Sivo Sagh "the Wandering Guardian"

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    ~ Sivo Sagh ~

    "The Wandering Guardian"
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    Credit: Microwavemmm

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    "Strength is determined by will power. And your will is stronger then diamonds, Mi Amor."
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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Sivo el Gracella Del Mar Maria Sagh
    • Aliases: Techprincess, The Silver Tigress, the Brass Beast, Ojos Rojos
    • Previous Name(s): Sivo Driss
    • Age: 63
    • Age Appearance: About 20
    • Gender: Female
    • Race: Brannon Ailor
    • Culture: Daendroque
    • Sexuality: Heterosexual
    • Status: Married to Rhys Sagh
    • Children: Rizu Casper Sagh (eldest son, 30), Hugo Al-Sian Sagh (twin son, 14), Gracella Del Mar Sagh (twin daughter, 14), Ania Sagh (adopted daughter, 58), Alexandria Render (adopted daughter, 40)
      • Grandchildren: Raymond Render (adopted grandson, 14)
    • Preferred Weapon: Steel Shortsword
    Basic Information Expansion
    • Describe your character’s position in Regalia. Why are they there? How long have they been there? What is their occupation and living situation?
      • Sivo's current position in Regalia is a Tech Princess of the Technocratic Collective. She is there because over a lot of time and work, she has helped her husband raise the Collective from the ashes and become the oldest remaining Coven in the community. She was there in the Collective for years, and only a Desprincess as of recent. However, she played a big part previously as the Wutienda Champion and unofficial second-in-command. Her current occupation is working every once in a while at El Gustazo, and full time Coven leader, although unpaid for obvious reasons. She lives in a big house with her husband, Rhys Sagh, the main provider for the family, with her three children, one of which has moved out.

    • Describe your character’s upbringing. Where were they born, to whom? How many siblings do they have? What about their extended family/noble family?
      • Sivo was born to Maria and Casper Driss, her parents. She had no known siblings until recently when she found out she had a brother while she was away from her parents. His name is Diego. Her father died many, many years ago from an old rivalry in Daenshore, while her mother died to old age years later. Diego is still alive. Her extended family is all either unknown or dead, and she has no noble roots. Adoptive family wise, she has Ania Sagh and Alexandria Render, as well as Alex's child, Raymond Render. Direct family, she has her husband, Rhys Sagh, with her kids: Rizu, Hugo, and Gracella Sagh.

    • Describe any secondary ambitions your character may have. Short term ambitions, or ambitions that may not be related to your character’s main goal in life.
      • Her short term ambitions includes training Raymond to be her new Champion, replacing her old student, his father, Lock Render. She also wishes to overthrow current Court positions, such as the Lich Lord. Sivo also wishes to improve at her poems, however in secrecy. Additionally, the Ailor wants to fix what she has done to Rhys, keeping his unsettling mentality at bay and try to maintain him as uncorruptable, and make sure her children grows up to be valuable successors.
    Inventory Information
    • Steel Shortsword, with a carving in the hilt saying "Nothing is truly real until one is willing to believe in it." It belonged to her father. It was also updated to have engravings of gears by Rhys.
    • Tower Shield made of Laqorian Steel and wood. The shield appears to have been painted and tainted to be gold and crimson red with an engraving of a golden cog on the front.
    • A necklace around her neck that has an emblem of a replica of her shortsword and a red gem the shape of a blood drop on the end of it. It hides under her armor.
    • A ring on her wedding finger. Ring would have a red gem covered by a sword that looks like her father's.
    • Usually carries Regals on her in one pouch on her belt. "Don't put all your eggs in one basket" never occurred to the Brannon Ailor.
    • A few folded up pieces of paper, pertaining random poem tidbits she thought of and wrote down duration of the day, very badly written.
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    "All of us are animals. You'll learn that as time goes on. When put into a bad enough position, most people go to their roots and react like wild animals."
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    Skill Information

    Total Points: 50 Points, 10 Hobby
    • Combat
    • 15 Sword Combat (+15 Proficiency Points)
    • 20 Shielding Combat (+15 Proficiency Points, +5 Brannon Prof Boost)
    • 10 Fist Combat (+10 Proficiency Points)
    • Rogue
    • 3 Burglary Pack (+3 Proficiency Points)
    • 3 Wall Climb 3 (+3 Proficiency Points)
    • Hobbies
    • 10 Dancing Art (+10 Hobby Points)
    • 4 Writing Art (+4 Proficiency Points)
    • Clockwork [INACTIVE]
    • Technik (Free Prof)
    • Clockwork Biotics (Free Prof)
    • Clockwork Control (Free Prof)
    • Clockwork Golem (Free Prof)
    • Clockwork Environment (Free Prof)
    • Technik Abilities [INACTIVE]
    • Element Control 7 (Free Prof)
    • Element Brand 4 (Free Prof)

    Body Shape
    • 35 Physical Stat (Capped at 35, 40 uncapped)
    • Muscular
    • Built Body Fat
    • 6'1
    • Weighs 200 pounds
    Languages
    • Common (Learned from Childhood)
    • Daendroquin (Learned from Mother)
    • Faraddi (Learned from Rhys)

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    "Any problems created by the left hand of man, can also be solved with the right, for he who manifests anything, also has the ability to destroy it."
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    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations

    Von Kërle Bloodline [ACTIVE]

    Brannon Ailor

    Shielding


    Wall Climb 3

    Cratos Bloodline [INACTIVE]

