Played Character Avaineiral Di Epostella

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    • CHARACTER INFORMATION
      • FULL NAME | Avaineiral Asaril di Epostella Bel-Sol Alloren-Aechir
        • BIRTH NAME | Avaineiral Asaril Rilynnlues Bel-Sol Alloren-Aechir
        • TITLE | Count of Epostella
      • RACE | Fin'ullen
        • AGE | 378
        • NAMEDAY | 29th of October
      • SEX | Male
        • GENDER | Male
        • PRONOUNS | He/Him
      • OCCULT | Morrlond Godborn, Void Mageborn
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    • CORE CONCEPT
      • A bastard of the God Morrlond, the Fin'ullen lord has inherited the spark of magic and much more corruption from the prizes of his unexpected birth that has returned to him after his stint as an Archblood in service of the Dragons. A talented mage and shrewd leader, he has absolved much of his loyalties to past empires that he once called home and is now instead focused only on the progress and protection of his new family. Through scientific and magical endeavors, he seeks the secrets of the universe, stopping at nothing to achieve his goals. It should be of no mistake that he follows the general worship of his father in the matter of Evolism, evolving past the need of Estelley and other beliefs.
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    • APPEARANCE INFORMATION
      • Standing at the height of 6'8, with a purposefully crafted muscular body that opposes the idle study he practices in on a daily basis, his skin is of a fair and pale complexion with little to no scarring or blemishes. Instead he is covered in a variety of tattoos based around the sea, the dragons and even Morrlond himself in a more stylistic appreciation naturally, few spots of him that are free to see without the magically infused ink of the Allorn people he had gotten them by. His hair is long with the sides shaved to lead down into something of a mullet, though this is often time instead braided and adorned with a mix of accessories; beads, feathers, ribbons. His clothing is always fully enclosing bodysuits that cling to him and covered by flowing robes that are far looser and matched with many sashes and shoulder capes. While his eyes are a pure sea blue, this is in truth a glamor, as underneath all the magic, the inheritance he has gained from his birth included pure blackened eyes, a show of gills, and even replacing his hair with tentacles.
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    • PROFICIENCIES
      • STRENGTH | 00
        • ↬ N/A
      • CONSTITUTION | 00
        • ↬ N/A
      • MAGIC | 07
        • ↬ Sinistral Puppet, Sinistral Sever, Sinistral Break, Sinistral Leap, Sinistral Implode, Sinistral Execute, Technique Parry
        • Free | Magical Talent, Magic Combat, Chem Talent, Gadget Combat, Sinistral Rage
      • WISDOM | 02
        • ↬ Arcana Shift, Arcana Bolts
        • Free | Arcana Oceana
      • DEXTERITY | 00
        • ↬ N/A
      • FAITH | 05
        • ↬ Hex Defense, Hex Revive, Hex Plot, Hex Choice, Hex Parasite
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    • LANGUAGES
      • ↬ Altalar, Agasi, Sulvaley, Sinnayed, Saan, Katharic, d'Ithania, Dressalo, Common
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    • PLOT HOOKS
      • Count of Epostella | Avaineiral is one of the two heads of the family di Epostella, acting as the current Patriarch whereas his wife, Camilla di Epostella, acts as the current Matriarch. Combined, they act in the better interests of their people and allies, Avaineiral tending to the more technical side of the family where it comes to business dealings, book keeping and general matters of home while Camilla tends to the more personal side of the family, watching over the members and allies with a kind touch and being the general face of the family itself.
      • Elder-Blood Lord | Avaineiral's blood comes from the old Allorn, in the province of Aechir where his family acted as part of the local lords and councils that maintained the cities and districts within. He has taken over the interest of both here and outside the renewed Allorn Empire, where his loyalty is questionable to, opting to make a life for his new family without the worry of old empires coming to collect ancient debts.
      • Godborn Bastard | Born between the conception between his mother, one of the Ladies of Aechir and an Abyssal Horror of Morrlond on a trip to Ivaelle and the subsequent coast, he was born the bastard of a noble woman and a demon from her unfaithfulness to her husband. His birth as a result, was kept mostly a secret, contained within estates until he was able to mask his condition to appear as normal as he could be through the use of illusions. Magic constantly is surrounding the Lord now, to keep hidden the sight of a demon within the peerage where better minds might prevail over possible prejudice.
      • Master Illusionist | Trained in the ways of magic from birth with only the help of his mother's attendants and the libraries to aid him, in his time locked away into the estate and the subsequent centuries out in securing power for himself, Avaineiral has become a master wizard aided by the blood of both sides of his heritage. His focus has taken into the interest of illusions, able to make them incredibly real and affect the natural world as is or able to alter the senses and mind of those he deem to that cannot counter his will. Alongside this mastery over illusion, his study into other schools of magic, including but not limited to; portals, telekinesis and runic mastery have made him a capable combatant and leader over the battlefield.
      • Studied Academic | With centuries of time to delve into his studies, Avaineiral has become an accomplished scholar with no shortage of time to continue this way of life. His area of expertise mostly lies in rituals, demonology and dimensional theory yet he has also taken a hobby in alchemy and biology (Of both beast and humanoid subjects), linguistics and ancient history that focuses on the periods of the Ancient Allorn Empire and the surrounding peoples.
      • Forbidden Knowledge | Over time, Avaineiral has delved into demonology into a more practical degree, both learning summoning and binding rituals to arm himselves with a collection of spirits and demons who act as his attendants, eyes, and bodyguards, utilizing them for most of his protection and combative capabilities where his attention is preferred to be drawn elsewhere.
      • Experienced Leader | While his history outside of Regalia is purposefully clouded to keep his image intact, inside Regalia he has proven himself as a competenant leader in the fields of diplomacy and warfare. While he is not of the same caliber as generals, he is a commander on the frontlines that has saw his service in the Violets, Metropolitan and war over a series of campaigns under a multitude of accomplished generals, leading directly rather than remaining within a tent on matters of battle. On the opposing side of this experience, he has also acted as an agent, advisor and diplomat for various levels of state and nobility, utilizing wit and cunning to see his plans brought forth in the best interest of his allies and himself. Through these matters of state, he has afforded a multitude of successes to a variety of patrons that are worthy of his service, both in and outside of the city that now houses him. Words and secrets after all can prevent the need for war and conflict, and he much rather utilize this than waste resources in unnecessary conflicts.
     
