
    Besides that note, everything looks just fine here.

    Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved! @ghosta_babes
     
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    Changes have been made! All in which has been marked in Purple @Antimreoir
     
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    Still a bit young, but it's all good. Approved! @ghosta_babes. Welcome to the server!
     
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    @Antimreoir Updated her sheet to follow the new Point-Buy System, and updated her status now through Roleplay!
     
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    From what I see you have 6 points left over, please note these as unused and you'll be good to go. @ghosta_babes
     
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    @Antimreoir Updated to be up-to-date with roleplay
     
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    This looks fine, reapproved.
     
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    Hey, so Antimreoir is kinda- gone now, so I need a new staff member thank you <3
     
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    Claimed for review.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Volaie I changed some of Alexandria’s proficiencies around to match rp. Should be marked in cyan.
     
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    @Volaie Updated again to match rp! :)
     
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    @Volaie took away alex's medical training to keep points aside for a planned development.
     
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    @Volaie So the planned development is happening, I went ahead and put the points down for it and edited some of her life story. All changes are in Blue.
     
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    Approved, but as a note, you can no longer use any Living Metal abilities since they are clicked off once Sorcery is learned.
     
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    @Volaie I'M SO SORRY BUT I COMPLETELY OVERHAULED ALEX'S SHEET!

    Everything is new, everything besides a few points here and there are different.
    Thnkyou
     
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    @Volaie Updated Alex for the new proficiency system! All edits should be in Purple!
     
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    Approved! Also, one of your images is bugging.
     
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    SOB, thank you, I’ll fix it in a bit.
     
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    For some reason me editing it absolutely bonked the "approved" title ;-;
     
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    No problem. I would've guessed so. Tag is back on there!
     
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    Last reviewer is no longer staff! All edits in this weird purple :D

    Edit: I can't spell <3
     
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    Hey @ghosta_babes two things and you'll be good to go. Asha do not get bonus points as a racial, so you'll need to remove two investment from your STR and you'll be set. Other one was just specify which Artificer Branch they make use of and you'll be set.
     
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    @ChapterDeath Fixed! I hope it’s still ok that even tho she uses teslatech, she has a hallowtech arm and a klokktech fox since they were both gifts-
     
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