    Technik Abilities [INACTIVE]
    • Element Control 7 - The user is form a clockwork barrier by holding their arm wide. For as wide as their arms go, and as tall as they are, they produce a rectangular see-through soul essence shield. This Shield is maintained for as long as the user maintains their stance. It is wide enough for others to hide behind them, and be covered by the shield also, and should be large enough to cover a single door sized doorway while standing inside of it. This shield blocks all Magical and Mundane projectiles and acts as an Impassable Obstacle for other Abilities that are stopped by obstacles. This Ability has a 10 second cooldown after it is cancelled, either by moving the user or the user dropping their arms. The user can still talk and turn their head, but not do anything else while using this Ability.
    • Element Brand 4 - This Ability allows the user to attach a clockwork device to their melee weapon with a Magma aesthetic that makes the weapon drip with magma. Firstly, while this Clockwork is active, the user is immune to any Ability that would remove their weapon from their hand, or displace it. Additionally, the weapon may be wielded from a distance of 3 blocks to slash and shoot magma pumice at a person, which does a fraction of the damage of an actual hit, but is still painful and causing various cuts to exposed skin like a hail of razor blades would. The Clockwork lasts for 30 minutes and can only be used by the user, if they hand the weapon off or attempt to attach anyone else’s weapon, the Ability simply does not work. This Ability has no Cooldown.


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    "You know... If I die from this, I'm going to die happy."
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    Visual Information
    • Eye Color: Crimson red (originally dark green)
    • Hair Color: Dark brown
    • Hair Style: Short, normally tied back
    • Skin Color: Tan
    • Clothing: Wears a set of half-plate Blacksteel armor painted gold with a crimson cape clipped on her armor with a golden-painted cog. She has a clockwork gauntlet on both hands with two yellow cores.
    • Height: 6'1
    Von Kerle Vampiric Form:
    • Eye Color: Red with black eye whites, slitted like tiger eyes.
    • Skin Color: Paler then usual, almost white with silver 'tattoos' making a tiger-like pattern on the skin.
    • Other features:
      • Tiger-like appendages forming from the head, and a tiger-like tail but white with grey markings.
      • Eyes are slitted like tiger eyes but still red.
      • Patch of white fur resembling her hair but shorter on the top of her head with light grey tiger stripe markings.
      • Large cat-like teeth replacing her own teeth, much like tiger teeth. However they only function like vampire teeth.
      • Light grey claws that are retractable. Not able to be used in combat.
      • When Sivo makes a pained or angry noise, it normally sounds tiger-like, she's capable of roars, chuffs, and other tiger noises.
      • Unless Sivo is seen shifting to this form or is known in this form, she would not appear very recognizable in it.
      • [Picture Reference is used at the very top of the page, Sivo in vampiric form on the left.]
    Visual Information Expansion
    • Describe the Character’s facial features, like the shapes of their eyes, mouth, ears, the size of their forehead, what kind of expression they usually carry, any freckles, scars etc, hair color, hair style and more. This description is purely for the head (and by extension neck) alone.
      • Her eyes are slightly squinted at all times. Sivo's mouth is thin and usually curled up in a resting overconfident look. Her ears look pretty normal, although slightly pointed, not nearly enough to be counted as an Altalar. Her forehead is about average, and she normally looks highly overconfident, as if she had just won the award for Champion of the World. She has no freckles, however she does have a scar: a thin 3 claw mark over her left eye, looking less like an animal claw but more like as if daggers were sliced across her face, it has however faded over the years. Her hair color is dark brown, nearing black, and hair style is normally short and lightly tossed around, usually tied up in a ponytail, making her appear almost like a man normally.
    • Describe the Character’s body. Go into detail about height, body shape, the color of their skin, the size of their bones and muscles, their amount of fat, any physical disabilities they may have, their amount of body hair if applicable and more. This description is purely for the body.
      • Sivo is 6'1 with a very bulky and muscular body figure. Her skin is lightly tanned, appearing Daen in nature, although slightly tinted almost grey-ish as she would originally be pale from her affliction, appearing both pale and tanned at once. Her muscles are well defined, although usually under armor, it's hard to tell besides her bulkiness. She has built body-fat, with barely any fat around her muscular definition. She has no visible body-hair, and despite her age, looks to be in her early 20's.
    • Describe the Character’s fashion appearance and accessories. Talk about what kind of clothes they usually wear, preferred colors, what jewelry they have, weapons they carry on them or any item of note that they may always have on them.
      • Sivo normally wears armor, it's rare to see her without armor. However, if you do catch her on rare occasion, it's usually to dress up nicely or commonly to fit in to Regalia. Her armor is normally painted golden, with crimson red features such as capes and cloaks. At occasion, you'd see black in the mix. She most commonly wears Blacksteel armor if able. Unless you catch her in her ability-created armor, made of crimson. That form of armor is blood red, usually with very sharp features. If she wears a dress, it's commonly black and gold, and Daen-styled with loose bottoms as to promote the dress looking beautiful upon spinning, usually fitting a rose with her outfit. If she wears common-wear, it's usually Qadir styled, but this isn't due to her style, it's due to the fact that she sometimes wears Rhys' clothing, as she's too stubborn to shop for herself. However, if she found herself shopping for herself, it would more then likely be Daen-inspired clothing utilizing black, gold, and red often. Sivo consistently carries around her necklace Rhys gave her, the design explained in Inventory Information. She also carries her wedding ring, also explained in Inventory Information. Sivo usually always carries her shield on her back and her father's shortsword sheathed on her side in a hilt, attached to a belt normally attached to her armor or worn over it. All explained in Inventory Information.
    • Describe the character’s voice. How do they speak? What is their typical tone and speed? Do they have an accent or a tendency to stutter? Any quirks about their voice listed here. Maybe also add a list of the languages they can speak.
      • Her way of speaking depends on two factors: her mood and the language she's speaking. While speaking Common, her accent can vary from the common Regalian accent to a Daen accent. The more emotional she becomes, the more Daen her accent sounds. She speaks usually pretty averagely slow and with a tint of mockery in her voice by default. When she's happy, the mockery in her tone becomes more soft. When she's sad, the mockery shifts completely to almost a defeated tone. The angrier she becomes, the more mocking her voice becomes, but also quick-spoken and loud. While speaking Daendroquin, her accent is very fine with a Daen tone to it, almost mocking like her normal tone, but not shifting much off of the tone despite her mood. When speaking Faraddi, the accent sounds unrefined and broken, a mixture between Common and Daen, but also a little bit of a Farah'deen accent, almost appearing copied by nature of Rhys' accent. She doesn't have a tendency to stutter unless she's crying or very upset.

