Played Character Hy'riss

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    THE HAPLESS SMAUG
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    CHARACTER INFORMATION
    • FULL NAME — Hy’riss (Formerly Hessolis)
    • NICKNAMES — Hy | Hy-Hy | Hess
    • RACE — Bene Rexit Isldar (Born Drakon Kathar)
    • AGE — Fifty-Four
    • GENDER — Non-Binary
    • OCCULT — Geist
    CORE CONCEPT
    • THE POWER HUNGRY GHOUL — A once devout worshiper of Ifrit turned Isldar, using Ordial worship to further the freedom of Frisit and gain power.
    APPEARANCE INFORMATION
    • A HEAVILY MUTATED DEATHLING — Hy’riss visually represents a mock dragon, using mutations and armor to have a tail, horns, scales, spikes, and even digitigrade legs. They stand at six feet and two inches with an athletic form. Their skin is pale, and across their face, they have a large burn mark. One eye is green and the other is gray. Their clothing consists mostly of overalls, holsters, and armor.
    CHARACTER INFORMATION EXPANSION
    • CHARACTER LIKES — Olives | Dragons | Vanilla | Red | Smoke
    • CHARACTER DISLIKES Pomegranate | Captivity | Mind-Alteration | Water
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    PROFICIENCY INFORMATION

    TOTAL POINTS — 14 Spent | 1 Free

    • STRENGTH — 7 Points Spent
      • (Melee) Technique Parry Pack
      • (Melee) Unyielding Strike Pack
      • (Athletic) Unarmed Expert Pack
      • (Bruiser) Bruiser Slam Pack
      • (Bruiser) Bruiser Flurry Pack
      • (Bruiser) Bruiser Feint Pack
      • (Bruiser) Bruiser Rampage Pack
    • CONSTITUTION — 3 Points Spent
      • (Training) Rebound Pack
      • (Training) Debuff Endurance Pack
      • (Training) Rage Counter Pack
    • MAGIC — 1 Point Spent
      • (Sinistral) Sinistral Puppet Pack
      • (Sinistral) Sinistral Leap Pack (Free)
    • DEXTERITY — 3 Points Spent
      • (Firearms) Critical Hit Pack
      • (Rougery) Dirty Fighter Pack
      • (Rougery) Soft Landing Pack
    LANGUAGES
    • KATHARIC — Fluent (Native)
    • COMMON — Advanced (Learned)
    • SULVALEY — Intermediate (Learned)
    • GEIST-SPEECH — Intermediate (Geist)
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    LIFE STORY
    • ADOLESCENCE — Hesllris the Drakon Kathar, was born in the Princedoms of Osciird. Given up by their parents to live in future houses. Later “adopted” by pupils to be taken to Rokhavaal they were raised to be a gladiator.
    • ADULTHOOD — After fleeing they learned of their heritage traveling back to the Princedoms of Osciird. They worked on becoming a priest in the Rokhaal Messiac Temple. The Kathar stumbled into Regalia by mere chance, quickly joining a Kaahl within the city.
    • PRESENT — Hessolis ran what was left of the Kaahl, building a charter to Ifrit. Eventually, all of this leads to the death of their close friend Coren, thus destroying their faith. They became an Isldar and a Geist.
    RELATIONSHIPS
    • CLOSEST CONFIDANTS — Naravokh | Rennyn | Aeda’lyn | Saurian | Kelevmor | Leila | Viola
    • COMPANIONS — Tull’ryn | Dathil | Tarlok | Balthazar | Carmine | Reyna
     
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    Hello I will be claiming this for staff review!
     
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    QUOTE CREDITS
    • QUOTE 1 || Friction by Imagine Dragons
    • QUOTE 2 || Created a Monster by Bohnes
    • QUOTE 3 || Ain't No Rest For The Wicked by Caged Elephants
    • QUOTE 4 || Maria by Grandson
     
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    @Caelamus Updated to fit new proficiency update.
     