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    Aged down to 35 for a continued co-joined backstory with another character. Lowered points in Sword Combat and completely removed Frontline Command but this change wasn't over ten points so shouldn't need a review but tagging just in case. @Birdsfoot_Violet
     
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    Made a few edits that need to be reviewed please:
    • Rewritten Proficiencies.
    • Added Fin'ullen powers.
    • Added the School of Aranartháï.
    • Added one paragraph to the end of the Life Story to explain he was in the Allorn Empire and will most likely eventually return to Regalia at some point. Probably.
    If I'd also be able to get the comments cleared up so this doesn't have two pages please and thank you.
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    Re-Approved, though this is somewhat still a shelved character, and information on the internal workings of the new Allorn Empire are likely to not be forthcoming for some time.
     
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    Updated to new proficiency system. Added in the four Altalar schools across various points to Life Story where there was time to learn. Needing re-review.
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    Updated a few things to keep up to date:
    • Changed gender to Non-Binary.
    • Altered proficiency points.
      • Lowered Swords from 18 to 15.
      • Removed Shielding.
      • Added 10 Perception Training.
      • Added 1 Instrument Art.
      • Added 1 Cooking Art.
      • Added Voluism.
    • Increased height to 7'6".
    Re-Review in order please. @HydraLana
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    Updated to latest version of Archblood. Avaineiral is still Exist-Corrupted however. Shouldn't require a re-review since it's mostly removing the old abilities and replacing with only 2, but tagging in case. @HydraLana
     
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    After a couple weeks of playing to get a feel for the proficiencies again and bouncing ideas off others, I've come to a conclusion that some proficiencies were ill-suited and didn't match the feel of the character or were simply stacked on with over expansion of the character's niche.
    • Removed two Schooling (Admiral and Riding) while keeping both Commands to hammer down on the fact that he is just meant to be a commander and not a captain/admiral.
    • Removed Roguery as climbing while really tall and having 10 strength training would most likely be rather difficult.
    • Removed 10 Perception. Didn't come much into use.
    • Added 9 into Arcanology. This is to show knowledge gained IC over the years playing him and to be reflected on the sheet again while also hammering in the anti-occult aspect of the Archbloods.
    • Added 4 Shielding. Shielding was used in the past.
    • Removed mentions of the two Schoolings lost with this update in the Life Story while adding on one dot point of what he was doing before returning to Regalia and the fact he got married.
    • Following the updated rules of Linguistics, added 6 points into it to unlock Allorn and Suvial which also unlocked Ancient Altalar due to having Altalar as a base language. Allorn supremacy moments.
    Giving the point changes, this does require a re-review please! @HydraLana
     
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    Well, uh, you're going to have to update those Languages again unfortunately. Tag me once you are done @Vegemiite
     
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    The update does include the addition of the latest rules. Common + Altalar (Born in Solleria) for free with 6 points to unlock Allorn (3 Points) and Suvial (3 Points), which unlocks the extra language Ancient Altalar (Unlocked for having all 3 in a category)! @HydraLana
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    Avaineiral has been turned to a Void Corrupted Archblood through Coren. Switched Manifest Will for Manifest Rage accordingly and updated eye and skin color. Shouldn't require a re-review. @HydraLana
     
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    Updated to fit the new format. Bye bye long life story.
    • Avaineiral has undergone Dread Rebirthing and has come out a Saivalathar.
    • To clarify for the Sex; they have Flux Shift 6 which allows them to shift at all so it is marked as 'Varies' to show this.
    • The two chosen racial powers from the Ability Pool that Kathar have access to are; Emotion Sense 1 and Flux Shift 6. All other racial abilities are from normal Saivalathar.
    • Points entirely updated. I didn't want to focus on combat any more and have only left a small trace of it in as a nod back to when he was Fin'ullen and all the wars he has been part of. The character is now a scholar/diplomat which I plan to keep.
    • Physical Stat calculation for the record since it didn't seem necessary to add to the sheet on the template examples. 4 Glaive + 5 Bodycare + 5 Sailing - 5 Voluism = 9.
    • Altalar and Common are the free languages. Every other language is gained through investment into Linguistics with Ancient Altalar and Samhal being unlocked through investment into the respective languages.
    • Depending on the Arcanology update, there is a possibility I may remove 5 points from Bodycare and 1 point from Glaive to invest into two more packs. But that is entirely dependant on the contents of the update once it is released.
    Requiring re-review. @HydraLana
     
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    Reapproved.
     