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    "We will do what we always have done. Endure and overcome."
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    Personality and Abilities

    The Core List

    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Chaotic Neutral "Although chaotic neutral characters promote the ideals of freedom, it is their own freedom that comes first; good and evil come second to their need to be free."
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • The Entrepreneur "Tend to be energetic and action-oriented, deftly navigating whatever is in front of them. They love uncovering life’s opportunities, whether socializing with others or in more personal pursuits. Risk-Takers, they tend to leap before they look."
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Unsure / Conflicted currently
    Personality Expansion
    • How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness?
      • Sivo would express happiness and contentedness with a grin, and an appreciative tone. If it was someone she trusted deeply, it would be responded to with a hug and genuine happiness.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Fear?
      • In the highest amount of fear, Sivo would be panic stricken and would react irrationally, by fight- rather then flight. She would either injure or restrain those causing her the distress. In a moderate amount of fear, Sivo would appear calm but she would normally clench her fists, just as if she was angry, as if to almost 'recreate' a channel of anger to assist her by providing adrenaline if needed. In a very minor amount of fear, she would be uncomfortable, yet wouldn't act irrationally. Her responses would start out long and descriptive but as she got more anxious, they should shorten.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Stress?
      • When stressed deeply, her responses would start out long and become shorter the more stressed she became, and her voice would raise. She may get to a point where she'd fall into silence, and simply ignore the person and get out the stress in a more healthy manner, taking a walk or otherwise. She would likely have her fists balled up and seem distressed physically.
    • How does your character view Law and Authorities?
      • Law and authority mean almost nothing to Sivo. She believes respect is earned and not given due to their position. If the figure was respected by her- however- she would feel a drive to defend them against anything bad that may happen. However, Sivo is still stubborn to follow her own mindset and values over the authority figure. The only one able to properly manipulate her would be Rhys- or someone using Rhys as a tool to control her.
    • How does your character feel about Races other than their own?
      • She doesn't care about other /races/ persay, from Ailor to Qadir, to any other race. She is, however 'racist' towards humans, often speaking down to them like they mean no more to her then cattle. Recently, however, she gained a hatred towards Songaskians for what they did to Rhys' race, and Kathar for her poor history with them. She favors Qadir and Ailor.
    • How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths?
      • Religion also means nothing to her. She knows there are greater powers but refuses to bow to them or praise them. She doesn't believe in luck or a 'path' in life. She believes life is chosen by the individual, not anything or anyone else.
    • How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world?
      • She isn't bothered by it, nor is she really that infatuated with it. She believes it is part of the natural world and doesn't really need to be addressed.
    • How does your character feel towards their family?
      • She was raised a long child, and she loved her parents more then anything. They raised her well and she respected them and cared for them. When she was 16 and older, she believed they deserved protection from her, as they were getting older and weaker. She still blames herself for what happened to them.
    • What is your character the most proud of about themselves?
      • Sivo is most proud of her strength and ability in combat. She will always be proud of it, although she knows she can always improve: and she is doing so. She trains daily and makes sure she stays ready for anything. She can be a bit of a perfectionist, however.
    • What motivates your character to move forward and better their life?
      • What motivates Sivo is the fact that she wishes to be the best at combat she possibly can be. She trains and trains and works to better herself and her gear to her greatest ability. Now, her motivation is also driven by Rhys, who she works to better herself for him and herself, whatever it takes.
    • What is your character's biggest insecurity?
      • However, her biggest pride is also her biggest insecurity. She believes she is weak and needs to improve- constantly. If she loses a fight, she takes it to heart and works twice as hard. If she appears weak in another's eyes, she will work to fix that, no matter the cost at times.
    • What is your character's biggest fear?
      • Sivo's biggest fear used to be Rhys and his Clockwork, blaming it for what he had become. Now... her fear is herself. She fears her mentality breaking once more and becoming the monster she once was. She blames herself for what happened to Rhys and now betters herself and controls herself in fear that the beast inside her may return.
    Best Reference for Sivo's personality (and build)
    Cara Dune from the Mandalorian

    Likes
    • She also likes to hunt and fight. She's a bit of an adrenaline junkie and fulfills those needs with combat.
    • Sivo is interested in finding peace within her poems. Although she is very bad at writing them, she finds peace within them.
    • Finally, Sivo also likes reading about military tactics, strategies, commands, and formations. She enjoys war and combat.
    Dislikes
    • Sivo hates slavers and slavery in general. Everyone deserves freedom in her eyes.
    • The Brannon Ailor also dislikes herself and what she used to be. She is currently in a complex of disliking herself and wanting to better herself, blaming her 'beast' inside for what has happened to those she loves around her.
    • Finally, like any other vampire, she hates werebeasts. She finds them to be smelly, animalistic, clumsy, and generally annoying. She hates them even more now that she was captured and tortured by them for weeks.