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    @Caelamus × Overhauled smaller sections pertaining to new Kathar ability rework. ×
    • « Basic Information: » Changed Subrace & age.
    • « Skill Information: » Changed Proficiencies (+2 Sorcery Spells & +1 New Volcurism Pack). Added new Racials. Added new Mutations. Changed languages to reflect new Subrace change.
    • « Visual Information: » Changed to reflect Subrace change.
    • « Life Story: » Changed to reflect Subrace change.
    • « Flavor: » Updated Basic, Visual, Personality, and Relationship Expansions.
     
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    @Caelamus A complete re-review is needed. The main changes are in the Skill Section & Life story, but also some additional touch-ups to all other sections.
     
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    @Caelamus
    Updated to new templet and general rework. Going to hopefully do IC learning into engineering and more spear just as a heads up.
     
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    Approved though on the caveat that those points cannot be taken from sorcery, the sorcery investment should stay permanent. They can come out of and be retconned from your mundane sources.
     
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    100% the plan! The points used are being set aside for IC learning!
     
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    Massive update due to racial change. Everything was updated to fit the new character archetype I'm going for.
     
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    @Caelamus

    I didn't make any crazy changes but I figure it still has to be reviewed. The character was turned into a Cahal.
    (Main areas updated: Abilities, Proficiencies, Basic Information, Appearance)
     
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    UPGRADES PEOPLE UPGRADES
    @Caelamus I added Cahalism in a hurry because I was excited to start RPing that path. I've had a chance to sit down and update beliefs and Cahal form since then. I've also updated life story to match the new Kathar update. Not sure if it needed a complete re-review but the updated sections are listed below!


    BASIC INFORMATION
    Ex-race updated.
    CORE INFORMATION
    Both paragraphs updated to religious change + Kathar update.
    APPEARANCE INFORMATION
    Updated Cahal form.
    LIFE STORY
    Updated to match new Kathar update.

    THANK YOU
     
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    Hello! Complete rewrite due to Proficiency Update + Isldar Update + IC Geist Change + Firearms Training + Actually Reading Kathar Page.

    @Caelamus Thank you, I know it took me forever.
     
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    @Caelamus Just tagging to let you know I swapped out Flexible for Thunderlance. Felt this fit better, hopefully, that's ok. Just wanted you to know.
     
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    @Caelamus Set as review just in case the last message wasn't seen. All I changed however was getting rid of the Geist Weapon Pack since it was removed. Switched out Deathly Vanguard for Phantasmal Stalwart.
     
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    @Caelamus Hello. Again. I apologize. Please don't hate me. I moved my points around. I dropped two points from Wisdom and moved them into combat instead. Felt it made more sense for the character. Thank you.
     
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    @Caelamus Hello! I made some updates in accordance with some abilities changing a bit ago. Nothing major but I figured I'd redo it just in case.

    - I exchanged Blades Pack for Blunt Pack
    - Removed Dimethiest Wisdom
    - Took up Pistol Pack (All Gun :))

    That's really it besides going through and editing/spell checking some sentences and adding some relationships. THANK YOU!
     
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    @Caelamus Updated my proficiency points by just adding the new names of everything and switching out Longneck/Paralyzing Shot because it doesn't exist anymore.

    I will likely overhaul the sheet whenever the Ordial update comes this is just a patch until that update comes out. Thanks!
     
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    @Caelamus I caved and updated my points for now until the Ordial update comes. I'll still overhaul the sheet when it comes out, but this works for now. :)
     
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    @Caelamus I updated completely due to the Geist update. The biggest changes are in the proficiency points. But I did slight touchups to all the sections.
     
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    @Caelamus Just in case tag: I forgot my specials for Curses. I added them. Don't think I need reapproval just didn't want to be sneaky or anything like that. (I lied, I also switched out Reaction Pack from Rougery for Infection Pack in Curses)
     
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    Some oversight on my part. Commutable point buy packs do not increase base stat, they just give you packs. The stat itself is separate.
     
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    Oops! My bad. So it would be like this?

    @Caelamus
     
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    Yesms. Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus I'm so - so sorry to do this to you. I was really unhappy with some of the abilities I picked as I rushed this update and didn't take the time to think about it. I redid a lot of the profiencies. Hopefully, that's ok!
     

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