Shelved Character Baeldeth Of Drowda

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    SIHN-BAELDETH

    created mar 9, 2021
    last updated apr 4, 2023

    Name:
    Sihn-Baeldeth Regiskean Daevaar
    Race:
    Sihndar
    Age:
    29
    Gender:
    Male
    Sexuality:
    Straight

    Eye Color:
    Brown
    Occult:
    Exist Mageborn

    Core Concept:
    Sihn-Baeldeth is a sihndar monster hunter, dedicating his life to the betterment of others, and the extermination of occult that have passed a certain line. He holds himself true on his version of a path to excellence, and provides for his kin in Drowda. He strives to live up to, or even surpass his father, Veridan's, legacy.

    As for Religion, Sihn-Baeldeth worships Melca.

    Appearance:
    His skin is a dark, low saturation purple. He has brown eyes, and crimson hair. He has a well kempt, yet bushy beard, and keeps his hair relatively long. His shoulders are broad, and he stands at 6'10. His frame is stocky and defined. Typically, he's dressed in high quality, yet simple clothing- with colors such as white, red, gold and blue. When hunting, or in a combat situation, he's typically donning his xavloay, which is red, and blue, with a teal belt. He has no physical abnormalities, other than an assortment of scars across his body.


    Proficiencies:


    Strength: 6
    Technique Parry, Knockback Sweep, Unyielding Strike, Diving Tackle, Battle Flurry, Steady Body.
    Con: 3
    Shield Block, Shield Slam, Rage Counter.
    Arcane: 3
    Radiant Feather, Radiant Shield, Radiant Push.
    Wisdom: 1
    Enchant Oceana.

    Soul Bargained: Melca





    Languages:

    Common (Free) (8/10)
    Sinnayed (Native) (10/10)
    Calem (7/10)

    Altalar (4/10)
    Natl (3/10)


    Plot Hooks / Random Facts

    been in regalia a couple of OOC yrs now, feel free to ask him about older events that occured within that timespan.








     
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    Night Silver can only be crafted through Altalar Forges or through the world progression system. I'll need you to explain how your character procured a night silver sword.

    I'm also going to ask that you go back and spend some time on formatting your app. As of right now the formatting is unpleasant to follow.
     
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    All done. Changed night silver to STEEL. Plan is to gain night silver in the game.
     
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    @Arhbi
    Resubmitting now that ive roleplayed baeldeth a bit.
    Multiple changes, changed out wall climbing 3 cause its useless with dryder form, and baeldeth would have never learned it. Changed winemaking for cooking, as winemaking would not have been present during his childhood.
    He uses a khoptar. i felt it was unrealistic for him to use a greatsword, so yeah.
    changed proficiency to match khoptar. also added mutations and changed hair color and outfit
    let me know if i need to change anything.
    thanks!
     
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    Think I did this right.
    Let me know if anything needs changed, thank you!
     
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    1. Please go back and remove the underline from being on everything. It makes it unpleasant to read.
    2. Please go back and reformat your app so it looks neat.

    After you have done these two things, I'll review your points. @Axronix
     
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    shabam. Let me know if anything else needs changed, I overhauled it. Changed a lot of things.
     
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    This needs a new reviewer! Complete overhaul done after many hours of roleplay with this OC.
     
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    @Axronix Hello I have claimed this app for review, expect a response within 36 hours.
     
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    @Axronix Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    @Follower
    Completely overhauled.

    - New Format
    - New Backstory
    - New Magic/Proficiencies
    - New Linguistics
    - New Lording
    - Made him older as well.
     
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    @Axronix Everything seems to be in order, approved.
     
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    @Follower
    Whats up. Resubmitting.. sihndar update.
    New Name. New Race. New Baeldeth.
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Howdy! App looks great, very clean and easy to skim. There's just one thing that I think could be expanded on, and after that I can approve it:
    • Your core concept is a bit short at the moment. Could you elaborate on why he hunts the arcane, or what his personal philosophy is? It'd help give reason behind why he fights.
    Beyond that everything looks good! Go ahead and tag me once you've made those changes so I can review again :D
     
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    APPROVED
     
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    Yo @Yurs !

    Resubmitting now that ive got the motivation to RP.
     
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    Scooping this one up. Expect a review soon.
     
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    This looks fine. Approved.
     
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    @Scribbe

    Hey there! Submitting for rereview now that I have time to roleplay.
     
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    This looks fine, approved.
     
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    @Scribbe howdy.
    resubmission time, this man was on the old profs with blades and stuff. updated him accordingly.
     
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    Been a couple days.. marking for a new reviewer.
     
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    I am approving this but I need you to do a small edit with your profs. Neaten them up and make them something like:

    Strength: 5

    Pack, Pack, Pack, Pack, Pack
    What you have now is really hard for a quick review of your sheet. Thanks
     
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    @WingedJade Howdy. One last resubmission- I made Sihn-Baeldeth a Daevaar, with permission of Ghirko of course.
     
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    Its honestly just a rename, age up, and backstory change.
     
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    @WingedJade
    Hey. Updated Baeldeth to better fit within the Daevaar family as a whole. Also went all in with his religion. Archon time.
     
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    @WingedJade Not going to mark for re review, but I replaced one of my melee packs for Bruiser Slam.
     

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