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    "If it wasn't for them, I would be allowed freedom to walk the surface and protect those who need it. But I can't. So I protect those I love the most instead."
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    Life Story

    Backstory In-Game Development

    Age 0 - 20
    It started with a love story. Her father came from an Anglian culture, and while her father was overseas, he fell in love with a Daendroque. He stayed in Daendroque, and shortly after, Sivo was born. She was born in a small village, on farmland in Daendroque. She helped on the farm, taking care of the animals they raised and sometimes tending to crops. Her mother, María Cruz, taught her acceptance and kindness, teaching her morals and made her take dancing lessons for grace,
    as well as her Native Language, Daendroque. Her father, Casper Driss, taught her how to defend herself and their farm, teaching her how to use a sword and a shield.

    Age 20
    She came home from an exploration trip with her horse on a relaxing Sunday and found the farmhouse and the barn was in ash, loose fires scattered around the farmland. She hopped off her horse and fell to her knees. Everything she knew is gone. What happened? She thought. She believed it was her fault for leaving the farm to explore, as she could have been there to protect her family... Who she believed to be dead. Sivo hopped back on her horse and they ran. They ran as far as she could, with only her father's sword in its holster. Upon crying on horseback for hours, she eventually fell asleep. She woke up on her horse's back, Midnight, whom was feasting on some grass. She found she was surrounded by trees, no clue in the world where she was.


    Sivo continued exploring until she heard the clacking of horseshoes around her. Surrounded by people with cloaks and swords surrounded her. They charged at her, swiping their swords. She parried the first blow, but then the second blow from another sword knocked her off her horse. Bandits! Midnight, spooked, fled into the woods, leaving her master helpless on the ground. Sivo sheathed her sword, standing her ground. "Come on!" She screamed out, giving in to her rage and the cruel world around her.

    One of the men hopped off his horse, the others standing their ground around her. The midnight moon reflected off his iron armor. Sivo observed her surroundings, strategizing an escape as the man approached her. His armor clanked and creaked as he walked forth, his sword shining with ill intents. She stood her ground, her green eyes glowing in the night, holding her sword out defensively when - as if a sign from the gods, the sound of clanking echoed through the woods as another group cut through the bandits. They moved with great speed, ripping through the band of humans, blood stinking the area... What were these things? She was jumped by one of the humanoid creatures, feeling sharp teeth breaking through her skin. Sivo decided to fight off the attacker, but she couldn't, paralyzed in her place. Another approached her and clonked her on the head with the hilt of their sword and she fell unconscious.

    She found herself in a dark building on a soft bed, her head was pounding and she felt like she hasn't eaten or drank for months. She forced herself up and noticed her weapons still on the table beside her. She grabbed her sword, and opened the door to find a large open area, in almost a castle-like setting, surrounded in darkness. She decided to wandered around, to maybe find her captors.

    Age 20 - 23
    She met a few of the people who took her in, and found out she was cursed to live as a vampire, however she felt comfortable with the idea. With no where else to go she trained to defend her home... until yet again, it was taken from her. Hunters attacked the coven of Vampires and the home they lived in, and she fought fiercely against the group, but the overwhelming numbers forced her to flee. She watched many of the people she got to know- her friends- get slaughtered by the dozen. The screams still haunt her... The screams of the doomed. As she fled on foot into the woods, she took a cloak along with her, as well as a mask to hide her face - as she decided it was best to stay hidden from the eyes of hunters.


    Age 23 - 25
    Sivo, upon traveling, finally made it to Crookback. She liked the place and started observing the area for anyone she could feed on, as she was starving from traveling. She settled her sights on a young girl. She approached the girl and found the girl was named Illia and was looking for an Alchemy building. She was a healer. She pretended to know to get her alone and they ran into a person who was obviously a vampire. She decided to work with the man, whom she found was named Sylph. They worked all day to get the girl alone, and finally they succeeded. They knocked her out, took her somewhere private, and fed. Illia was aware of the experience.

    And as luck would have it, Sylph led a Coven and Sivo was invited as their warrior. Sivo proved her worth later down the line as she tried her hardest to defend Sylph against the guards as he got caught, eventually they got overwhelmed, resulting in Sivo's 2 broken arms and both of them getting cured. They eventually healed and got reinfected, and Sivo now spends her days defending the Coven and training to better herself day by day, in order to achieve being completely undefeatable.

    Upon even more recent events, Sivo met a man who wasn't infected who joined the Coven. His name was Rhys, and Sivo didn't care for him. He was all about his Clockwork and seemed weak physically, much like a scholar who keeps their noses in their books rather then breathing in the fresh air of life. However, as time went on, he was infected with vampirism. She heard it was the Cratos bloodline, and she didn't expect much from him, however hearing otherwise, she decided to spar Rhys.

    Rhys fought bravely and strong, she was highly impressed, and this was also the one time in her life as of now that she was lovestruck by any man. They shared combat skills, unable to best one another, and it excited her. As they spent more time together, she fell more and more for him until eventually, they decided to start being 'official'. They were the power couple, able to defend themselves against others in tough situations- and Sivo loved it. She found a purpose besides becoming the best at combat in life, and that purpose was Rhys... She would defend her purpose at all costs.

    Recently, Sivo has been investing a lot of her time with Rhys and further improving her combat. Rhys is teaching her his Native language, Faraddi, since the only language she knew was common. She is learning willfully, as the language interests her and she wishes to invest her time in learning a second language. Unfortunately, however Rhys and Sivo had broken up due to Sivo believing she was simply dragging him into her messes and she was tired of it. Sivo continued learning the language herself with books and a hired tutor. Sivo is currently focusing on her combat arts, putting herself out to Covens as a 'Von Kerle for hire' and also focusing on her practice in Faraddi. She is aligned to Scion currently, but an ally to most others.