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    updated. retconned kathar stuff since it was dumb and brought him back to original concept cause it was better. aesthetics will probably be updated later. maybe
     
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    lil update before i get to playing him
    • removed 1 strength with unarmed
    • removed 1 charisma with pet husbandry
    • added 1 dexterity with brittle shot
    • added 1 magic with light magic
    • changed magic dimension to exist

    need re-review @Caelamus
     
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    Scooping this up. Approved.
     
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    awoooooo
    • it is cahal time
    • 4 commutable points are spent on wind, storm, cosmic, shadow. all of these are magic packs
    • cahal form added. werewolf grrrrr
    need review @Scribbe
     
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    Approved.
     
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    changed shadow magic from commutable points to space magic. i dont know if this needs rereview but just in case i tag!
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    i wanted to have a different way to fight so i edited some stuff and there were also some changes lore wise to packs too obvs
    • Short Blade replaced for Flexible
    • Lunassul replaced for Amontaar (Same thing just different name now)
    • Brittle Shot removed to put Dexterity at 0
    • Removed Light and Sensor (These went to Commutable Points) from Magic, replaced with Water and Wind
    • Added Sand to Magic to put it at 3
    • Removed Wind (This went to Magic) and Storm from Commutable Points, replaced with Light and Sensor
    needs re-review pls @Caelamus
     
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    update time again from lore updates and also new wealth system
    • Avaineiral is now the Count of Rivere-Ise, with his family having come from the Allorn Empire
    • Changed mentions of Ulley in Religion to Elleyon per Estellon update
    • Replaced Volacorum with Deeplore
    • Replaced Mount Husbandry with State Saboteur
    • Edited backstory a lil' for the change in history to foreign nobility. Nothing major just changes to wording to have him always being rich with family having orders from the Allorn
    didnt change points around just the packs so shouldnt need a re-review from the announcement @Caelamus
     
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    now this one do require a re-review i think
    • Removed Sand Magic
    • Added Demon Attendant
    pls and ty @Caelamus
     
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    new magic update came out and i decided i didnt want to split between strength and magic and ended up going full magic instead.
    • Removed 3 from Strength.
    • Added 3 to Magic.
    • Replaced Ancient Speech with State Dignitary in Charisma.
    • Replaced Commutable Points with the new rule that they could not go over the limit in Spell Point Buy.
    need re-review @Caelamus
     
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    i decided i didnt like magic and i found having a lot of prog packs sucked kinda hard. went back to mundane and as a result got rid of cahalism too which is just said to be cured, not retconned. total proficiency rehall and reasoning for hallowtech is because i like the aesthetic and just saying his wife taught it to him. pls re-review @Caelamus
     
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    I'm gonna approve it, but I'm also going to say that learning and using Hollowtech is probably another egg in the basket of the character being pro-Regalia and not pro-Allorn.
     
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    ended up changing to vivitech after talking with others. colours of the tech still black and silver after ticketing to see if they could be changed. just want cyberpunk vibes obviously, but that should help with the whole allorn v regalia stuff too. dont think it requires re-review since its just a branch change but still letting you know regardless @Caelamus
     
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    swapped out state leadership for artificer mechsuit. added lifegiver and chassis patent as specials. need re-review @Caelamus
     
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    Made a few minor changes, and condensed other parts of the app to flow better, or to add what I had forgotten in previous updates. Aesthetics will follow later but for now;
    • Removed Brutalist and Ironheart, to add State Leadership and State Dignitary again. Turns out they're pretty vital to what he needs to actually achieve his concept.
    • Replaced Tactician in Strength, to Skirmisher.
    • Strength lowered from 6 to 5.
    • Constitution lowered from 2 to 1.
    • Charisma increased from 2 to 4.
    • Condensed both Religion and Concept while changing the wording. The details are the exact same, just better worded or removing bits that didn't need to be said.
    • Added which culture of the Fin'ullen he is, the base type, though not included on the app, also follows Teledden influence due to upbringing.
    • Better explained how he has been trained in all State Point-Buys in Life Story.
    Please re-review when able! Thank you @Caelamus
     
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    new lore updates.
    • Changed all the previous State Buy packs to the current iterations.
      • State Leadership became Commander.
      • State Saboteur became Saboteur.
      • State Dignitary became Diplomat.
    • Replaced Scrapper for Archive, with the specialization put in Amontaar Sarvaana naturally.
      • With removing Scrapper, I removed Mindslave and Chassis patent from the specials.
    shouldn't need re-review since under the 5 pack changes from martys announcement @Caelamus
     

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