Spoiler: More Art By Carlito the chad Basic Information (Required) Shortened Name: Akurgal Abansaddi Full Name: Akurgal Nesrum-Abansaddi Titles Countirh of Pol Qat Age: 39 Sex: Intersex Gender: Fluid (He/They) Race: Eronidas Culture: Polon Sexuality: Pansexual, leans towards male-presenting Core Concept Akurgal is a stoic, but blunt Raggimu raised with honor as a focus in their life as he serves Giru. The raggimu uses the symbols of vasarcon to offer the strength of Giru to those defenseless and the wrath of the Fire Master to those deserving. Spoiler: General Inventory A bag of 50 regals. Cigar tin Steamtek lighter Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 14/14 Strength: 2 Unarmed Pack Polearm Pack Constitution: 3+1(Eronidas Prowess) Light Shielding Pack Heavy Shielding Pack Multi Shielding Pack Bruteforce Training(Free) Wisdom: 0 Dexterity: 0 Magic: 4/Exist Metal Magic Enchant Magic(theme) Space Magic Arcane Magic Charisma: 5 State Diplomat, State Admiral, West Linguist, Mount Husbandry Ritualism Languages Common Vasar West Linguist Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Eronidas Racials Armor Summon Weapon Summon Common Ritualism kit Husbandry Maak-Shield Appearance Information Akurgal has a prosthetic left arm that comes in various versions: Black crystaltech, Teal crystaltech, steamtech, and Hoplastec. Their body is covered in Vasarcon that all in a perpetual state of burning on their skin with one on his forehead that flows like magma in Giru's symbol. [Ritualistic Manifestation] Akurgal is 7'5 Eronidas with a brawny figure, usually contained in Imperial-inspired garbs that take into account the Eronidas clothing style of accentuating their build. He keeps his neck covered with a black steel gorget. Visual Information (Expansion) Akurgal’s upbringing has given them a defined jawline, his forehead is a fair size. their hair is naturally curly with it styled in an undercut Akurgal has spent most of their early years working as a soldier while subjected to his father’s continuous regiment which they continue today. Akurgal voice is deep and raspy, it’s like James Earl Jones's voice, even though it’s raspy its measured tone and slower pace allow it to come off as commanding, but a bit soothing. Life Story Akurgal was born in a Polon within Merredweg to previous Duke Hadad Gishkim of Pol Callant into the Gishkim family. Akurgal spent his teenage years doing his military training in the Polon as tradition for a large Eronidas. His father's first child, he was kept under pressure like many Eronidas children. It was either break or strengthen, Akurgal treated this time as a trial from Giru to temper their strength. The nobleborn was taught by a Raggimu of Giru to spread and guide the strength of those around, they enlisted into the Army to show the strength and gifts of Giru They came to Regalia after their deployment to the vampiric crisis, where they seek to live the Aseradu life of honor.
Approved, though the total should be clarified as 10 from investment and 5 from Racial. You had to of invested 10 into something to receive the racial.
@Caelamus A few changes, all in red. Cliff note: Swapped out whip combat for Shield combat and booped it up to 11 . The physical stat hit and became capped at 60.
These two do not align, why does someone who isn't very religious practicing a more unionist and religion guarded form of tech?
While I'm not going to outright put it into re-review because it doesn't need a full re-review, I will clarify that you shouldn't really be putting that the character is a general or admiral in a character's backstory. This was mostly an error on my part not being aware of the membership of the cabinet IG, but that is rank you should be attaining IG via joining the Marshalry Cabinet and being stationed as that role. While schooling implies the character can serve as a captain or an admiral it does not necessarily make them one by default, you still have to join the Marshalry Cabinet IG and participate in roleplay there. If you want to reach out and do roleplay with the military, you should get in touch with Athelois or find her IG.
@Caelamus Double pings, I was doing some calculating with my points, I had 10 so with bad math. I decided to put them into things and focus more on being a bulwark. Updated in red. Incredibly sorry, my friend.
@Caelamus Heya Cael, I decided to move things around with the arc ending and entering the cabinet. Below is a summary. Summary of changes To commit fully to being a defender character, moved my RB to shield combat Realized I could get a boat from sailing and didn't realize it, edited the backstory to include it. Began learning about the dragon temples.
@Caelamus Moved some points around to move his focus of fist to Bardiche Giving him a slight hobby of cooking
@Acosmism I don't want to be basic Eronidas with 60 phys I added Voluism cause big boy and less phys Bardiche for one-handed for synergy with shield Sorry
@Acosmism Updated for the new update changes in red as I shift some points but will keep 6 points on the side for something. Talent points assigned as well.
You can take this out of your app or put it in a separate spoiler. Personality is no longer required on apps. You can say what you need to say about the character under Core Concept.
@Acosmism Aged Sargon up by a year and has gotten himself a Crystaltech arm so Steamtech isn't needed since he's rich with a emerald arm
Please keep the Steamtech invested for your character's arm -- Crystaltech also cannot be literal Emerald, or appear as any color other than blue/green/purple/pink. I also don't understand why this character is all of a sudden "super rich."
More so a joke that he has green crystal arm now. The reason he had steamtech biotic was to maintain his arm to avoid the prices of other engineers.
To clarify, you can have a crystal tech arm made by someone else (that aesthetically complies), but you need to keep the biotics proficiency regardless.
@Acosmism Psst, I moved around stats to be a better cook and a better sailor since genetics have been removed.
@Acosmism Massive Overhaul Getting away from the crp stats, so I picked up some hobby points after splitting some of my fist and shield combat points. Changes marked in red
@Acosmism No clue if This needs to be reviewed but just in case. I edited Akurgal's backstory which needed one as he is a noble and want that to reflect in his backstory.
@Acosmism Did a monthly little switchy, Akurgal hangs up the engineer weapons and his shield with there being enough warriors(Shield combat and steamtech weapon removed. Also noticed I accidentally went over the point by 6 cause smooth brain.