    A couple months had past and Sivo decided Rhys wasn't getting any better- in fact he seemed to be getting worse. So they made up once more- under one condition, the relationship be kept a secret to the public view. That way, Rhys couldn't be pinned to her mistakes when she makes them. However, things got complicated as Sivo became pregnant with her new son, Rizu. They decided to 'officially' marry with the paperwork, but not hold a proper marriage to keep it hidden to the public eye, but not allow Rizu to be a 'bastard' by technical terms
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    Age 25 - 35
    Sivo had spent the last 14 years of her life raising Rizu to the boy he is now, as well as maintaining her relationship with her husband. She also spent time with her own combat, focusing her talents on her swordsmanship instead of her archery. The Von Kërle also took up learning how to properly use a shield, which to her surprise, she caught onto the skill fast. She had trained and trained, perfecting her skills to the best of her ability. She had also worked on her mentality, striving to rid of the blind anger that had engulfed her life... By giving in more and more to her bloodline, resulting in further loss of her humanity. She is on a downward spiral mentally... Feeling incapable of controlling her feelings anymore.

    Her husband, Rhys, snapped her out of her downward spiral and she learned to control her anger and emotions to some extent. She then focused on mastering combat once more, by fighting for her coven and defending her title as Sivo Sagh, proud Von Kërle and Warrior of the Scion!

    Age 35 - 50
    Sivo worked with the Scion for a few years. Within this time, her husband ended up departing from her coven to create his own. After Mirabella was captured and proved to be weak as an exchange was made for her safety with one of their coven members, Sivo decided to move on. She joined Rhys in her new coven, the Technocratic Collective. Sivo fit in well, as she automatically gained a pretty powerful position as she was married to the Desprince. She became the coven's new Combat Champion.

    As she spent time in the new coven, she decided to practice using unarmed combat to better protect herself in case things go awry. She trained and dueled as the Von Kërle learned to always do, and eventually became decently talented with her unarmed skill. After finally mastering, or at least close to mastering three different combative abilities, she finally feels confident in herself. However, the Von Kërle can never rest as she continues to better herself in her new coven, by her husband's side as the Champion she always hoped to be.

    Sivo visited her homeland, Daen, a few times, discovering her mother was alive, her father was dead, and she had a brother she never met. Her brother despised her for her vampiric tendencies. They got into a fight and she took his hand, and he destroyed Barik, Rhys' first sentient golem creation. She eventually returned as her mother passed away, and her brother forcibly got her cured. Sivo was locked up for a few days as the curing wore off.

    As she finally was allowed back home, as a mundane, she realized all she has done that was awful. Sivo found herself in yet another downward spiral mentally, and decided to right all her wrongs. But... she eventually had to go back to vampirism in fear of aging. She got infected by Rhys, as to retain her Von Kerle bloodline, but it went wrong... The prior Von Kerle became a Cratos!

    The Brannon Ailor picked up some talents and curiosities as a Cratos, learning about less combat orientated things and more about the peace of the world around her. She caught onto Clockwork a little bit, and reading poems. She was so inspired, she decided to write her own poems... which were all awful. She never shared this with Rhys in fear of him being disappointed in her.

    Eventually, Sivo wanted to go back to original bloodline. She became a Von Kerle once more, and the skills and talents she picked up with Clockwork absolutely faded... she now knows very little about it once more besides the basics of how it works. Not enough to use or create it. However, a talent caught on... her awful talent of her poetic adventures. She kept up poems as to keep peace as a Von Kerle, not allowing herself to become the beast she once was.

    Age 50 - CURRENT
    As the Von Kerle got older, she had many trivial updates in her life. She dropped religion altogether once more, realizing again why she never bowed to any higher power. Sivo became more inquisitive, learning more about the world then she did before. She dropped silly Coven politics and conflicts, dropped the motive to need to impress others besides herself and Rhys, and sparring became unnecessary and silly. Sivo realized that the importance lies in protecting herself and her loved ones, not proving herself as an unbeated champion.

    Now, the Brannon Ailor rests at home, keeping herself fit with combat, but also learning more about everything in her retirement. She keeps her husband, Rhys, happy, but tries to avoid Coven conflicts and politics. They don't interest her anymore, she grew out of it. With her old age, she became wiser and more patient with others, only getting involved when absolutely necessary or if her husband falls into his hole of corruption every once in a while. Sivo still betters herself, but moreso by her lonesome, trapped with only her memories and regrets, in fear of falling into her state of corruption once more. During her time at home, she got pregnant and gave birth to two twins, which of whom she raised at home until they were 14.

    She fell from retirement due to boredom, seeking out new thrills in the place she called her home. Although still uninterested in politics and conflict, she found her new motive to try to learn all she could, as well as be a guardian to those who she deems worthy enough of her protection. Sivo finds herself to be powerful and combat driven, but she channels it into her defense... keeping herself contained in peace with her awful poems.

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    “Do not judge me by my success, judge me by how many times I fell down and got back up again.”
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    Relationships
    Loathed Hated Disliked Neutral Liked Trusted Loved
    Name - Nickname : "Thoughts"

    Respected: ★
    Strike Through: Dead


    Rhys ★ - Mi Amor , Tin-Head : "We met when I was flawed. We met when I was young, stupid, reckless, corrupted. He fell in love with me anyways. He looked past my weaknesses and saw strength, power. And so how do I repay him? I corrupt him, he became a monster and it's at my fault. And yet, I cannot let him go. Is it selfish? Maybe. But I cannot live without him, I love him more then life itself."

    Raymond - Ray , Dear : "Young swordsman in training. I'd protect you with my life if needbe, my Grandson. You've proven to be a valuable asset, and you're a very excitable and sweet boy. You remind me of Lock before he left us... Please don't do the same."
    Alexandra - Shoelaces : "She has proven to gain my trust and love as my adoptive child. I will protect her with my life, she is very sweet and kind. She's my sweet child and there is nothing I wouldn't do for her."
    Alexa - Kiddo , Child : "She is my adopted child, and has proved to be much more valuable then my own blood child. Alexa is my girl and I will never let anything happen to her. She deserves the best."
    Lock ★ - Shrimphair , Stubby : "Lock... Lock was a White Knight in the world that got killed so often, that it corrupted his very soul. I have failed him, and I will never forget him. I'm so sorry... I'm so sorry I let you fall as you did, I should have been there for you."

    Hugo : [To be Added]
    Gracella : [To be Added]
    Rizu : "I have done so much wrong with him that I can never forgive myself. He's my child and I only wanted him to be greater then I have ever been, so I pushed him too hard. To the point that he hated me. I regret it all, but I am so proud to call him my son."
    Firn : "An amusing ally and person, he is decent with combat from what I've seen and seems like an interesting character overall. He's a good comforter as well, if I'm feeling down, I seek him out. He is my guardian angel."
    Adelias - Bloodkin : "I hope he doesn't follow the same path I did. He's young, brave, and has the will of an Arken. He's proven himself to me countless times as a fearless defender.

    Arilzusk ★ - Scaled Friend : "A viable ally and sparring partner. I see a powerful friendship rising between us. With our abilities and combat prowess together, we could move mountains."
    Fahim Hajjar - Watcher : "Perhaps the most mysterious man and Qadir I've met. Rhys seems to trust him greatly, therefore I have no problem with him. But for the life of me, I cannot figure him out. He's a watcher. And he makes good tea."
    Anya - Ice Queen : "Mysterious to say the least, and seems to be pretty powerful. Rhys loves her as his mother, and I have accepted her as a trusted ally. She has always been there for the Collective, and I will always pay forward the deed."

    Gerreth - Crimson Mask , Mask : "You have some secrets I would have preferred not to know, however you dance very well, you brought the best in the Voidal community, and gained my respect. I'll be keeping an eye on your progress."
    Lewixia - Lew, Lewi : "I understand her pain but she also simply doesn't understand me and my ways. She has proven herself to me and she now falls under a friendship status."
    Clairess ★ : "She's a flirt. She's a little strange. But she helped me countless times and she's not a bad combatant despite her inferior bloodline... I miss her."
    Leena : "She's a sweet girl, also a Daen. She's additionally with Adelias, so I have high hopes for her as a friend of mine. Maybe we can go out for Kaffee sometime!"

    Clocktower - Barricade - "I have only seen his Golem, which is... quite literally a clock. He's proven himself to me, however, when the Sihndar attacked. He was fearless and helpful, proving himself as a living shield."
    Razor - "Razor stepped up to assist Ray in need, and treated me with dignity and respect, treated me like a hero. He also helped me calm down when I needed it. He has gained my respect. I'll keep an eye on him for any future positives."

    Eloi Playero - "A fine man, a well representative of the Playero family. He visits me from time to time, usually to ask for things. Us Daen usually stick up for each other. I suppose I've worked with him at some point."
    Anarchy - Four-Arms - "They showed up the same day I did. They seemed to show promise and Rhys seems to really like them. They can also split their arms into four, which is pretty fascinating."
    Aridai -
    Tyrian , Archblood - "Rhys trusts and loves him... Therefore I do not dislike him. Nor do I actually like him. He's a coward, he is an Archblood, and a traitor. I wouldn't trust him as far as I could throw him."
    Amber : "She had betrayed Sanguine but she returned. I will keep a close eye on her. She already screwed up, she challenged me and Rhys both. She's not welcome in my eyes anymore. Archbloods can be cured, but their mentality cannot."
    Mirabella - Mira : "Combat-wise, she has yet to prove herself to me. As a leader, she is decent besides the fact that she needs to grow a backbone. Too peaceful in my eyes. She recently lost my respect as a coven leader as she proved to be far too weak as I suspected. Manipulative and a waste of space."
    Travai : "I met this guy at the Wraith, he didn't speak good common but I connected with him. He had a fighting spirit. I used to protect him, risking my own skin, but he insulted me and refused my protection. I understand now why he did... I was a fool. He's better off without me."
    Sylph : "He is full of himself and only cares for himself and Lew. He used Rhys and admitted to doing so. He is a fool, but a lucky fool. I care enough to not allow him to fall to the sword of justice that he likely deserves."

    Oldrich / Devourer of Dreams ★ : "So... This is an interesting relationship. I have fought Oldrich, and he has fought me. I have protected Oldrich, and he has protected me. Highly a love hate relationship, but I do respect him as much as you could respect a shape shifting void creature that eats people. May he rest in peace."
    Zeriel : "Zeriel has shattered my trust for the last time. I'm done."
    Alenia: "You and Briar both betrayed me. I never should have trusted you with the gift. It has only blinded you."
    Meridian - Worm , Coward : "A coward. A weakling. A slizzar. He is worthless in every way and has injured Tyrian and distressed Rhys. I will bully him any chance I get. He is not worth the ground he slithers on. Merely a worm."
    Xilthruum - Lich Bitch , Xilth - "Weak, ignorant, and a disgrace to Sanguine kind. You talk the talk, but you threatened my grandson for your own pride. You will never be allowed to command me anymore. I would rather rip my own tongue out."
    Taeron - Horned Raider : "You stole my child, you insulted and hurt my husband, and yet you still stand living to this day. What a shame."
    Nathaniel - Reaper , Murderer , Snake : "He killed my apprentice. One of the only men I loved as my own kin, my own child. My apprentice. I failed him, and it's because of this snake of a man. I wouldn't even call him a man, only a snake. I would rip him limb from limb if given the chance."
    Briareth - Briar : "So not only have you been disliked before, by stabbing me in the back, getting me demoted after doing something stupid, and then had the audacity to ask ME for help... but I forgave you for some time, left you alone. And then your treacherous ass came around with your MUTT friend to jump me. Better luck next time, dumbass."


    Everyone Else

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    Sivo Silhouette with the Arken of Fury overlooking her. As depicted by RainAxe! <3

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    Sivo - Reroll

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    Sivo's Main Skin

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    Sivo's Karmark Form Skin

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    Vampiric Form of Sivo (right) and Rhys, her husband (outdated) (left) - Microwavemmm

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    Sivo in her usual gear, with Rhys, her husband. - Helen/HelsFantasyArt

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    Sivo and Rhys likely doing a classic Daendroque dance. - Moth_Heart

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    Sivo in her new, fancy painted blacksteel armor. Confidence and strength is key. As depicted by Marshim.

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    Sivo Sagh in Bloodborne. As depicted by alianon.

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    Cute little meme image of Sivo, Lock, and a few others created by hongkong.

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    Depiction of Sivo made on Picrew.

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    Sivo as depicted on Hero Forge

    (Best reference of armor, body shape, and weaponry)​

    EDIT CHANGE NOTES:
    Important Notes in italics
    -Removed poisonous berries.
    -Changed 60 Points to 28.
    -Fixed stats to add up to 28.
    -Changed physical stats from 55 to 28.
    -Removed a language.
    -Removed sunlight sensitivity from lifestory.
    -Reworded the story to better highlight vampires.
    -Updated the Proficiencies and Race to the new system.
    -Updated the life story to catch up to current events.
    -Updated Proficiencies once more due to training IRP, (OOC I didn't know we could have 10 free Talent points rather then 5, so I readjusted. I also didn't notice that Woaden have a +5 boost to light bow combat.)
    -Updated Phys Stat to reflect proficiency update.
    -Updated Life Story to reflect current events again.
    -Updated Inventory Info to reflect current events.
    -Added Age Appearance and specified a bloodline ability better.
    -Updated Appearance.
    -Updated Likes/Dislikes
    -Switched Karmark Step with Karmark Shred due to Karmark Step never being used.
    -Added Relationship Status and linked Rhys' profile.
    -Updated unused proficiencies from husbandry to dancing arts and changed the backstory very slightly to reflect it 'her mother made her take dancing lessons'.
    -Added Relationships and put Change Notes in their own section.
    -Updated Lifestory to be more realistic since it was rushed, also added last 2 paragraphs as the current events.
    -Updated Relationships.
    -Added Picture Drop for art + other media
    -Added Personality Expansion to get all my thoughts together in order, expanding her personality based on roleplay experience and drives.
    -Updated Relationships again.
    -Updated Life Story and Languages, Update in RED
    -Fixed Lifestory to include the culture Sivo derives from. This will make backstory questions a little easier to answer.
    -Updated Relationships again
    -Added some yummy new art
    -Age up! Fixed Proficiencies, updated relationship status, updated relationships, and current events.
    -Second Age up! Rhys aged up, so I balanced it by aging up both Rizu (her baby) and Sivo by 10 years. Fixed Proficiencies and age.
    -Updated Relationships and Life Story. Dropped some more pics.
    -Swapped out 5 Rapier combat with 5 Frontline Command due to recent IC studies and events
    -Woaden Ailor/Bow Update! No more prof boost. Removed Light Bow Proficiency. Added +5 Prof Points into Shielding Combat.
    -Changed Ailor type from Woaden to Brannon due to the update screwing up her stats. Fits her better anyways.
    -Swapped out Karmark Raven for Song due to the update kind of screwing it over.
    -Aged up 1 year to balance her 18 year old son's age with her own. Put 1 point in frontline.
    -Added Alias for her surface name.
    -Updated Languages to reflect mother's culture.
    -AGE UP (part 2)! (Rhys aged up so I aged up Sivo too.) +10 Unarmed , all else remains as is.
    -Updated Relationships... Still not even half way done. Good Lord.
    -Added +5 Burling Rogue for IC reasons.
    -Updated aesthetics and relationships.
    -Updated appearances based on her current events.
    -Made vampiric form sound better/just added more clarity to it.
    -Added more Aliases, Sivo's official Knight Title in the Solifuge and her Vampiric Form 'name'.
    -Bloodline update for the Von Kërle, changed as such! No more phys cap, updated to 35. Changed vampiric form to the new system. Fixed abilities.
    -Added more art. :)
    -Updated relationships AGAIN! Non-stop cycle!
    -Brannon Ailor revamp! Added abilities list.
    -Added a religion. Arken worship.
    -Updated relationships again. Woo.
    -Updated lifestory, age up!
    -Updated relationships AGAIN. AA.
    -Let's just say... if there's an edit, 90% of the time, I updated relationships.
    -Updated her full name, more Daendroquin.
    -Removed Arken knowledge, removing 1 point in fist combat
    -Added 4 writing Art for her recent IC development
    -Removed unneeded abilities named off on her abilities, to compress it a little for the sanity of staff.
    -Updated relationships again, making lots of friends and enemies.
    -Added Basic Information and Visual Information Expansion. About time, you lazy bum.
    -Added children.

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    "Think of this as the time you almost caught Sivo el Gracella Del Mar Maria Sagh!"
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    Howdy there @DogVibes I'm going to be reviewing your character.
     
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    Alright @DogVibes this is what I have for you.
    • For your inventory information, typically we don't review them, but you cannot have poisoned berries or poison arrows for that matter.
    • As a twenty-three year old character you only have access to twenty-five proficiency points, so you'll have to cut back on what you have right now. You also have ten free points to use in the Arts Proficiency Category.
    • Ailor is not a language, the Szabadok do speak a language called Réginyelv if you would like to include that, that would be fine.
    • Life Story
      • I want you to understand that vampires in lore don't have a sensitivity to sunlight, it has no effect on them.
      • Additionally, they would have to feed on blood from actual people, not animals.
      • Vampirism also affects the mind to that they want to be vampires and don't have any issue with that lifestyle.
      • Besides that I don't see much else in terms of issue for the life story, just change those aspects of vampirism and how it affects them at the end.
    I would ask you to review the Proficiency article as well as the Vampirism article when you make these changes to your application. You make some assumptions, which is allowed to a degree, but I want you to make sure you understand the lore in place when you're out playing the character.
    https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency
    https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Vampirism

    I think you have a good start in terms of a character application, you just need to rework things to fit the proficiency system as well as the lore in place. Make the above changes in a color of your choice and tag myself once you're completed.
     
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    @DogVibes
    • Pardon, I mistyped. You have 28 points available. In my head I wrote out you have access to five more.
    • You will also need to adjust your Physical Stat to reflect your new points.
    • For your Life Story, it is impossible for a vampire to fight the mental need to feed. They don't view it as a moral question, they just do it naturally. Any care for life goes away completely. So simply removing that aspect is fine.
    Make the above edits and tag myself and you should be all set.
     
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    @Wumpatron Fixed
    Also I'm keeping the physical stats as is. It's locked to 55 due to Vampire Mutation: Von Kërle Body.
     
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    @DogVibes that would be the physical stat limit, it doesn't auto lock to that level, you still need proficiencies or mutations to get you to reach that limit. As it stands your investments only reach 28, so you will have to change it. Once you do that you'll be all set for approval.
     
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    -- Added Karmark form in appearance, fixed all bloodline traits. Ready for review.
     
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    @HydraLana Updated again, sorry I didn't know I could have 10 free talent and hobby points. I put the changes in the newest 3 change notes in the lifestory. (Last 3 notes), so it should be an easy read.
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    @HydraLana Updated, in update notes... switched out a vampiric ability with another due to it being unused and worthless to me, highlighted it in purple.
     
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    I will allow that this time, but know that we don't really like Vampires or similar characters changing their abilities around. It creates issues with voiding, complicates combat and other issues. I advise you stick with your powers as much as possible going forward.
     
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    Of course. Thank you, I'll leave her vampire abilities alone now, just wanted to fix one that I never personally used ever.
     
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    @HydraLana Hate to bother you again, I promise this is my last change for a while. I put it into the change notes but I swapped proficiencies from an unused one to one that reflects my character a little more. I also updated a small bit into the backstory to reflect the change slightly.
     
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    @HydraLana I wasn't sure if this is allowed but I made a ticket asking if it was and they said it depends on the reviewer. So, since Sivo knows no languages besides Common, I wanted to use a single free language to learn Faraddi, which is being taught to her IC by another character. Would this be allowed?

    If so, I marked all changes in red to make your life easier. Only in Languages and Life Story. Hopefully it's allowed, since Sivo sort of wishes to know a second language, she feels left out.
     
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    @HydraLana
    Hate to bother you again, but I had an idea to age her up on the 10th so here we are. Aged her up 2 years though since I have yet to age her up for 6 OOC months. I highlighted all changes in red to make it easier. I simply changed her age and a few proficiencies.

    Changes are marked in red to make your life easier.
     
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    @Mollymock
    Hello, I hope you're having a wonderful day today! I aged up Sivo again. Reason was Rhys aged up by 10 years so I balanced it by aging up both Sivo and her baby, Rizu. I only changed her Age and Proficiencies.

    Thank you for taking the time to re-review!
     
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    I removed her light bow proficiency because of the update, and added 5 into shielding combat. Since it is only 5 points, I was told I don't need a re-review so I'm just putting this out here.
     
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    @Mollymock
    Hate to have an update this soon after my last, but the bow profs changed as well as my Ailor type. So because of everything kind of screwing up my stats, I have changed from Woaden to Brannon, updating a few of my prof stats and a little bit in my lifestory, but that's minor stuff that won't really need looking over.

    All changes are made in red. Hope this makes things quick and easy for you!
     
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    Approved, but please refrain from large changes for the next wee while.
     
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    @Mollymock Swapped out Karmark Raven with Song if allowed due to the update. Marked in red. If this is not approved, I will swap it back without argument. I just don't care for it anymore from the update.
     
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    Updated languages to reflect her mother's culture. (Daendroque)
    All changes made in red.

    Minor change, just fleshing out the backstory a little more as well as gave her her mother's language, making it more lore compliant.
     
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    @DogVibes Everything checks out homie. Reapproved.
     
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    Age up! All edits marked in blue.
    Rhys aged up so I aged up Sivo to match.
     
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    @Ded Jok Very very minor edits. Removed 5 General Command and added 5 Burling Rogue for IC reasons. (Learned IC)
    Just pinging you to let you know, despite it being a very small edit.
     
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    @Ded Jok Updated Sivo again! Minor edits, just updated the Von Kerle abilities to match the new update, changed the vampiric form to no longer have spikes or include the Karmark Shred appearance, and updated her phys stat to her racial cap of 35!
     
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    @DogVibes Looks aight, remember to change your app to needs rereview whenever you make a change like this though.
     
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    OH. I didn't know I'd have to re-review because the ability change was kind of just a full affliction thing rather then a 'just new chosen abilities'. My bad.
     
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    Hi again! I didn't know if this needed a re-review or not but I marked it to be safe. Added a Brannon Ailor ability section under mutations to keep track of all of it on my app (mainly for my own benefit+others). Brannon Ailor abilities changed so I marked mine as need re-review.

    Additionally, I added a religion for Sivo finally.
     
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    Updated Sivo to her proper proficiencies!
     

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